Listen To What I Do Hip Hop Song By Yuneek At Looperman.com

Nice Track you definitely have the ear!
Some things I've found that that help with my tracks could help you with your mixing.

I take each sound, (or group) and create a shelf above and below each sound to cut out muddiness and to avoid sounds from running into each other.

Just take out the highs and lows that are not relevant and eq the rest as you wish.

For some reason I always cut the extreme lows and highs a little LESS than I "feel" is right. That usually makes up for my "ear fatigue", and when I listen to it later with fresh ears it usually comes out right.

One other thing. Bring Up The Vocals! That S#*t is Tight we should hear it!
Again these are just tips that have helped Me, but I think you would benefit. I've listened to a few of your track and I like your style. Just do a lot of research on mixing and your mastering will get better. also read the tutorials section of this site it's Very Good for general knowledge.

Keep Doin' It.

J.P.

It's a decent track I must say, however it seems like your voice gets lost in the mix when the bass kicks in. I can hear what your saying, but the bass takes the show when it comes in. You wan't people to hear what your saying because you did take the time to put the together the lyrics right? Please don't take it negatively, I just thought if you were gonna spit, people should pay attention to you. Otherwise they'll forget about what your saying and just focus on the beat.