Great track except for the guy, that sounds like he's trying to cough up
a big one...
It truly takes away from that value, of the Music and I thought that was
really working well...Daaa
Maaan this is nice, just enough to lock that groove down with flavour...
Now see this is what real songs are made of, tasty movements that
begg the body to move, in a slow pulsating way...
That's where the Magic is...Now my Guitar is crying to say something
on this, it's more like my heart... :-)
I'll let you know before I show....Nice Piece of work...
This sounds like fun, good groove simple but direct melody that has
a touch of class...
I can hear the voicings that could help this on it's way, funny how that
happens...I like the space, ideas running all around...
Nice piece of work...
Solid piece of work, nasty bass groove cool mix...
This has the makings of a good song, now find a good voice
with something to say...
And this will be on it's way...I....LIKE IT...
If only i could find a vocal to fit. I used to use the acapellas all the time but these days i can't seem to find anything that fits my style. Even purchased vocals are a bit shite so i guess i'm stuck with another instrumental.
Cheers for dropping by and commenting TG.
FR
Solid piece of work, lots of nice big dynamics that sets up for, some large scale
Guitar Chords or something that will give you, that deep hard core sound that
the strings are calling for...
So far this is a cool project and very well done...
Well I tried to bring equilibrium between the dark calling of the song and a small hope for that little light inside it. I am deeply thinking of some Variation In Production release of this song in the near future. Thanks for the idea
This is very nice, moves like it want to go somewhere...aaaaaa..A highway
tune for sure...
Nice sunny day foot in deep and your rollin down the road with your
honey at your side..
Thanks, I didn't spend a great deal of time on it. I just wanted to do something that gets your head nodding. Hopefully it works.
Cheers for stopping by.
FR
I have a better mix this one is for the crowd, I took the liberty to chop it
up a bit...Hope it works for you...
If you'd like the better mix, just PM me and we can hook it up...
Got that Japanese Funk goin on...Very nicely done not easy to do and keep
that flow happening but you banged this one on the head, the nail that is...
Tight harmonies locked in top shelf stuff...I like it...
This is a tough piece of work, very nicely put together...
One or two parts I would take out, some how they don't flow
with the groove, I would run that into the ground only because
it's tempo is right in that spot...With a lock...
This I would duplicate that bass track, to R-L and drop it back in the mix...
This will reinforce that foundation, right now it's all left side makes it
weak and disconnected, as if it shouldn't be there...Or it gets in the way
of the melody...If you get my drift...
Not bad so far though, keep hitin it, it will come around...
OOOOOWwww...I like how you did her voice, that's what it is right there...
Nina...Is ma GIRL...Did you know she was, Classically Trained played it all
with a Masters Touch, she had her own style from day one...
and the Music has space for a little bit of somethin Sparse and Clean
jazzy only in spots, just to complete that flavour, you ain't far from
it now...simple..
Thank you TG.You right she is really a huge talent,i was reading about her when i wanted to use that sample,and i discovered so much bout her.She was one of the greats.Thanks for the feedback brah.Its always good to hear from you.
OK...Lets get to work, if that's where you're going to put the voices then
maybe my guitar is just a touch too loud...
Wish I had the track with voices, then I could lock in and dance in between...
I'm lovin this sound, got my vote for sure...
PM...Me if you like we can work it out...No Problem..
It's got a good bounce, needs help in some places like another instrument
or something even voices...
Very good beginning to this project though...Nicely done...
Thnx for dropping by and giving your opinion. I'm already trying out something regarding the vocals.(my own) A spacy/dreamy kind of thing. I know the track sounds minimal but like you've already said....the beginning is there.
Nice track Man...Love the simple dynamics of what you've played...
Great Guitar work, I do find the tone a bit muddy in the low register
a very fine limiter setting would basically even the tone out a bit better...
And give your sound a little more room to move within the strings tone
harmonically...But as it stands this is very good I like your style and the way
you play it...
Thanks! I think you're spot on with the muddyness (is that a word?), but I tweaked it to the best of my abilities. I always try not to look to much at the settings, as I am listening to how it soundsda like the sound. Maybe I should just play the theme an octave up :-P
But your feedback is much appreciated. LM users (me included) pauses when it comes to constructive criticism. So thank you for your honesty :-)
, and I kin
- Søren
See now I can say the same thing to you, the horn lines are way too bright
and should be tuned down, only because they are not real horns...
But that's my taste....Right...
Thats tru, it was just a sample i was working on lol, and yes thats your taste, no prob, im always open to other ppl views, suggestions, and therefore i do make changes to see how it might impact the track with a few adjustments keeping in mind i still have the original track incase i dont "like" that change :)
on Superman by bmxjimmy
To me it sounds great, lots of room to do many thing as
long as they are the right ones...
Keep up the good work, cause this is solid..
Peace...TG.
on Desert Storm by STIKY
a big one...
It truly takes away from that value, of the Music and I thought that was
really working well...Daaa
Peace...TG.
on Distance by Riest
Now see this is what real songs are made of, tasty movements that
begg the body to move, in a slow pulsating way...
That's where the Magic is...Now my Guitar is crying to say something
on this, it's more like my heart... :-)
I'll let you know before I show....Nice Piece of work...
Peace...TG.
on The Last Stand by GalanticMusic
a touch of class...
I can hear the voicings that could help this on it's way, funny how that
happens...I like the space, ideas running all around...
Nice piece of work...
Peace...TG.
on My way by dyldonomus
Peace...TG.
on Mr Funk by FreeRadical
This has the makings of a good song, now find a good voice
with something to say...
And this will be on it's way...I....LIKE IT...
Peace...TG.
Cheers for dropping by and commenting TG.
FR
on Zack Hemsey - See What I ve Become Remix by fotisg
Guitar Chords or something that will give you, that deep hard core sound that
the strings are calling for...
So far this is a cool project and very well done...
Peace...TG.
on Latin Funk by S1lver
tune for sure...
Nice sunny day foot in deep and your rollin down the road with your
honey at your side..
Solid piece of work...
Peace...TG.
on Waiting for the Sun by Darkreine
Solid bed track to dance on with your voice, you've done it well...
Enjoyed it guys...
Peace...TG.
Kenny
on Rhythms and Basslines by FreeRadical
And they all sound good, well put together can tell you
had fun doing this..
Peace...TG.
Cheers for stopping by.
FR
on Across the waters by GalanticMusic
Well Done...
Peace...TG.
on Waiting by Jeffiedillard
up a bit...Hope it works for you...
If you'd like the better mix, just PM me and we can hook it up...
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/163380#comments
Peace...TG.
on 02 On n On by Eighteen
that flow happening but you banged this one on the head, the nail that is...
Tight harmonies locked in top shelf stuff...I like it...
Peace...TG.
I also really appreciate what u said, Thanksss :)
Glad you like it,
Cheers
~Eighteen
on Some Chords - Kevin Walsh Remix by Livingsoulsdie
One or two parts I would take out, some how they don't flow
with the groove, I would run that into the ground only because
it's tempo is right in that spot...With a lock...
Solid Project....Peace...TG.
on 01 High Tension ft MrFunktastic and Nightingale by Eighteen
Solid project keep it going...
Peace...TG.
~Eighteen
on I m Lost by Darkreine
And this track is solid, true to form...Thats what it is right there...
Sad...Truth meanwhile you knocked this out of the park...
That's what real songs are made of, very well done...
Peace...TG.
Thank you for your kind words. I really do appreciate you taking the time to give it a listen.
Kenny
on walk the walk by nygtcrawler
This will reinforce that foundation, right now it's all left side makes it
weak and disconnected, as if it shouldn't be there...Or it gets in the way
of the melody...If you get my drift...
Not bad so far though, keep hitin it, it will come around...
Peace....TG.
on New dawn New day by benjizo
Nina...Is ma GIRL...Did you know she was, Classically Trained played it all
with a Masters Touch, she had her own style from day one...
and the Music has space for a little bit of somethin Sparse and Clean
jazzy only in spots, just to complete that flavour, you ain't far from
it now...simple..
What a Voice you did her Cool...I Like That...
Solid piece of work....
Peace...TG.
on Winters Darklight by Monsterovich
Very well done...
Peace...TG.
on feels like snippet from full album by larrybarrow31
maybe my guitar is just a touch too loud...
Wish I had the track with voices, then I could lock in and dance in between...
I'm lovin this sound, got my vote for sure...
PM...Me if you like we can work it out...No Problem..
Peace...TG.
on Beautiful Stranger by musiclover38
mean that more than one sound, would lack clarity... :-)
An Octave just may be the trick...But include the stings as a harmony
that would knock it out of the park....
Peace....TG.
on Somewhere far and deep by yappy
or something even voices...
Very good beginning to this project though...Nicely done...
Peace...TG.
Thnx for dropping by and giving your opinion. I'm already trying out something regarding the vocals.(my own) A spacy/dreamy kind of thing. I know the track sounds minimal but like you've already said....the beginning is there.
Thnx again!
on luminous sunset by DanGoldstein
I understand it's reality, just some how I wish it never was...
Good sound...
Peace...TG.
Having said that, I may be mistaken on the smokestack in the pic. Here is the pic.
http://audiosparksforart.com/art-needs-music/#foobox-1/2/Luminous-Sunset-IMG_0687-1080x720.jpg
the photographer - Shelley Neff - is from my neck of the woods. We have that 3 Mile Island Nuke facility near us and i was thinking that was the shot.
on Beautiful Stranger by musiclover38
Great Guitar work, I do find the tone a bit muddy in the low register
a very fine limiter setting would basically even the tone out a bit better...
And give your sound a little more room to move within the strings tone
harmonically...But as it stands this is very good I like your style and the way
you play it...
Peace...TG.
But your feedback is much appreciated. LM users (me included) pauses when it comes to constructive criticism. So thank you for your honesty :-)
, and I kin
- Søren
on your way by GalanticMusic
and should be tuned down, only because they are not real horns...
But that's my taste....Right...