Tags : | Dubstep | 3.33 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : i did the track in FL 9 by myself. this is like my 3rd song ive made but the only one ive felt like it deservers to be on looperman lol
i used a lot of samples if i could give the people credit for making them i would. but for the life of me i cant remember them all lol

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  1. GabrielAngelStark
    GabrielAngelStark on Fri 3rd Jun 2011 - 12 years ago

    Im a good lyrical Spitter send me this bet and I'll sen you the copy of us

  2. MaxJC
    MaxJC on Thu 2nd Jun 2011 - 12 years ago

    I can see the effort put into the instrumental but make sure to take in consideration every changes to be made mentioned by your fellow loopers. Keep it up, do not rely on video game sampling but have fun with it.

  3. digitalSKYY
    digitalSKYY on Thu 2nd Jun 2011 - 12 years ago

    You have some awesome melodies and progressions! The sound quality isnt the best. Needs to be EQed but it also may just be the way it was recorded through.
    The drums are a bit to loud in the mix.
    Your wobbles need some work when it comes to production.
    And that sucks because like i said, you have some awesome melodies and progressions and wobbles. Its just the production value of it. Thats your downfall.

    I would say sit down and just work on that for a couple hours alone and see what you can accomplish.

    Good luck!

    Keep it up!

    Cheers
    Kenny Lee

  4. Zelab
    Zelab on Thu 2nd Jun 2011 - 12 years ago

    nice shuffle rythm really makes you move haha!
    the bass needs allot of workin. maybe less distortion

    anyway keep trying dude this has potential :)

    Zelab

  5. Mosaic
    Mosaic on Thu 2nd Jun 2011 - 12 years ago

    Hey Weavie

    Firstly welcome to the loop, best place to learn and get feedback...

    Ok to the track, first want to say Dubstep is not my genre, have listened to your piece a couple of times now, you have some very nice sounds and idea's in the track, tech side of things, some levels seem little high, which seems to be causing a little distortion, plus piece seems very dis-jointed with all the breaks, it is like listening to a few tracks at one time, but not working together as one piece, understand what I mean?
    I think with the great array of sounds etc you are using if you could get it to work together better, this would be a very good piece, something special about the choice of synths/beats etc you have used, which are pleasing to the ear, but would be better if they worked better together and cleaner..
    Hope you have another look at it, if you do please let me know so I can check it out again..

    Oh another thing, and I could be completely wrong here, maybe it is the Moderator coming out in me still lol, seems like you might and I say might have a couple of samples in this piece, which could poss breach copyright, I feel when listening to the piece that I have heard them before somewhere, in a commerical piece or game, like I say I could be completely wrong, just copyright infringement is frowned upon on site, as it leads to tracks being suspended, it is something you said in the intro in the forum thread you posted,(if my song dosent comply to the rules ill take it down). I had listen to your track before reading your thread, so it makes me wonder, if what I have said is correct, hopefully I am wrong...Peace mate...Estefano...

  6. sn76
    sn76 on Thu 2nd Jun 2011 - 12 years ago

    The sound quality's not the greatest to be honest. The intro doesn't seem to blend with the beat properly and neither does the bassline... but that said it's a good idea .... keep working at ur music ... you should have heard some of my early efforts !

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