Memory Lane...That's when a lyric & Music had something real to say...
At some point, it will be headed back that way but not today...
Gotta go dig out some of my old stuff now...
Larry...This is a link to the track (Mind Benders) keep things real simple
left lot of room for Vocal embellishment on the harmonies that are already
there...: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162459
I can see this in a tropical setting film wise...
A thumb piano or marombas would work, well in this
I have a Thumb Piano and was just messing around
in spots it would take it deeper into the Jungle with Flavour...
Thank you very much for your comment. A thumb piano is a rather interesting instrument indeed. It would be the perfect replacement for the harp i used in the last bit. In fact, that might be the instrument i was looking for this whole time. Nevertheless i hope you enjoyed my song.
I think it's Mike MacDonald or at least he sang on it... Can't be sure...
But this track was at the top of the charts, for a good while and AM stations
still play it to death all across the Country...
I like the twist on this, that technique has been used many times and it works
you've just got to find the right way, to hook it up...
Maaad... Vocals harmonies are solid, the mix is great in the headphones
once you get a handle on that program you'll be hooking things up, just
like you've always wanted to... :-)...Big Fun...Coming...
Some of it sounds really good but there are, some harmonic mis-placements
in the vocals the keys are playing minors and the voice is doing majors, that
maybe the other way around, never the less...
You've put the loops together well, but the vocals have a problem in the
harmonic story they tell...Truth be told...
Thanks my friend, its a track i was working on, trying out my new computer, a apple desktop, but anyways, feel free to do what you want to it, hopefully i can add this one if no one wants it. thanks, larry
Good project lots of feel in her voice, and your track moved very
nicely along with her...
Gave her a comfortable blanket of flavour to rap her self in...
Nice track super production, this move in a jazzy kinda way...
Her voice is tuned to the moon, but there are those that like
that kinda stuff...
Some how!!!.. To me it sounds like they are hiding, something
funky about their voice...
But the Music track really works very well...
So good of you to listen and post comments. I do appreciate it.
Yeah, a bit jazzy is cool and it was that kind of laid back understated feel I wanted on the track. Having a voice tuned to the moon is infinitely better than having it tuned to Uranus!!
Woooow now this is nice, the keys beckon for a big guitar to come along
for the ride...
If you don't mind I'd like to give it a shot, just to see what I hit...???
I'll keep it simple and real close to the melody, but you'll know it there...
Don't delete good sketches, you paint over them with different colours
that alone, could change the whole picture... :-)
You have a good voice, different strong with a good tone...
The trick to singing, is use what you've got don't go outside your
voice box...If you get my drift....
Had to come back to check it out again...Well Done...
Very cool track ...My Man
Really like how you put this together, off the top I felt her voice was a little
low in the mix, but as she gets going it does increase in level...
For me I like to give the vocal control of the front line, it's about the lyric
in a singing song, the Music is just along for the ride
" The Car she sits in " if you understand my point...
Your Music bed track Man, is very good tight and feels real good...I LIKE IT...
Keep up the good work...
Solid piece of work my Man...
Groove is fresh moves with style, on point...
The guitar is hooked up, right in the spot it should be, but I can
tell you had some editing things, not being a guitar player you
wouldn't notice...A few lines in the solo end on the wrong note, I can
see you were locked in on the time thing " Intro-1st solo line" just a
touch too short to be believable, it sounds like it's edited...And you
use it a few times...that's the hook...so you really want to lock that in
I'd chop that again, cause you are in the ballpark...
>>>>OR>>>>
If you want to hang that note, you could add a longer delay at a low
level blending into the strings...
You can let that slide...If you put some voices over that, on top
of the beat, below would make that stand out a lot more...
Very nice start to a cool track...Man...
Thanks TG..You right man .I wouldn't notice those things,its crazy.I wish I had your expertise and Knowledge.Thanks for pointing it out man.I will look into it.
Cool track...Yep that's what it was, then looking at it now the music today
is still not that far away...
It's still about the bass drum drop and efx moving in and out with a simple
bass line...
I was looking for a moog sound to come in with a maaaad solo, but this
is very cool and well done....Nice one...FR
Thanks, I suppose I could try and put a moog solo on it but since I just pencil everything in it's really time consuming doing solo's. Maybe one day i'll get a decent keyboard and learn how to play it.
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your opinion.
FR
Super voice with a solid bed track, a few little dings & pings but nothing
or no one is perfect...
Never the less this is top shelf stuff, has lots of cinematic flavour yep...
This is a very, very nice piece of work. solid production...
A spot or 2 things just get in the way of each other, but not in a bad way...
Everything is so clean, that they just stick out harmonically to my ear
anyway...
But over all it's top shelf stuff, a Highway Roller 4 sure...
Hey TG..thanks for the great review mate!!...I've updated the track with a few slight mixing changes on advisement from the cool people of Looperman like yourself!!!...I'm glad you enjoyed the track and again thank you from Detlef,Steve and myself..cheers Dave :)
Don't let nobody fool you, this is really nice...
I would've not used the tuner on your lead vocal, the harmonies are cool
because their lines are short and to the point...
Your vocal didn't really need any help, it distorts you diction "what you are saying"...I know it helped you hit, some of those notes but I think you
could've done it, on your own and knocked this out of the park...
You can't hide behind that thing for ever, with your voice it should be just
a tool (that your voice don't need) but to sharpen a flat tone in a voice...
Not to become the voice...Just to much stuff on something that is already
really good...Believe me!!! This is just my observation...
on With You-Remix by srob1234
Peace...TG.
on Got to be there snippet by larrybarrow31
At some point, it will be headed back that way but not today...
Gotta go dig out some of my old stuff now...
Larry...This is a link to the track (Mind Benders) keep things real simple
left lot of room for Vocal embellishment on the harmonies that are already
there...: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162459
on Infragilis - Ophidia in Herba or Hidden Serpent by Infragilis
A thumb piano or marombas would work, well in this
I have a Thumb Piano and was just messing around
in spots it would take it deeper into the Jungle with Flavour...
Very nicely done...
Peace...TG
on human 80s remix by larrybarrow31
on dETOXIFY yO mIND by Twanna1
What ever Rings Your Bell young lady, very nicely done this is...
Peace...TG.
Thank you my friend for your appreciation of the track.
Have a great one!!
Twanna
on human 80s remix by larrybarrow31
But this track was at the top of the charts, for a good while and AM stations
still play it to death all across the Country...
I like the twist on this, that technique has been used many times and it works
you've just got to find the right way, to hook it up...
Maaad... Vocals harmonies are solid, the mix is great in the headphones
once you get a handle on that program you'll be hooking things up, just
like you've always wanted to... :-)...Big Fun...Coming...
Peace...TG
on Feel it by s10343068
in the vocals the keys are playing minors and the voice is doing majors, that
maybe the other way around, never the less...
You've put the loops together well, but the vocals have a problem in the
harmonic story they tell...Truth be told...
Peace...TG.
on hold me down instrumental by larrybarrow31
With the right lyric, could go to the top of the charts... :-)
I'm just about ready to post "Mind Benders" I will keep you informed
on what's going on...
I really like this one for sure...
Peace...TG.
on Better By Morning featuring Kara Hesse by Fofote
nicely along with her...
Gave her a comfortable blanket of flavour to rap her self in...
Very nice...
Peace...TG.
on Stay featuring Farisha Haque by RichieWinn
Her voice is tuned to the moon, but there are those that like
that kinda stuff...
Some how!!!.. To me it sounds like they are hiding, something
funky about their voice...
But the Music track really works very well...
So good of you to listen and post comments. I do appreciate it.
Yeah, a bit jazzy is cool and it was that kind of laid back understated feel I wanted on the track. Having a voice tuned to the moon is infinitely better than having it tuned to Uranus!!
Thanks again
Richie
on Mind benders beat by larrybarrow31
for the ride...
If you don't mind I'd like to give it a shot, just to see what I hit...???
I'll keep it simple and real close to the melody, but you'll know it there...
Don't delete good sketches, you paint over them with different colours
that alone, could change the whole picture... :-)
Peace...TG.
on Cant Run From The Truth by RentAReefer
on fusion7 ft ferryterry Janis71 by promenade2239
Me myself could hear a few more guitar lines, in places but that's
my taste...
Sounds like you had fun doing this one, because it's so nicely done...
I REALLY LIKE IT>>>
Peace...TG.
on Waiting by Jeffiedillard
With a voice like that, you can almost make anything sound good...
I really like this start, a chop here and there with a little somum-somum
could make this ready for the highway...
Got your seatbelt on... ?
If you don't mind...I'd like to look closer...
Peace...TG.
on Pain You Will Never Know by ScottB55
The trick to singing, is use what you've got don't go outside your
voice box...If you get my drift....
Had to come back to check it out again...Well Done...
Peace...TG.
Cheers,
Scott
on Tearing MySelf by samern
Really like how you put this together, off the top I felt her voice was a little
low in the mix, but as she gets going it does increase in level...
For me I like to give the vocal control of the front line, it's about the lyric
in a singing song, the Music is just along for the ride
" The Car she sits in " if you understand my point...
Your Music bed track Man, is very good tight and feels real good...I LIKE IT...
Keep up the good work...
Peace...TG.
thanks a lot
i got you idea about the vocal and surly i'll consider
and let the driver drive soooo crazy :D
with appreciation
Samer
on Pain You Will Never Know by ScottB55
Hit the nail on the head with this one...
Needs a little some, some to lock it all together...
Peace...TG.
Cheers,
Scott
on Final Chapter Instrumental by benjizo
Groove is fresh moves with style, on point...
The guitar is hooked up, right in the spot it should be, but I can
tell you had some editing things, not being a guitar player you
wouldn't notice...A few lines in the solo end on the wrong note, I can
see you were locked in on the time thing " Intro-1st solo line" just a
touch too short to be believable, it sounds like it's edited...And you
use it a few times...that's the hook...so you really want to lock that in
I'd chop that again, cause you are in the ballpark...
>>>>OR>>>>
If you want to hang that note, you could add a longer delay at a low
level blending into the strings...
You can let that slide...If you put some voices over that, on top
of the beat, below would make that stand out a lot more...
Very nice start to a cool track...Man...
Peace...TG.
on Old School Flavours by FreeRadical
Cool track...Yep that's what it was, then looking at it now the music today
is still not that far away...
It's still about the bass drum drop and efx moving in and out with a simple
bass line...
I was looking for a moog sound to come in with a maaaad solo, but this
is very cool and well done....Nice one...FR
Peace...TG.
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your opinion.
FR
on When You by VickyDan
Super voice with a solid bed track, a few little dings & pings but nothing
or no one is perfect...
Never the less this is top shelf stuff, has lots of cinematic flavour yep...
Top Shelf...
Peace...TG.
on HARLEQUIN by Planetjazzbass
A spot or 2 things just get in the way of each other, but not in a bad way...
Everything is so clean, that they just stick out harmonically to my ear
anyway...
But over all it's top shelf stuff, a Highway Roller 4 sure...
Outstandingly done...Dave...
Peace...TG.
on Be Your Boyfriend by TRSTAR
I would've not used the tuner on your lead vocal, the harmonies are cool
because their lines are short and to the point...
Your vocal didn't really need any help, it distorts you diction "what you are saying"...I know it helped you hit, some of those notes but I think you
could've done it, on your own and knocked this out of the park...
You can't hide behind that thing for ever, with your voice it should be just
a tool (that your voice don't need) but to sharpen a flat tone in a voice...
Not to become the voice...Just to much stuff on something that is already
really good...Believe me!!! This is just my observation...
It's a really good track otherwise...
Peace...TG.
on Black Magic by AxelStPatience
I'm sure there will be a few that will jump on this...
Solid piece of work...
Peace...TG.
on Woodoo Child by Nightingale
Never the less it all works in a cool way...
Peace...TG.
on Signs - featuring Danke-Bang a Drum-remix by clindsay