This has all the stuff to make this a bomb, just needs some candy on top
to give it a New Flavour a guitar playing the line big chords with just a touch
more to enhance the Melody...Shakers in spots would work to...
It's a real good mix, so no big work there just keep it clean when adding...
I see you have some keys that sound like a guitar, running the horn line...cool
A real guitar dancing on that, just touching on some of your vocal line would
really set this off...
Now all you need is some B/V's singing " You are wrong about me and my Baby"
Mind you they would be in the same range as the keys, girl voices would work
great...with solid harmonies....
It's got the groove, now you need that little something to make it all move...
This is what it is right here....
Man love to drop a guitar on this, slick Vocals Monster Range and sound
Vocally got the hole package right here...
Just need some candy on top, to get that wall grindin pop you know
late night party red light on and all they play is slow jams...
Back in the day that's the way we played, anyway...
You've asked for Collabs I'd like to bring something to the table, I'll be getting back to you soon...
thanks a lot for listening to my track. i would love to hear what you add to this track, so go ahead and do what you want to it and let me know when your finished. we can work on future projects as well. thanks
Man.....This is Maaaaaaad good, that Bass makes the hole thing happen
Love that drop....
Need some lyrics now, this is funny because I posted a track on another
site called "Homage to Mandela" and it's more of a Calypso groove as
opposed to a Reggae like yours...
This I really enjoyed, very well done....
Good song has all the elements, nice voice she has I do find the drums
EQ is a little top loaded and a touch too much up front, her voice should
control the front line not the drums...
Thank you man for the review and feedback, have lowered the drums a fair amount, and have to agree it does sound better and fuller now, like I said in the earlier reply, been bit of a mongrel to do, especially as it is not my referred genre to do, thank you for the review, pleased you enjoyed the listen, will head your way tomorrow...Peace n much Respect Mosaic...
Nice track goes well with the voice, would've been nice if you had
pushed her voice up just a touch more, it wouldn't have sounded
lost in the back of the track, would've given the track that much
more pop, when you got to the top...
But over all nice piece of work...
Solid vocal very real, I like the simplicity of it all moves like it
wants to go somewhere...
A few adds in the same vain, would knock this out of the park
like a slick guitar dancing in the shadows of your voice....
And I would put your voice, just a little more on the front line
almost at the same level as the spoken word....
Or switch it up Big Girls should not be the refrain but the lead line
that is the story to be told...
Nice work though, lots and lots of potential....this one..
Cool track... Clindsay...Lots of nice stuff going on with flavour...
Wars and rumours of War, but nobody wants to die...LOL
If you are interested in being on the radio, or selling your tunes
by using the radio, then you would have a problem other then
that....Play your Music or Make your Music like you want...
Radio has been crunching Music, for as long as I can remember
and that's been a long time...They are trying to take control of the
air waves again, now that they have lost it to the internet...
Yes Stations are on the net. but they are more in line with us then
the stations outside the box, they are the ones doing the most crying...
Because most of them are still running on grandpa's gear, and don't really
want to upgrade so they figure lets make them downgrade so we don't
blow up our stuff...Speakers...Amps and the like..
cheaper for us..
TG - thanks for your comments - not sure I understand the bits after but it may be academic since this is produced with other people's loops and could not be reproduced without permissions etc. I'm just a hobbyist havin' fun. Again, thanks.
-clidsay
on Thankful by FastFunghi
You hit the nail on the head with this one...
Your tech work is top shelf, style and feel is very real...
That's what it is right here....
Peace...TG.
on Radio Illuminati Feat Luizor EIM - City Lights by radioilluminati
off enough to make it right...
Outstandingly done...
Peace..
I'm real close on the other one "Chocolate" ... :-)
on Sidestepping In The Rain by RealProblemShuckers
Really good over all feel...And mix...
Well done...
on Right In by Diskonnect
Nice 1...
on Running For Love by lilusher803boy
Nice work....
on Untitled - Sam French by SamFrench666
on The Reason by basetime
on I Cant Get You by TonyPowell
to give it a New Flavour a guitar playing the line big chords with just a touch
more to enhance the Melody...Shakers in spots would work to...
It's a real good mix, so no big work there just keep it clean when adding...
I see you have some keys that sound like a guitar, running the horn line...cool
A real guitar dancing on that, just touching on some of your vocal line would
really set this off...
Really nice work almost radio ready...
Peace...TG.
on Say What You Will About Me by Darkreine
Mind you they would be in the same range as the keys, girl voices would work
great...with solid harmonies....
It's got the groove, now you need that little something to make it all move...
Never the less nicely done...
Peace....TG.
on MAKE THAT NEEDLE BOUNCE by beerling1970
great work...
Nicely done...
Peace...TG.
Steve
on Of darkness and stars by johnnyproducing
I...LIKE IT...
Peace...TG.
on its alright1 demo by larrybarrow31
Man love to drop a guitar on this, slick Vocals Monster Range and sound
Vocally got the hole package right here...
Just need some candy on top, to get that wall grindin pop you know
late night party red light on and all they play is slow jams...
Back in the day that's the way we played, anyway...
You've asked for Collabs I'd like to bring something to the table, I'll be getting back to you soon...
Peace....TG.
on Mandela by VicaMOOR
Love that drop....
Need some lyrics now, this is funny because I posted a track on another
site called "Homage to Mandela" and it's more of a Calypso groove as
opposed to a Reggae like yours...
This I really enjoyed, very well done....
Peace..TG.
on PTB- Press That Button EP by Keen5003
With all the elements to do so....
Peace...TG.
on Circles Never Open by Mosaic
EQ is a little top loaded and a touch too much up front, her voice should
control the front line not the drums...
Otherwise this is a very nice piece of work ....
Peace...TG.
Thank you man for the review and feedback, have lowered the drums a fair amount, and have to agree it does sound better and fuller now, like I said in the earlier reply, been bit of a mongrel to do, especially as it is not my referred genre to do, thank you for the review, pleased you enjoyed the listen, will head your way tomorrow...Peace n much Respect Mosaic...
on Snow Rhymes by surya94
Solid piece of work...
Peace...TG.
im glad u liked it...
on AZZYKO - GAME OVER by AZZYKO
to blowing speakers or ear drums maybe....No.. :-)
Cool stuff keep doing what your doing...
on For a minute ft Charlie Rose by tbeck
pushed her voice up just a touch more, it wouldn't have sounded
lost in the back of the track, would've given the track that much
more pop, when you got to the top...
But over all nice piece of work...
Peace....TG.
on See Under Sea - Feat Sanna Hartfield by midiman007
Peace...TG.
on Heartstrings by Resonance19
Well done...
on Sit back by janis71
Been a while ago this and your skills have greatly improved, never the less
I like the flavour....
on Repetoire by Jeffiedillard
wants to go somewhere...
A few adds in the same vain, would knock this out of the park
like a slick guitar dancing in the shadows of your voice....
And I would put your voice, just a little more on the front line
almost at the same level as the spoken word....
Or switch it up Big Girls should not be the refrain but the lead line
that is the story to be told...
Nice work though, lots and lots of potential....this one..
Peace..TG.
on JUST LIKE IT IS by GalanticMusic
somewhere to go...
Hope you get there...
Nicely done...
on classic by benjizo
over all it works....
Good job...TG.
on Bhangratechno2 by clindsay
Wars and rumours of War, but nobody wants to die...LOL
If you are interested in being on the radio, or selling your tunes
by using the radio, then you would have a problem other then
that....Play your Music or Make your Music like you want...
Radio has been crunching Music, for as long as I can remember
and that's been a long time...They are trying to take control of the
air waves again, now that they have lost it to the internet...
Yes Stations are on the net. but they are more in line with us then
the stations outside the box, they are the ones doing the most crying...
Because most of them are still running on grandpa's gear, and don't really
want to upgrade so they figure lets make them downgrade so we don't
blow up our stuff...Speakers...Amps and the like..
cheaper for us..
Don't get me started...
Peace......TG.
-clidsay