Trap isn´t my forté by I do know a bit about this overdone genre. And this has some good arranging going on. I like the fills U use. Clean mix and good instrument choices. As Valve suggests I am also a fan of the multi layered percussion and kick methods. I would say the kick is probably the weakest point on the song but everything else is quite nice. good luck mate.
Crucethus
You dont need a vocalist, this is awesome mate!. Very nineties and would have been on the radio then if it came out then. Like a Male, Veruca salt meets, Days of the New.
Great job I enjoyed that listen, I was bobbin along to this one. Awesome mix. Downloaded (TY) and faved.
Cru
So The Production is improving alot. I might sit the distorted guitar just slightly back in the mix and add a small delay to create even more space. (not the strumming ry though, thats perfect) but thats a personal preference. I would also use a compressor on the distorted guitar as well like something from Fab (Saturn) to give it some clarity and yet keep that lovely fuzz. Organ is sublime. As I said earlier the Bass is perfect, Its such a clean slap sound. So to answer your question, yes its getting better mate!
Cheers
Steven
Nice intro. cool and menacing guitar jangly centered mix. percussion hats widen the experience. Appalachian city madness. like the Wheeling people of WV would be in a film noir experience. nicely done mate.
Steven
Again a big thank you for your friendly and constant support. Your sounds are always for me a rich source of inspiration and a great model of artistic quality. A musical bridge unites Italy to Canada.
Greetings from your friend Marco
Yeah thats some nice percussion (Amen Breaks). I think with the voice it needs some sausage fattener on it as its too thin (and that comes a bit from the pella and her voice is not massively deep in tone), but I love the phase effects you used on it. The bass is also spectacular. I agree with CinCoCent the vox needs to come up in the mix, but a really nice job overall mate.
Cru
Nice ear thats exactly what they are(amen breaks/phase), as a drummer im delighted to hear good stuff about the bass too. Ill look into fattening the vocals, Thank you very much
This was really nice work. I enjoyed the flow and build of it. Years ago I used to work and make remixes with a swiss classical artist named Rachel Nusbaumer. Her style is similar to what you have made, you should check her work out I think you would enjoy it. http://www.rachelnusbaumer.com/portfolio/bandes-son/
cheers: Cru
Hiya Cru. Thanks a lot and I will visit surely. I just tried and actually didn't pay to much upon the additional plugins to boost the track. LABS sampler is Stereo based as i realized afterwards.
I love 2:08 to 2:45, almost has a slight psychedelic feel in the breakdown there. good song. Reminds me of something from the very early seventies.
Steven
As Much as you label this Trap, there are so many good R&B elements going on in this wondrous track you have made. As Joe has said, awesome mix-master it sounds great.
Cru
Oh yeah, I know whenever I click on a Jynx tune, I am going on a trip, so strap in and enjoy the ride. So many cool elements in this one mate!. But that bassline keeps it all together. I also likes how it deconstructs. Great talent and creativity my friend, you are becoming one of my favourite listens on this site.
Steven
Be sure you take a bow.
When I first "discovered" LM I first realized that LM was a place you could post music, "YOUR" music with total impunity.
While I'm not a big House or Techno fan after listening to your tracks back then, it opened up a Pandora's box that I haven't been, or even want to close. Sooo... Thanks for that.:-)
I also can't help noticing my choice of FX & ambient samples, effects and their usage is similar to the style of yours. Perhaps the birth of another genre:-)
I really enjoy your approach to composition & execution.
Thank you for you listen & comments.
PEACE...
Awesome. This has such a Tresor meets the Tunnel feel to it . I love the old school percussion and the perfect minimalism. Then we get that awesome chord change and chilled breakdown section. Then you take us out with an awesome DJ exit. Nice job!
Cru
nice intro, almost reminded me of utah saints at first but then you went all trap with it. definitely not rock..That being said. I love this lumbering style you have created. Almost ominous and plodding along with a forceful intensity. I did like this one.
Cru
Thanks, Steve. I actually didn’t fuss much over the mix. As I mentioned to CinCoCent, this track is actually 4 years old. I have updated versions of some of the instruments (the Rhodes in this version is the stock instrument included with Logic Pro) and better effects plugins. But, I didn’t replace anything, so I think that’s telling me something. Sometimes better to just leave well enough alone, I guess.
Yeah, I love the drone like quality. Dreamy and concusive vocals gives me a sort of fil noire feel to this track. This is cocise, great and minimal. Slightly light in the background dissonance at 1:58 awesome work! Reminds me of James Di Salvio and his Bran Van 3000 work.
Steven
Awesome. I want to hear the whole evolution of this one. Maybe add some deep bass growls as you build it with some string stabs. Neil Bogart (RIP)of Casablanca records might be grooving his bones to this in his grave from this one mate.
Nice work
Cru
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Great job I enjoyed that listen, I was bobbin along to this one. Awesome mix. Downloaded (TY) and faved.
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When I first "discovered" LM I first realized that LM was a place you could post music, "YOUR" music with total impunity.
While I'm not a big House or Techno fan after listening to your tracks back then, it opened up a Pandora's box that I haven't been, or even want to close. Sooo... Thanks for that.:-)
I also can't help noticing my choice of FX & ambient samples, effects and their usage is similar to the style of yours. Perhaps the birth of another genre:-)
I really enjoy your approach to composition & execution.
Thank you for you listen & comments.
PEACE...
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