Good stuff: dance is not my genre (...and the last time I was in a disco we were still worried by the millennium bug!)
but this is good! I may already have told you, but I like your touch.
Take care, Domenico
Hi Behnam,
Again a wonderful piece of music.
I agree with the others: there is not much to remove here.
The bagpipes are wonderful and the other instruments are completely new to me: listening to your song has been a real experience for me. Thanks!
The only thing that it is not "as good" as the rest is the final "percussion" part. I think it is the same part you use in the intro, but when it starts again (~6:30) it breaks a bit the atmosphere. Maybe a fade-out on the bag-pipe theme would be better (just a thought).
For the rest: superb! I really enjoyed every minute: I have listened to this already 3 times in a row and I find it soooo interesting. Definitely something out of the ordinary.
Thanks my friend!
Domenico
Hey See Domenico too is here & I'm glad to see my good friend here to comment on my persian trial .&....ja..U're quite right about this good Idea...exactly the samepercussion riff which begins track is repeated in the last part & I can delet it !ja...exact..thanx alot Domenico for this usefull comment & I should really appreciate your carefull listening & attention about this matter about this trial of mine .right in the same way in email your Ideas are often usefull for me here below this trial too I can use your usefull Idea & I should be thankfull.take care about yourself my friend & accept my best wishes as always,Sincerely.___Behnam
Nice songs. I agree with the comment from ImpendingDoom about the lyrics.
Regarding the music part... I think the drums could be a bit more "definite" (I am not sure if you want to make them more "punchy" or more "subtle" but currently they are a bit too in-between, IMHO).
And I am not 100% sure about the ending solo, maybe you could try to use some of the good loops you can find 'round here ;-)
But again, nice song.
Domenico
yea.. agreed on the drums.. but I had to make do with what I have, and I only have one microphone to mic all of Johns drum kit lol.. so it was what it was. And yup.. that's Jeremy for you. He never plays anything in the right key's when he solo's. That's pretty much why I'm starting my band over from scratch. He just likes to try and show off and play his guitar behind his head and pick up "girls" instead of practicing or learning the right licks
Wow, this is a professional track!
Very very good!
I will try anyhow to pick up a couple of points where I would like to suggest you to try something different:
I am not sure the "bell-synth" should overlap with the bass part, according to my taste you should cut it *before* the bass enters (IMHO)
And I think you could also do something for the bass-drum and the snare to have them "cutting" more through the mix (maybe add a bit of "snap" to the bass drum, not sure though).
But again: wonderful work!
I am looking forward to hear the other tracks of the album.
Funny tune.
I liked very much the "sounds" you introduced at 1:00 and once more around 3:20
Maybe the main theme is not too "original" but the song is well composed and it develops well.
Domenico
PS: I find your title very inspiring: here where I live we don't see the sun very often...
Very good mate! You have a wonderful voice: powerful, with a bit of "growl" but accurate.
I wish you to play to a lot of concerts!
That's where the real fun is.
Domenico
PS: I played in a hard-rock band for some years, that was pure fun (I miss those times...)
Thanks Domenico, I am a fan of 70's Rock. Glad you enjoyed the track enough to leave a comment. It is appreciated. I will indeed be posting more tracks in the near future. Just got to take some down to make room. Thanks again.
Not bad. The choice of loops is well made.
The track has a catchy "acid" line which sits well in the mix.
If this is your first "ok" track ever, this is definitely a good start.
Keep up the good work.
Domenico
Simply wonderful Behnam my friend!
I still have not found the time but I definitely MUST work on some of your wonderful guitar parts.
Hope to make it soon.
Ciao, Domenico
& I definitely MUST appreciate you for various times when I put you in trouble my friend & really wish some day I can be usefull about your music right in the same manner in which you are for me .it would be honoured to me to work with you & you know it & whish We both can become far from our jobs & missions & can pay more attention to our interests.thanx again & thanx again man.Sincerely.___Behnam
Hi Behnam,
This is a true masterpiece: I have simply to quote what the others have said before me. Wonderful piano, wonderful violin and I also loved the pizzicato part (?) starting around 1:55
Simply beautiful.
Chapeaux!
Domenico
Ciao amico Domenico & thanx alot for your worthy o adoration comment my friend , I should appreciate your kindness & I'm really glad if you've enjoyed it & Cin-cin .and about that strumming part I should say according to I'm minded to strumming technique & balcanic harmonies both in any cases,that part is myself favorite part in this track too,right in the same manner I'm glad if you've liked it .thanx alot again & my Auguri as always .___Behnam.
Hi Behnam,
This is a great song!
I like the arpeggio part, very interesting, but I really love the mid-part, where you play a very nice riff.
And yes, the voice is mixed quite low, but I think it gives a creepy touch to the song.
Good Work!
Domenico
thanx alot my friend for your kind comment .Donmenico I have an archive of my various years & olds in which I can hear & sometimes even laugh to my voice ( some times it's Non tanto bene) from when I was 14years old & I've recorded on those old tapes & untill rightnow. and your worthwhile Comment on such old trial will help me alot for the future .I appreciate your time & your comment ,I miei migliori auguri .____Behnam
You have a very interesting rap style. Also the lyrics are not bad (a little "generic" but interesting though).
Looking forward to hearing more from you.
Take care, Domenico
What a nice track!
I loved the vocal part: very "evocative"
And the guitar solo is well done: good sound, solid playing, interesting melody.
Very professional work.
Take care, Domenico
Wonderful piece of music Janis.
You voice is amazing, as usual.
The arrangement on the song is also "top class": really love the way everything is mixed together, the sound of the guitar, the depth of the bass (simple but powerful).
This is a 10.
Ciao, Domenico
Hi Domenico !
I'm happy you enjoyed it ;)
My friend Paul composed, played and mixed it as he always did . T'was the second song we made together .
Thx a lot for your very appreciated comment, mi amico ;)
Nice track man.
The vocal part from AJ is really convincing.
I love the atmosphere: the bass is simple but effective. The drums are very "shy" but that's exactly what the song needs.
And the acoustic guitars are very catchy (is it a synth-gtr?)
Good work.
Ciao, Domenico
Hi Clemens,
This song is very "catchy": it could be included in any radio program. The vocal part is nice and it is well mixed into the instruments. You made a potential hit!
Gruesse, Domenico
Very nice and gentle touch: I always appreciate mixes where there is "enough room" for everything. It sounds clean and very well balanced.
Good work.
Domenico
PS: if you want to try mixing one of my tracks, I can provide you the project file (I work with Logic).
Hey man, how's it going. Thank you for your ears and feedback. I really appreciate it.
As for mixing one of your tracks I would love to, but Logic is Mac based, I use Windows. So you would have to send me the 'Wav.' files and bpm of the song.
This is why I'm going to invest in a Mac so when projects like these pop up, I will have no problem mixing anyone's tracks. It would make like easier for both you and me.
If you're still interested let me know and we'll work something out. Peace man.
Beautiful bass sound.
The guitar solos are all interesting and well played (the first ones are a bit more "mainstream" and the last one is a bit more "exotic")
The track is very good: no doubt the product of two great musicians.
Thanks.
Domenico
on Scorpius Rising by Darkreine
but this is good! I may already have told you, but I like your touch.
Take care, Domenico
Thanks for listening, I'm a big fan of your's too
K;)
on Saz Mandolla BagPipe attempt by deciBel
Again a wonderful piece of music.
I agree with the others: there is not much to remove here.
The bagpipes are wonderful and the other instruments are completely new to me: listening to your song has been a real experience for me. Thanks!
The only thing that it is not "as good" as the rest is the final "percussion" part. I think it is the same part you use in the intro, but when it starts again (~6:30) it breaks a bit the atmosphere. Maybe a fade-out on the bag-pipe theme would be better (just a thought).
For the rest: superb! I really enjoyed every minute: I have listened to this already 3 times in a row and I find it soooo interesting. Definitely something out of the ordinary.
Thanks my friend!
Domenico
on Sun Rise by sashapalicyn
And the mix is well balanced.
Well done.
Domenico
on Love is by SAMusician69
Very well played and very well mixed.
Ciao, Domenico
on Grandstand by Indra
And the added vocals are classy.
Good work!
domenico
on Drifting Around In Second Thoughts by aelmen
Hope that someone finds the inspiration to put some vocals to it.
Good work!
domenico
Thanks for the comment and i do hope that someone can add a new dimension to it by adding vocals.
/Anders
on Hannah is a HoHoHo Drunk for Christmas by AidenArrows
Regarding the music part... I think the drums could be a bit more "definite" (I am not sure if you want to make them more "punchy" or more "subtle" but currently they are a bit too in-between, IMHO).
And I am not 100% sure about the ending solo, maybe you could try to use some of the good loops you can find 'round here ;-)
But again, nice song.
Domenico
on ITS WHAT WE DO by cyberbugBOB
I really enjoyed it, also without vocals.
Great guitar. Good work!
Domenico
on Wind from Nature Album by XmafaX
Very very good!
I will try anyhow to pick up a couple of points where I would like to suggest you to try something different:
I am not sure the "bell-synth" should overlap with the bass part, according to my taste you should cut it *before* the bass enters (IMHO)
And I think you could also do something for the bass-drum and the snare to have them "cutting" more through the mix (maybe add a bit of "snap" to the bass drum, not sure though).
But again: wonderful work!
I am looking forward to hear the other tracks of the album.
Domenico
Many thanks for your construtive comment!
Thanls
on Chasing The Sun Dubstep Remix by alexisescalona
I liked very much the "sounds" you introduced at 1:00 and once more around 3:20
Maybe the main theme is not too "original" but the song is well composed and it develops well.
Domenico
PS: I find your title very inspiring: here where I live we don't see the sun very often...
on DYING DAYS - Ballad by cyberbugBOB
I wish you to play to a lot of concerts!
That's where the real fun is.
Domenico
PS: I played in a hard-rock band for some years, that was pure fun (I miss those times...)
Keep on Rockin.
Bobby
on Have No Regrets by topvega
Well Done!
Looking forward to hear more.
Domenico
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on Artificial Intelligence by bassMONZTER
The track has a catchy "acid" line which sits well in the mix.
If this is your first "ok" track ever, this is definitely a good start.
Keep up the good work.
Domenico
on Shallots by DJPsychOH
I am not sure if it made me think to schallots... but maybe I am not getting the point.
Peace, Domenico
on Behind the Scence of a Smiler Silence by deciBel
I still have not found the time but I definitely MUST work on some of your wonderful guitar parts.
Hope to make it soon.
Ciao, Domenico
on Autumnal equinox by deciBel
This is a true masterpiece: I have simply to quote what the others have said before me. Wonderful piano, wonderful violin and I also loved the pizzicato part (?) starting around 1:55
Simply beautiful.
Chapeaux!
Domenico
on CrowlinG 2004 by deciBel
This is a great song!
I like the arpeggio part, very interesting, but I really love the mid-part, where you play a very nice riff.
And yes, the voice is mixed quite low, but I think it gives a creepy touch to the song.
Good Work!
Domenico
on Welcome featuring James Davies by JamesDavies
Looking forward to hearing more from you.
Take care, Domenico
on The Moorlough Shore - The Furknight Remix by sigmamanone
I loved the vocal part: very "evocative"
And the guitar solo is well done: good sound, solid playing, interesting melody.
Very professional work.
Take care, Domenico
on TATANGA MANI by janis71
You voice is amazing, as usual.
The arrangement on the song is also "top class": really love the way everything is mixed together, the sound of the guitar, the depth of the bass (simple but powerful).
This is a 10.
Ciao, Domenico
I'm happy you enjoyed it ;)
My friend Paul composed, played and mixed it as he always did . T'was the second song we made together .
Thx a lot for your very appreciated comment, mi amico ;)
on Charlie Charles SHINE ON feat AnomalyJ by charliecharles1
The vocal part from AJ is really convincing.
I love the atmosphere: the bass is simple but effective. The drums are very "shy" but that's exactly what the song needs.
And the acoustic guitars are very catchy (is it a synth-gtr?)
Good work.
Ciao, Domenico
on goodbye by clemens12
This song is very "catchy": it could be included in any radio program. The vocal part is nice and it is well mixed into the instruments. You made a potential hit!
Gruesse, Domenico
did all instruments by myself only the vocal is a sample which i download on looperman!
greets
on Not A Home - ft RaRCharm - Remix by dachopdocta
Good work.
Domenico
PS: if you want to try mixing one of my tracks, I can provide you the project file (I work with Logic).
As for mixing one of your tracks I would love to, but Logic is Mac based, I use Windows. So you would have to send me the 'Wav.' files and bpm of the song.
This is why I'm going to invest in a Mac so when projects like these pop up, I will have no problem mixing anyone's tracks. It would make like easier for both you and me.
If you're still interested let me know and we'll work something out. Peace man.
Steve aka Choppy.
on The Air We Breathe by Planetjazzbass
Again a wonderful piece of music: thanks!
Domenico
PS: of course I looooove the bass part. Simply wonderful!
on The Best Feeling by Planetjazzbass
The guitar solos are all interesting and well played (the first ones are a bit more "mainstream" and the last one is a bit more "exotic")
The track is very good: no doubt the product of two great musicians.
Thanks.
Domenico