I have a better mix this one is for the crowd, I took the liberty to chop it
up a bit...Hope it works for you...
If you'd like the better mix, just PM me and we can hook it up...
Got that Japanese Funk goin on...Very nicely done not easy to do and keep
that flow happening but you banged this one on the head, the nail that is...
Tight harmonies locked in top shelf stuff...I like it...
This is a tough piece of work, very nicely put together...
One or two parts I would take out, some how they don't flow
with the groove, I would run that into the ground only because
it's tempo is right in that spot...With a lock...
This I would duplicate that bass track, to R-L and drop it back in the mix...
This will reinforce that foundation, right now it's all left side makes it
weak and disconnected, as if it shouldn't be there...Or it gets in the way
of the melody...If you get my drift...
Not bad so far though, keep hitin it, it will come around...
OOOOOWwww...I like how you did her voice, that's what it is right there...
Nina...Is ma GIRL...Did you know she was, Classically Trained played it all
with a Masters Touch, she had her own style from day one...
and the Music has space for a little bit of somethin Sparse and Clean
jazzy only in spots, just to complete that flavour, you ain't far from
it now...simple..
Thank you TG.You right she is really a huge talent,i was reading about her when i wanted to use that sample,and i discovered so much bout her.She was one of the greats.Thanks for the feedback brah.Its always good to hear from you.
OK...Lets get to work, if that's where you're going to put the voices then
maybe my guitar is just a touch too loud...
Wish I had the track with voices, then I could lock in and dance in between...
I'm lovin this sound, got my vote for sure...
PM...Me if you like we can work it out...No Problem..
It's got a good bounce, needs help in some places like another instrument
or something even voices...
Very good beginning to this project though...Nicely done...
Thnx for dropping by and giving your opinion. I'm already trying out something regarding the vocals.(my own) A spacy/dreamy kind of thing. I know the track sounds minimal but like you've already said....the beginning is there.
Nice track Man...Love the simple dynamics of what you've played...
Great Guitar work, I do find the tone a bit muddy in the low register
a very fine limiter setting would basically even the tone out a bit better...
And give your sound a little more room to move within the strings tone
harmonically...But as it stands this is very good I like your style and the way
you play it...
Thanks! I think you're spot on with the muddyness (is that a word?), but I tweaked it to the best of my abilities. I always try not to look to much at the settings, as I am listening to how it soundsda like the sound. Maybe I should just play the theme an octave up :-P
But your feedback is much appreciated. LM users (me included) pauses when it comes to constructive criticism. So thank you for your honesty :-)
, and I kin
- Søren
See now I can say the same thing to you, the horn lines are way too bright
and should be tuned down, only because they are not real horns...
But that's my taste....Right...
Thats tru, it was just a sample i was working on lol, and yes thats your taste, no prob, im always open to other ppl views, suggestions, and therefore i do make changes to see how it might impact the track with a few adjustments keeping in mind i still have the original track incase i dont "like" that change :)
Cool Music track, Vocal track some of her words don't make any sense...
In a track that makes plenty sense, good mix with some nice sounds...
She sounds smashed, to be honest I think she was holding on to the notes
just a little too, long and fell off the note instead of falling up on the note...
If you get my drift...
Never the less not a bad project...Well done....
Thank you so much for your thoughts. I am glad you took the time and care to suggest some improvements. You are second person to say she sounds drunk or smashed. I will have to work on improving the vocals. I will also work on seeing if she can fall up.
So this is what I did, if you do the voices then a sparc bass could
be dropped in where needed...
The main guitar is the melody run with or jump all over it with voices
you know what I mean.... :-)
Yea....Love that drop, I got something to knock the top off this bad boy....
I'm on it like brown sugar on beans, Man!! this is right there simple but
true to the bone...I know just what this needs...
You Know..You have a solid voice, but you want to hide it wonder why...??
I know voices and you were given a gift, he don't give'm to just anybody
if you get my drift...
Now you've got me wanting to hear more, with some real tones vocally...
This is some tough stuff, solid vocal using some tasty notes, it needs
something to run with it though to bring the message home, only because
of it's importance...Very to the point and very well done...
Could've had just a touch, more vocal, when stuff starts moving to give it more control of the front line...But that's my taste...
Adding other instruments though, may mean dropping them deeper, in the mix
so they don't get in the way of the vocal...
But for now this is very cool, and very NOW...With all this stupid stuff
going on...
An interesting way in to a complicated place, sorta like trying to fit
a square peg into a round hole....
Didn't think you could but you did and a solid job at that...
Cool project very very Nice...
on Waiting by Jeffiedillard
up a bit...Hope it works for you...
If you'd like the better mix, just PM me and we can hook it up...
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/163380#comments
Peace...TG.
on 02 On n On by Eighteen
that flow happening but you banged this one on the head, the nail that is...
Tight harmonies locked in top shelf stuff...I like it...
Peace...TG.
I also really appreciate what u said, Thanksss :)
Glad you like it,
Cheers
~Eighteen
on Some Chords - Kevin Walsh Remix by Livingsoulsdie
One or two parts I would take out, some how they don't flow
with the groove, I would run that into the ground only because
it's tempo is right in that spot...With a lock...
Solid Project....Peace...TG.
on 01 High Tension ft MrFunktastic and Nightingale by Eighteen
Solid project keep it going...
Peace...TG.
~Eighteen
on I m Lost by Darkreine
And this track is solid, true to form...Thats what it is right there...
Sad...Truth meanwhile you knocked this out of the park...
That's what real songs are made of, very well done...
Peace...TG.
Thank you for your kind words. I really do appreciate you taking the time to give it a listen.
Kenny
on walk the walk by nygtcrawler
This will reinforce that foundation, right now it's all left side makes it
weak and disconnected, as if it shouldn't be there...Or it gets in the way
of the melody...If you get my drift...
Not bad so far though, keep hitin it, it will come around...
Peace....TG.
on New dawn New day by benjizo
Nina...Is ma GIRL...Did you know she was, Classically Trained played it all
with a Masters Touch, she had her own style from day one...
and the Music has space for a little bit of somethin Sparse and Clean
jazzy only in spots, just to complete that flavour, you ain't far from
it now...simple..
What a Voice you did her Cool...I Like That...
Solid piece of work....
Peace...TG.
on Winters Darklight by Monsterovich
Very well done...
Peace...TG.
on feels like snippet from full album by larrybarrow31
maybe my guitar is just a touch too loud...
Wish I had the track with voices, then I could lock in and dance in between...
I'm lovin this sound, got my vote for sure...
PM...Me if you like we can work it out...No Problem..
Peace...TG.
on Beautiful Stranger by musiclover38
mean that more than one sound, would lack clarity... :-)
An Octave just may be the trick...But include the stings as a harmony
that would knock it out of the park....
Peace....TG.
on Somewhere far and deep by yappy
or something even voices...
Very good beginning to this project though...Nicely done...
Peace...TG.
Thnx for dropping by and giving your opinion. I'm already trying out something regarding the vocals.(my own) A spacy/dreamy kind of thing. I know the track sounds minimal but like you've already said....the beginning is there.
Thnx again!
on luminous sunset by DanGoldstein
I understand it's reality, just some how I wish it never was...
Good sound...
Peace...TG.
Having said that, I may be mistaken on the smokestack in the pic. Here is the pic.
http://audiosparksforart.com/art-needs-music/#foobox-1/2/Luminous-Sunset-IMG_0687-1080x720.jpg
the photographer - Shelley Neff - is from my neck of the woods. We have that 3 Mile Island Nuke facility near us and i was thinking that was the shot.
on Beautiful Stranger by musiclover38
Great Guitar work, I do find the tone a bit muddy in the low register
a very fine limiter setting would basically even the tone out a bit better...
And give your sound a little more room to move within the strings tone
harmonically...But as it stands this is very good I like your style and the way
you play it...
Peace...TG.
But your feedback is much appreciated. LM users (me included) pauses when it comes to constructive criticism. So thank you for your honesty :-)
, and I kin
- Søren
on your way by GalanticMusic
and should be tuned down, only because they are not real horns...
But that's my taste....Right...
on I Was Made to Dance by ProgRockDan1
In a track that makes plenty sense, good mix with some nice sounds...
She sounds smashed, to be honest I think she was holding on to the notes
just a little too, long and fell off the note instead of falling up on the note...
If you get my drift...
Never the less not a bad project...Well done....
Peace....TG.
Thank you so much for your thoughts. I am glad you took the time and care to suggest some improvements. You are second person to say she sounds drunk or smashed. I will have to work on improving the vocals. I will also work on seeing if she can fall up.
Thank you so much,
Dan
on no more tears instrumental by larrybarrow31
So this is what I did, if you do the voices then a sparc bass could
be dropped in where needed...
The main guitar is the melody run with or jump all over it with voices
you know what I mean.... :-)
Let me know that you think....Peace...TG.
on stand by me instrumental by larrybarrow31
on tales from the trip by MetalEd
on no more tears instrumental by larrybarrow31
I'm on it like brown sugar on beans, Man!! this is right there simple but
true to the bone...I know just what this needs...
I'll be getting back to you on this....
Peace...TG.
on House of Trap by ccbeats25
Peace...TG.
on How It Happens by kaylala
I know voices and you were given a gift, he don't give'm to just anybody
if you get my drift...
Now you've got me wanting to hear more, with some real tones vocally...
Happy Holidays...Peace...TG.
on Dreaming about ya by ShurelyTemper
Very smooth laid back and good groove...
Peace...TG.
on CG5 - I Dont Despise - RPS Remix by RealProblemShuckers
something to run with it though to bring the message home, only because
of it's importance...Very to the point and very well done...
Could've had just a touch, more vocal, when stuff starts moving to give it more control of the front line...But that's my taste...
Adding other instruments though, may mean dropping them deeper, in the mix
so they don't get in the way of the vocal...
But for now this is very cool, and very NOW...With all this stupid stuff
going on...
on When You Fall In Love by Musicante
a square peg into a round hole....
Didn't think you could but you did and a solid job at that...
Cool project very very Nice...
Peace...TG.
Ciao,
M.
on Don t You See Feat Farisha by aelmen
Keep doing it...
Peace...TG.
/Anders