mrwolf14

Simply wonderful!
Can't wait to hear the drum part from Scott.
Domenico

PS: have to agree with Dan, you need to dial back a bit the first violin

Great track Kenny!
I love the "psychedelic" touch you added to the blues riff.
Actually I was expecting to hear your voice on this: I think you should go further and add some "deep & bluesy" vocal parts to make it even more interesting!
Good work man!
Domenico

Like other already said... how 80s is this?
Good work man.
Domenico

PS: I have noted down all the good advices from JoeF (the guy knows what he says)

I like the idea.
Looking forward to see how the complete song would look like.
Domenico

Wonderful orchestral song.
And our good friend Behnam deserves nothing less than such epic music.
Bravo!
Domenico

Wonderful job, both of you.

Bonnie you have a wonderful voice.
And not only this, you have also a definite and unique style.
I wish you a lot of success, you for sure deserve it.
Domenico

Totally dig it!
We have a superb song here!
Love the way your music works with Patricia's wonderful voice. The result is very convincing.

Like the guitar solo.

I find the guitar work a bit "un-tidy" but this gives the song a good live feeling.

Regarding the mix, I think TopVega was referring to the guitar melody before 0:35 : it is very hard to hear it and it may be interesting to have it pushed louder a bit (maybe, you are the only one who can answer to this).

That said, the mix is good man: if you really want to "improve" it you may try to have the drums sounding a bit less extreme (light eq can help you here) and maybe the distorted guitars sounding tighter.

But I am not sure the song needs it: it is beautiful as it is.
Domenico

PS: sorry for the long comment, but I listened this three times in a row and each time I added something.

Instant classic! A masterpiece!
Wonderful voice with combined with a very talented musician.
I may already have told you, I simply love the way your friend plays the guitar.
I have started looking for your WYN album.
Take care, Domenico

wonderful atmosphere Benjizo!
Love the "tiny funky" guitar, love the drums, love the vocals.
Good one!

Really enjoyed it. Your vocal part is good: like your deep "bluesy" voice.
Ciao, Domenico

> Nice song: I like the usage of "broken loops"

You are right, I was not clear enough...
Let me explain myself...

I was referring to the way you composed your "musical parts" and I used the word broken referring to how the sound is "pulsing": instead of building a compact sound, you have a "pulsing" one. One chord is played by one instrument, then pause and the next chord is played by another one (synth / bass note on piano / piano-chord / synth ... or something like this)
I really like the way you have done this: I try to do it from time to time and I enjoyed a lot hearing how you used this idea to build your song.

Hope it is clearer now :-)
Peace, Domenico

This reminds me a lot of DM ... and that's sooooo good!
Well done Nicolo'!
Superb!
Domenico

Not sure about Tokio by night (was never there) but the song is good: I think your mix is outstanding, everything sits very well in the overall sound image.
Good one!
Domenico

Nice song: I like the usage of "broken loops" you are doing here. Interesting.
Personally I did not like too much the "vocals": I think they are not as good as the rest, but this is only my very humble opinion.
Domenico

This is professional stuff.
This song desperately needs a good vocal part...
Domenico

The atmosphere is very nice.
I like the drum part a lot and the way you processed the short vocal bits is very interesting.
Really promising.
Domenico

I think I may have already said this to you, but I really like the "live feeling" on your songs.
It really sounds like a real band is playing.
Good!
I think the song has still some "rough" edges (a couple of notes here and there) but this is good stuff!
Domenico

This is a beautiful song!
I really like the work on the bass: you build a solid background, playing an interesting yet "discrete" bass line.
Maybe the sound is too "modern" for this song, but I think it adds "interest" to it, so this is a good thing.
The guitar parts are good as well and the organ is very well balanced.
This has to be included among one of the best songs using Patricia's vocals.
Bravo: good job!
Domenico

PS: once more I have to agree to BrillBilly... the song reminds "no woman" indeed, I think it is mostly due to the closure of the verse, with the short chromatic scale.

Like this song!
And the guitar riff reminds me of the cult ... which is a GOOOOOOD thing!
Good work.
Domenico

Good song. I see you are looking for collabs... would you like getting a bass line for it?
Ciao, Domenico

Really enjoyable. I agree with the description of Patricia... I feel like in a bubble.
Good work

Thanks for finding this gem Janis!
I like the music, I can hear echoes of the eighties, these years when pop did not mean "easy" at all... and even if I am late, I agree to Chris: there is something of Kate Bush here and there.
Another wonderful song from our talented musician.
Domenico

Superb song.
I will not add any comment on the "subject": this man should be an inspiration to all of us.
I am very impressed by the music: very professional and intense. This is one of your best ones.
Thanks for the nice moment it gave me.
Domenico

I really like this "spoken words" in french: they sound very intense.
Thanks!
Domenico

PS: I think that the level is indeed a little low, maybe you could apply a limiter to the vocal track and then normalize the level.

Wonderful! I always liked this vocal track from JJ but you really made it shine! I love this song man!
Everything is perfect: the fx you apply on the voice (but never too much), the choice of the sounds, the idea of the "stop" and the tempo acceleration in the middle of the song.
Love it.
Domenico