Man Vs Himself Ft Broken Scythe (Clenched) - MrPalabra

Nice track and as the others already mentioned, strong message projected through it.No worries; there's always place for improvement vocal mix-wise but still a strong way to start in the loop - glad i came thru; cheers!

YeaH bro, telling you, it came out sick. If we get a better mic we'll really have some quality on our hands.
Dnt forget to give revs out when you can. You'll get noticed more and your song will go on the featured section in the top right.

BTW, Manzet just posted a new track. Its sick. Look for it on my reviews out. He said to tell you a lot of the things he mentioned were used in that track.

Realy aprieciated; a lot of emotion put in to the track... I can't understand you'll what a better mic for recording your voice, but the melodies are great and it's got a super beat; I mean I've made quite a few hip-hop tracks now but I've never managed to make something as nice as this,...

WELCOME TO THE SITE ! BIENVENIDO PAPA ! well enough said sorry if don't read spanish, anyway your doing good and this is a good start to losing the fear of been reviewed, hope you came here looking to to be criticized in a good or bad way cause if not , well you figure it out' Nice track ,good song BUT YOU NEED TO WORK ON the mic POPs in the vocals ! GOOD LUCK my friend !

First I Would Ask How Are You Recording Your Vocals? Are You Using A Daw To Record Your Vocals? And What Kind Of Mic Are You Using? Nice Tune Though FAM...Real Chilled Out Song Yo... It Seemed Like Maybe You Need A Pop Filter And A Better Mic, But That's Just My Opinion... Also Stack Your Vocals It Helps For Real Yo... Go To Youtube And Look Up A Kat Named Bobbygrayproductions A Lot Of What I Use In Pro Tools I Got From Him...And It Doesn't Matter If You Don't Have Pro Tools Because You Can Use Those Settings Inside Any Computer Recording Software That Allows You To Add Eq's And Fx's To Your Vocals... But Keep Grinding Fam Your On The Right Path Yo...

Manzet

Nice track man. it felt like your flow got better and better as the track progressed. Maybe the snare could have popped a little more but thats just a personal thing. Keep up the good work. CF