I liked the vocals (although the morbid message in the lyrics...how are you anyway?!?).
There is a melody in your vocals that could be emphasized with the synths even more. But what a great job with all the real hardware!
I listened twice and yeah, it's catchy.
Hey, thanks much for the comment! Adding the melodic synths was kind of an afterthought, but I see what you mean. It's fun to work with real instruments on occasion! Glad you enjoyed it!
Vocals, vocals, vocals - you need vocals to this.
It could be a really awesome house tune with the right vocals.
I liked it already but a good uplifting vox would make a big difference.
A haunting feel to this track. As if listened after several sleepless nights...
I was waiting for a resolution of some kind, a beat or something but it really works this way also.
Thanks SJ! Yeah I kinda wanted a little mysterious feel to this piece using synth pads. Didn't really want to ruin the mood using drums or other instruments. Appreciate the comment and lending an ear to this. ^____^
I liked this!
Would like to have some more piano or synth on a higher note - maybe an octave up to make a contrast to the darker melody? Or bring out the piano starting at 1.27 a bit more? But really - it's enjoyable this way already.
Well, you are annoyingly good at producing - this is a brilliant piece of music already. It's going to be very easy to place a nice vocal on this one (if that's what you intend to do) so good luck with it and keep producing.
thanks - you were the first to listen to my tracks and we have somewhat parallel evolution. I'm still learning but hopefully evolving. Your tracks have steadily improved hope I can meet the standard.
AWESOME beginning with the piano (can I please marry the pianoplayer in the next life??????)and the cello comes in just beautifully!
Really a masterful piece all together.
Thank you so much for posting comments. Much appreciated. The piano player is EZKeys so I guess any long term relationship might be difficult!! The cello is my good friend Steve Wright who helped so much with this track.
Thanks! Yeah it's me singing, my voice isn't what it used to be, or maybe it never was... hey wait... Weekend here we come! I appreciate the listen and comment!
So - you are currently 12 years old? And already create this kind of music?
Good for you! You have got some serious talent, apparently. This is not bad at all, to say the least.
on Dark Sky by Spivkurl
There is a melody in your vocals that could be emphasized with the synths even more. But what a great job with all the real hardware!
I listened twice and yeah, it's catchy.
on Lost Souls by Ensam
on Between two worlds - 148 BPM by DomLEV
It could be a really awesome house tune with the right vocals.
I liked it already but a good uplifting vox would make a big difference.
on DJ GUA - I Got It ft Luizor by DJGUA
on Radixx - Reaching Out by RadixxGermany
A really good track - great job. I love the melody, the vox and the beat - Everything is just perfect.
on No Sleep Tonight-featuring Bunnie Rabbit by dansjoy4
I was waiting for a resolution of some kind, a beat or something but it really works this way also.
on Amost Spring by UChris
The flute really lifts the melody, very nice alltogether.
Enjoyed this a lot.
on dance on piano part 2 by djmfl
Would like to have some more piano or synth on a higher note - maybe an octave up to make a contrast to the darker melody? Or bring out the piano starting at 1.27 a bit more? But really - it's enjoyable this way already.
on Hot Epic Hip Hop Beat 2013 by SSPaul
on Funk you by davesmith1983
Nice beat here, cool effects or what ever it's called.
It would even work on the dancefloor.
on Moonchild by RomyHarmony
I suppose that is the primary goal of every musician ;)
on Flying High by brillbilly
I just enjoy what i try to do.!
The best thing about making music for me is how if i dont like a sound of something,i can just remove and add another,lol
No training needed,just enjoyment in putting sounds together!
Life love n unity to you and your loved ones!
on Tears of Annuin -The Last Widow- New Lyrics III by SoraSolitudine
You go girl - great work here. I also hope you manage to upload and share your Acapellas here soon.
Well, about the acapellas, I don't know if someday I'll be able to upload.
Thanks again for listening and comment! :D
on Supermoon by joshweps
Great work on this one.
on Indiantechno10 by clindsay
Nice rhythm change in the end.
The best one of your tracks here, so far!
on A Wishlist by natalieilatan
This is great - a really good dubstep track! And the melody is just awesome, liked this a lot.
Good job, girl!
on I dont need you featuring Stephanie Kay by RichieWinn
Really a masterful piece all together.
Thank you so much for posting comments. Much appreciated. The piano player is EZKeys so I guess any long term relationship might be difficult!! The cello is my good friend Steve Wright who helped so much with this track.
Glad you liked it.
Richie
on I Just Wanna Luv U revised by Antranita
on Alex B - Muisc makes you lose control by axyonn
Loved the intro.
on Bohemian Spirit preview by MissAnghell
on Crazy nights by johnnyproducing
And a cool track all the way through.
on this day by serban25us
But really - hip hop?
on Cyclops by Darkreine
on Flaming by Spivkurl
Is it you singing? The beat gets me right in to a weekend mode - dancing shoes on! (...But maybe I should have stayed home????)
Loved it!
on Reflex- Flashing lights by Zpoxel
Good for you! You have got some serious talent, apparently. This is not bad at all, to say the least.