I am immediately taken by the intro. grande and majestic. the build with the vocals is amazing. the subtle chorus is sublime as well. then that drop. then the vocal section. which is good but it needs more dynamic separation here. Try in the mixdown lowering the gain and increasing your dynamic head room. because all your instrument placing is perfect and all your instincts are spot on. 2:58 is where your dynamics come together. you need that crisp bass sound in the earlier parts as well. the middle frequencies are too muddled together. now don't take this as a negative as this is easily fixed. And As I have said before to others I will only give this detailed of a synopsis and critique if I hear something of genius that is so close to perfection. Keep on it my friend I love what you are doing.
Steve
Thanks a lot for this wonderful comment Steve.
I took the track again into my kitchen and worked a little on it with your words in mind. It would be nice if you could listen again to the song and tell me if i did it wrong :)
So I listened. And I absorbed the build ,the tension. I wanted it to keep building to a release , but no like a Tantric monk you kept it all at an even keel throughout the work. SOB! This is very good and I love koto, I wanted it to build into something grand, but that is not your way sometimes. I see you like to explore the nuance of every nook and cranny of a riff. And you have extreme patience. always a pleasure to listen and enjoy your art. Cru
Hi Steve,
Many thanks for you take on this track mate.
As you may have seen the discerption this track is for an art collage video.
I had to follow the momentum of the scene of the collage.
However, in the coming days I am going to do a track about our friend Silverman selling Ice cream I do assure you that the build-up is going to be so grand that will melt all of Silverman Ice cream.
Thanks again.
Jamid
Wow Mykael. I am blown away with this cover. just perfect. Your vox is sublime. I really Miss David now he's gone. So anyone who keeps that torch alive makes my day every time.
best wishes and great job
Steve
Steve! Thanks so much! Your thoughts about my music are always appreciated. It was great fun to do this recording, and I am happy it is being received so well!
for some reason I could only envision a white cold place in which this song emotes. Lots of snow and freezing temperatures, like a forewarning of winter. Very dramatic and very good.
Cru
I fel that this is a giant release of energy from you. I'm not even going to critique what i heard yet, but just feel that emotionally you are letting off a lot of hidden steam.
Cru
Makes complete sense! I can't believe it, I actually had just finished a strokes jam session before getting into this song. Its amazing you were able to notice that!! Thanks for the feedback cru!
Awesome work. I agree with Mykael, it's a very tight verse in need of an awesome chorus. part of my roots are influenced by FLYTETYME and this tingles that essence. keep at this one.
great vibe.
Cru
Goa trance at it's most modern edge i believe. Nice job melding some Big Room aesthetics with classic Psy-trance sounds. I used to be a big fan of Nordbeat, back in the old MP3.com days. Are you using Reason?
Cru
Hello Crucethus, hi!
Well, i'm not sure if Goa Trance at its most modern edge, but thank you to left your comment about what yout think, i never used NordBeat, so i don't know what it's like, but i saw some videos, seems interesting. Actually, i produce at FL Studio, cause for me its more suggestive and atractive to produce.
What do you mean with "Are you using Reason?", i didn't get... sorry :c
I agree with Wayne this is New Wave, indeed or post post new wave. but that moving bass line and synth treatments make it very classically new wave and an awesome job you did on this one my friend. The sound is luscious and full. And it's a great tune to listen to. My head was bopping along to it while typing.
Great work
Cru
hello Cru,
glad to read you enjoyed this track! it's important for me you underlined the mixing quality ;) it's an important phase and it's not easy when you don't have enough knowledges in sound engineering :)
Wow very creative. The opening trance was as good as a Paul Vandyk tune, then you get a little loud (compression) which from 2:11 to 2:58 was a bit hard on the ears, but the overall usage of styles in this medley was amazing. great work.
Cru
2:11 to 2:58 I agree with you. I do not know what happened to the program when compressing in m3 is defect ... but it did not start to load again. Thank you.
Hi Steve...a pleasure reading you again. "Sort of a Victorian...." I think you hit the nail on the head. Thank you so much for listening and for this lovely comment!:)
Wow, Trance hardfloor and a demented sort of bro-step segue comes together nicely in this Electro-Trance tune JIT for Halloween. great work, this is what is in the clubs now, and you nailed it. just needs a touch of mastering for perfection.
Cru
Oh mate, you have no idea how much this made my day today.
Thank you for the support, and the constructive criticism, I'm still working on my mastering skills, not really quite sure if I'm nailing it well.
I'll see what I can do to improve the quality of my mastering.
TA refers to Toasted Avalanche, as his descriptions emotively were spot on. he was also quite good at doing that on one of my songs, so i was giving him praise while praising your tune., sorry for the dis-communication. The Satire is that in this message for all of humanities attempts to control something, we continue to make more problems for ourselves. That will never change. We are an Animal. We have social characteristics that are found in our ape cousins. We can be brutal , violent, disruptive, but when we started to create the un-natural world in which we live in now, some of those characteristics are slowly being eroded. Life itself is getting better for most humans in the world. But the fear is it can all come crashing down due to Natural events, which will bring us right back to our brutal survival animalistic state again.
Ahhh, I understand the TA thing more now. Had not even considered that you were referring to another commenter!
I think I can identify with what you have said here, with the possible exception of the last points;
"Life itself is getting better for most humans in the world." This is something I do not see. Can't even think of a single example. "Better" is such a subjective idea, and requires a point of reference to even exist. I think about the changes I see and hear of, I look around my community, I remember the past... and all that I can think is "IT'S SO BAD."
"But the fear is it can all come crashing down due to Natural events, which will bring us right back to our brutal survival animalistic state again." Instead of fearing natural events and their destructive possibilities, I hope each day that this is indeed what cuts the human race down to size. While this may or may not bring us to our "animalistic" state, it is very likely the only chance for survival of humans and the entire ecosystem. "Brutality" is not something I would think of in this situation, as that is an essential characteristic which comes to mind in modern humans.
I appreciate you coming back with some clarification, and I welcome the chance to explain myself further. Have a good day!
Wow Blanc, the songwriting chord structure is most definately post punk, you nailed that spot on. in the verse i could hear also what i would add to this to make a melody. it has such potential from it's raw state that it is now in. sadly if we were only still listening to this style on the radio anymore.
great work.
cru
Awesome Intro. Funny how snare cadences have now been incorporated in electronic music. sounds like 8bit insanity. and it ends like a boss! Fav'd and downloaded (TY). Awesome job!
Cru
I like the effects on this one. The ring Modulation and phasers were perfectly used. Sort of reminded me of U2 in there Zooropa phase. Well done and creative.
peace
cru
Nice sinister opening, This is a very cool song. Great mix so far. i agree with Joe that it needs some more percussion and driving beats, if you had that this would be a mind blowing song. 4:13 on and it sounds like a mandolin ehh? Really creative my friend, i enjoyed that listen immensely.
Cru
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It's a bit of experimental for me, never done that before
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I took the track again into my kitchen and worked a little on it with your words in mind. It would be nice if you could listen again to the song and tell me if i did it wrong :)
stay tuned
joe
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Many thanks for you take on this track mate.
As you may have seen the discerption this track is for an art collage video.
I had to follow the momentum of the scene of the collage.
However, in the coming days I am going to do a track about our friend Silverman selling Ice cream I do assure you that the build-up is going to be so grand that will melt all of Silverman Ice cream.
Thanks again.
Jamid
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Well, i'm not sure if Goa Trance at its most modern edge, but thank you to left your comment about what yout think, i never used NordBeat, so i don't know what it's like, but i saw some videos, seems interesting. Actually, i produce at FL Studio, cause for me its more suggestive and atractive to produce.
What do you mean with "Are you using Reason?", i didn't get... sorry :c
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Great work
Cru
glad to read you enjoyed this track! it's important for me you underlined the mixing quality ;) it's an important phase and it's not easy when you don't have enough knowledges in sound engineering :)
thanks for your feedback
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Thank you for the support, and the constructive criticism, I'm still working on my mastering skills, not really quite sure if I'm nailing it well.
I'll see what I can do to improve the quality of my mastering.
Best regards,
Phr34kness.
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I think I can identify with what you have said here, with the possible exception of the last points;
"Life itself is getting better for most humans in the world." This is something I do not see. Can't even think of a single example. "Better" is such a subjective idea, and requires a point of reference to even exist. I think about the changes I see and hear of, I look around my community, I remember the past... and all that I can think is "IT'S SO BAD."
"But the fear is it can all come crashing down due to Natural events, which will bring us right back to our brutal survival animalistic state again." Instead of fearing natural events and their destructive possibilities, I hope each day that this is indeed what cuts the human race down to size. While this may or may not bring us to our "animalistic" state, it is very likely the only chance for survival of humans and the entire ecosystem. "Brutality" is not something I would think of in this situation, as that is an essential characteristic which comes to mind in modern humans.
I appreciate you coming back with some clarification, and I welcome the chance to explain myself further. Have a good day!
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Thanks for the listen and comment, Cru.
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