Hey Steve ,thanks man! much appreciated..no that's not a theremin it's a synth patch Zappo has created..cheers mate,all the best from Dave and Detlef. :)
Very Nice version of this pella-song combo. Brings a very thoughtful emotional sound utilizing your piano, and I like the gospel like voices and harmonies you have going on. Good Work!
Thank you for taking the time to stop by and comment. Much appreciated. Patricia has such a wonderful vocal style and the harmonies are fantastic to work with. I'm so lucky. Glad you enjoyed the track.
Very very good. Like you took simple Appalachian melodies, and old European string sounds, and added this ethereal ambient feel in the background. Future meets the past. I feel the ethos of Persia, Greece, the Mediterranean, The Immigrants of the U.S. and Canada all coming together with DaDa.
Hey man,you surprised me !your warm breath.dear Steve,you know btter than me that music talks to the bird's language, and from Appalachian Mountains to alps & from Mediterranean Sea to our persian gulf,and from tibbet mountains to Australian rocks & mountains & even the birds in African deserts , are singing by One language,like music,and according to I wanted about this track to shows a middle point ( equinox)I should use all languages words in it as various Instruments,& would be really glad if you may think that I havebeen succeded.Best wishes for you man,I will remember this conceptual analysis in your comment about this trial of mine,forever,as a remarkable memory in my mind.
سپاسگزار و ارادتمندم
thanx alot & Sincerely Yours.
___Behnam.
your worthwhile possitive comment,makes me glad as an encouragement dear crucethus .greates appreciations for taking time and listen & commenting on this.my best wishes as always.___Behnam.
I have to agree with Danke,sounds a bit like Nick Cave. Great job. I like the vocals even a little der komisser feel to it. Thoroughly enjoyed the listen.
Yeah this is definitely minimalistic, but ffing brilliant in it's economic use of sounds. and syncopation rhythms as well as some cool ring modulation to make it sound complicated and foreboding. Again great job
I have to slightly disagree with my esteemed colleague on about the drums. I actually like them. I think I would add more percussion building throughout the song to make it's mark. Overall what an amazing improvement in loop control and sounds, and you still get to include your signature echo-verb sound on the vocal, which gives the mix a Jamaican dub feel. (check out, Sly & Robbie, and Osbourne "King Tubby" Ruddock, Lee "Scratch" Perry, Errol Thompson ) and you will see that you are emulating some of there style. Great Job , keep looping your getting better by the day! :-)
Hi there!
Alright - You like the drums, I do to but I also can see what JoeFunktastic is talking about - actually I think it's that the piano doesn't sync with the drums all the way. It takes away the flow somehow.
Well, that I'm going to try to fix, and also increasing the pianosound should help a bit. And letting the drums build up is a definite Yes!
Oh, I SO want to be emulating Sly & Robbie, even a little tiny bit of emulating them will do!!! I love those Epic artists!
(The rest of them (Lee Perry etc.) not so much - I maybe should cut down on the reeverb and echoes a bit? lol
Or could it just be that I'm not really getting there Music? There are Epic too, no doubt.)
Thank you SO much for taking your time, listening and giving advice!
This is great, reminds me of underground house in the late nineties in NYC, like Danny Tenaglia, or Junior Vasquez spun sounds. Minimal, high string note held above the mix, some singer with soul, and eclectic sounds beeped in, with a nice deep bass sound.
This is a good start. For a reference, the piano chord structure is the same as Marina and the Diamonds song Lies. There are a few good remixes of this song which could give you some ideas.
Beautiful, haunting ,elegant, sad, hopeful , longing, thoughtful, and reflective are the words I would use to describe this lovely piece of art. It almost sounds as you have created a song that belongs on Roxy Music's Avalon . As I am listening to it I was thinking that maybe where you change chords you could add a reverse cymbal, then a cymbal crash quietly in the background. It might make that transition a bit smoother. Otherwise fantastic work.
I only clicked on this because I saw the name Newyorkminute. I am originally from NY and now live in Montreal.
I am so glad I clicked. This mix gave be goosebumps, and a small tear. Not easy to do with me.
My synopsis: The suspended pads were brilliant... Prince like, Jimmy Jam and Terry Lewis like...
Simple vocals no effects, works great,
Bass sounded perfect.
Piano was sublime and subtle.
percussion was great, built throughout the song.
The only thing, and I stress ONLY thing I would love to see top make this song over the top. Is to record a Choir singing in the background at the last chorus. That would make this song an unbelievable hit.
Thanks for sharing
It made my evening
peace
Steve (Crucethus)
Thanks for your feedback Crucethus. I was worried about the bass. I have some small Roland studio monitors but they don't really catch the low end. I had to rely on frequency analyzers...and the choir idea is brilliant.
Beautiful song, I enjoyed listening to this very much. Hey a stupid short term memory improvement trick. We have better spatial memory than cognitive memory. That's why we remember where we have been and how things should look when we walk outside. Associate a concept with a place. Like a Guitar phrase with the corner store. Or A Chord structure with your neighbours fence. You will find you can recall a bit easier that way.
Cheers
Steve
Thanks crucethus for your kind comment much appreciated. Yea having a stroke really sucks but I am getting over it and improving all the time. My memory is improving a little but the damage is done lol. But hey! I get to play on it at my convenience if something dose not suit me. I might have a short memory span but I am not stupid lol.
hey ! dear crucethus , it was really strange for me,cause althought we don't know eachother ,but just in the exactly same minutes I have been writing such comment for you abut your new cinematic track,& you have make me fell proud with your kindness about one of my trials.thank you for stopping & listen to & commenting on one of my music trials .Best wishes & regards.__Behnam.
I have to concur with Bear, if that’s your first, well done. I was playing around with this loop as well and came up with this. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/141030
by the way I really like the logo as well. good job
on The Air We Breathe by Planetjazzbass
great song
Steve
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bon travail
Steve
Thanks man, really appreciate your feed back. Thanx for the dl too.
Kenny
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on Let me be the one - featuring Patricia Edwards by RichieWinn
Steve
Thank you for taking the time to stop by and comment. Much appreciated. Patricia has such a wonderful vocal style and the harmonies are fantastic to work with. I'm so lucky. Glad you enjoyed the track.
Richie
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کار بزرگ، دوست من.
Steve
سپاسگزار و ارادتمندم
thanx alot & Sincerely Yours.
___Behnam.
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I have to slightly disagree with my esteemed colleague on about the drums. I actually like them. I think I would add more percussion building throughout the song to make it's mark. Overall what an amazing improvement in loop control and sounds, and you still get to include your signature echo-verb sound on the vocal, which gives the mix a Jamaican dub feel. (check out, Sly & Robbie, and Osbourne "King Tubby" Ruddock, Lee "Scratch" Perry, Errol Thompson ) and you will see that you are emulating some of there style. Great Job , keep looping your getting better by the day! :-)
Alright - You like the drums, I do to but I also can see what JoeFunktastic is talking about - actually I think it's that the piano doesn't sync with the drums all the way. It takes away the flow somehow.
Well, that I'm going to try to fix, and also increasing the pianosound should help a bit. And letting the drums build up is a definite Yes!
Oh, I SO want to be emulating Sly & Robbie, even a little tiny bit of emulating them will do!!! I love those Epic artists!
(The rest of them (Lee Perry etc.) not so much - I maybe should cut down on the reeverb and echoes a bit? lol
Or could it just be that I'm not really getting there Music? There are Epic too, no doubt.)
Thank you SO much for taking your time, listening and giving advice!
Have a nice day/ SJ
on nice and hot feat patricia edwards by mzo
I m so happy to Share my work with u.
And very proue it reminds u theses artists!
Share it
Peace!
on On3-AM by Ishimizu
wonder if that track can really be called minimalistic... well, wayne
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Steve
And i like the fact that you can offer me ways to advance the transitions....Thank you!
As a rule i normally just leave alone when uploaded as i tend to bugger things up when tweeking,lol.
All my music is one off's
And nothing i do can i replicate as its done from feelings.!
I just play or produce via listening only!
Thanks again for taking time to offer advice,thats real kind of you!
Life love n unity to you!
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on Let Me Be The One feat Patricia Edwards by newyorkminute
I only clicked on this because I saw the name Newyorkminute. I am originally from NY and now live in Montreal.
I am so glad I clicked. This mix gave be goosebumps, and a small tear. Not easy to do with me.
My synopsis: The suspended pads were brilliant... Prince like, Jimmy Jam and Terry Lewis like...
Simple vocals no effects, works great,
Bass sounded perfect.
Piano was sublime and subtle.
percussion was great, built throughout the song.
The only thing, and I stress ONLY thing I would love to see top make this song over the top. Is to record a Choir singing in the background at the last chorus. That would make this song an unbelievable hit.
Thanks for sharing
It made my evening
peace
Steve (Crucethus)
on My first Ableton Track by ElectronBlue
Cheers
Steve
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Steve
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by the way I really like the logo as well. good job
Steve
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Bravo. Standing O!
Steve