You have a good voice, different strong with a good tone...
The trick to singing, is use what you've got don't go outside your
voice box...If you get my drift....
Had to come back to check it out again...Well Done...
Very cool track ...My Man
Really like how you put this together, off the top I felt her voice was a little
low in the mix, but as she gets going it does increase in level...
For me I like to give the vocal control of the front line, it's about the lyric
in a singing song, the Music is just along for the ride
" The Car she sits in " if you understand my point...
Your Music bed track Man, is very good tight and feels real good...I LIKE IT...
Keep up the good work...
Solid piece of work my Man...
Groove is fresh moves with style, on point...
The guitar is hooked up, right in the spot it should be, but I can
tell you had some editing things, not being a guitar player you
wouldn't notice...A few lines in the solo end on the wrong note, I can
see you were locked in on the time thing " Intro-1st solo line" just a
touch too short to be believable, it sounds like it's edited...And you
use it a few times...that's the hook...so you really want to lock that in
I'd chop that again, cause you are in the ballpark...
>>>>OR>>>>
If you want to hang that note, you could add a longer delay at a low
level blending into the strings...
You can let that slide...If you put some voices over that, on top
of the beat, below would make that stand out a lot more...
Very nice start to a cool track...Man...
Thanks TG..You right man .I wouldn't notice those things,its crazy.I wish I had your expertise and Knowledge.Thanks for pointing it out man.I will look into it.
Cool track...Yep that's what it was, then looking at it now the music today
is still not that far away...
It's still about the bass drum drop and efx moving in and out with a simple
bass line...
I was looking for a moog sound to come in with a maaaad solo, but this
is very cool and well done....Nice one...FR
Thanks, I suppose I could try and put a moog solo on it but since I just pencil everything in it's really time consuming doing solo's. Maybe one day i'll get a decent keyboard and learn how to play it.
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your opinion.
FR
Super voice with a solid bed track, a few little dings & pings but nothing
or no one is perfect...
Never the less this is top shelf stuff, has lots of cinematic flavour yep...
This is a very, very nice piece of work. solid production...
A spot or 2 things just get in the way of each other, but not in a bad way...
Everything is so clean, that they just stick out harmonically to my ear
anyway...
But over all it's top shelf stuff, a Highway Roller 4 sure...
Hey TG..thanks for the great review mate!!...I've updated the track with a few slight mixing changes on advisement from the cool people of Looperman like yourself!!!...I'm glad you enjoyed the track and again thank you from Detlef,Steve and myself..cheers Dave :)
Don't let nobody fool you, this is really nice...
I would've not used the tuner on your lead vocal, the harmonies are cool
because their lines are short and to the point...
Your vocal didn't really need any help, it distorts you diction "what you are saying"...I know it helped you hit, some of those notes but I think you
could've done it, on your own and knocked this out of the park...
You can't hide behind that thing for ever, with your voice it should be just
a tool (that your voice don't need) but to sharpen a flat tone in a voice...
Not to become the voice...Just to much stuff on something that is already
really good...Believe me!!! This is just my observation...
A little abstract in it's design, but has a style...
Just a touch off the wall for me, must say the production
is tastefully done...
Needing a few more harmonic connections melodies for my taste...
But It's all good, nothing but some Music from where I stand..
Oh no, feel free to nitpick as much as you like or simply pick out some aspects of the track that you liked. That would probably be more interesting to read than “Cool track Man”.
I’m interested in people’s reactions to different sections as feedback keeps me thinking and helps me improve.
Oh, and I could and do nitpick, which means there are sections I know can be improved so I will go back sometime and do just that.
Very Very Nice song, heartfelt in your delivery and style...
Now Most... Would call this Country, but to me it's nothing
but a real good song, sung in a very believable way...
Guitar levels are low, still it's in the right place and I like
the tone...
Very well done, keep doing it... He don't give people voices like
this for nothing...
on Cant Run From The Truth by RentAReefer
on fusion7 ft ferryterry Janis71 by promenade2239
Me myself could hear a few more guitar lines, in places but that's
my taste...
Sounds like you had fun doing this one, because it's so nicely done...
I REALLY LIKE IT>>>
Peace...TG.
on Waiting by Jeffiedillard
With a voice like that, you can almost make anything sound good...
I really like this start, a chop here and there with a little somum-somum
could make this ready for the highway...
Got your seatbelt on... ?
If you don't mind...I'd like to look closer...
Peace...TG.
on Pain You Will Never Know by ScottB55
The trick to singing, is use what you've got don't go outside your
voice box...If you get my drift....
Had to come back to check it out again...Well Done...
Peace...TG.
Cheers,
Scott
on Tearing MySelf by samern
Really like how you put this together, off the top I felt her voice was a little
low in the mix, but as she gets going it does increase in level...
For me I like to give the vocal control of the front line, it's about the lyric
in a singing song, the Music is just along for the ride
" The Car she sits in " if you understand my point...
Your Music bed track Man, is very good tight and feels real good...I LIKE IT...
Keep up the good work...
Peace...TG.
thanks a lot
i got you idea about the vocal and surly i'll consider
and let the driver drive soooo crazy :D
with appreciation
Samer
on Pain You Will Never Know by ScottB55
Hit the nail on the head with this one...
Needs a little some, some to lock it all together...
Peace...TG.
Cheers,
Scott
on Final Chapter Instrumental by benjizo
Groove is fresh moves with style, on point...
The guitar is hooked up, right in the spot it should be, but I can
tell you had some editing things, not being a guitar player you
wouldn't notice...A few lines in the solo end on the wrong note, I can
see you were locked in on the time thing " Intro-1st solo line" just a
touch too short to be believable, it sounds like it's edited...And you
use it a few times...that's the hook...so you really want to lock that in
I'd chop that again, cause you are in the ballpark...
>>>>OR>>>>
If you want to hang that note, you could add a longer delay at a low
level blending into the strings...
You can let that slide...If you put some voices over that, on top
of the beat, below would make that stand out a lot more...
Very nice start to a cool track...Man...
Peace...TG.
on Old School Flavours by FreeRadical
Cool track...Yep that's what it was, then looking at it now the music today
is still not that far away...
It's still about the bass drum drop and efx moving in and out with a simple
bass line...
I was looking for a moog sound to come in with a maaaad solo, but this
is very cool and well done....Nice one...FR
Peace...TG.
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your opinion.
FR
on When You by VickyDan
Super voice with a solid bed track, a few little dings & pings but nothing
or no one is perfect...
Never the less this is top shelf stuff, has lots of cinematic flavour yep...
Top Shelf...
Peace...TG.
on HARLEQUIN by Planetjazzbass
A spot or 2 things just get in the way of each other, but not in a bad way...
Everything is so clean, that they just stick out harmonically to my ear
anyway...
But over all it's top shelf stuff, a Highway Roller 4 sure...
Outstandingly done...Dave...
Peace...TG.
on Be Your Boyfriend by TRSTAR
I would've not used the tuner on your lead vocal, the harmonies are cool
because their lines are short and to the point...
Your vocal didn't really need any help, it distorts you diction "what you are saying"...I know it helped you hit, some of those notes but I think you
could've done it, on your own and knocked this out of the park...
You can't hide behind that thing for ever, with your voice it should be just
a tool (that your voice don't need) but to sharpen a flat tone in a voice...
Not to become the voice...Just to much stuff on something that is already
really good...Believe me!!! This is just my observation...
It's a really good track otherwise...
Peace...TG.
on Black Magic by AxelStPatience
I'm sure there will be a few that will jump on this...
Solid piece of work...
Peace...TG.
on Woodoo Child by Nightingale
Never the less it all works in a cool way...
Peace...TG.
on Signs - featuring Danke-Bang a Drum-remix by clindsay
on untitled suite by promenade2239
Just a touch off the wall for me, must say the production
is tastefully done...
Needing a few more harmonic connections melodies for my taste...
But It's all good, nothing but some Music from where I stand..
Nicely done...
Peace...TG.
on Animal by R4VAGER
Well done at that...
Peace...TG.
on That girl by Staggerman
The whole project seems like it was meant to be...
I really enjoyed the ride...
Peace...TG.
on Go With Me ft The Starring Creeps by RealProblemShuckers
But even they are done well...
Overall solid piece of work, nicely done...
Peace...TG.
on Our Way - Featuring Kara Hesse by Musicante
Good work by all involved nice work....
Peace...TG.
on AZZYKO - ESCAPE - VIP by AZZYKO
I....LIKE>>>>IT...
Peace...TG.
on See Through by MisterBloodworth
would be easy enough, to follow using simple formulas chord wise...
Real Nice Track...
Peace...TG.
~Ookami
on 28 Levels Above Top Secret by StaticNomad
Cool track Man...Enjoyed the ride...
Peace...TG.
I’m interested in people’s reactions to different sections as feedback keeps me thinking and helps me improve.
Oh, and I could and do nitpick, which means there are sections I know can be improved so I will go back sometime and do just that.
on umek remix by FreeRadical
Cool Project...FR.
Peace...TG.
FR
on Maybe Now by clindsay
The Mix is pretty much, what it should be for
that style...All good...
Well done...Peace...TG.
-clindsay
on Cut-Jimmy Eat World Cover by Cinas
Now Most... Would call this Country, but to me it's nothing
but a real good song, sung in a very believable way...
Guitar levels are low, still it's in the right place and I like
the tone...
Very well done, keep doing it... He don't give people voices like
this for nothing...
Peace...TG.