very fitting. beautiful song. i am a little emotional even tho i obviousley didn't know him intimately, that is the power of this track. don't know what more to say. let his music live on.
alright matey. another belter! good stuff. I am still working on the other track not sure where to take it. anyway, as soon as i heard this melody i could hear other elements in my head. do you fancy sending me the melody for this and we'll do another.
great work. To me this makes me imagine being stoned in the summer of love whilst also keeping a serious tone. the intro is great, i agree with gizz. great fx also
what an effort for your first track. there are some really cool elements in here. great synths and i love that pad at the start. to improve i would just maybe try and give the song a better structure. in most trance tracks there is a four bar intro, a massive break, kick off with main melody and then an outro. really good effort tho. looking forward to hearing some more.
Thanks for the input. I'll definitely work on getting those elements into my next track. I'm still learning and it helps a great bit to get info and advice from others out there. Thanks again!
i think this is pretty good for your first track. I am lovin that bassline it has a steady progression to it. can't really give any tips because there is nothing wrong here. make some more and keep learning
i really like what you have done with it you made it totally your own. its very unique. i like the bit with the snare roll. and you done it very quickly. if you fancy making another one we will do it over the weekend peace.
:) thanks very much. I am still learning about the mixing aspects of it all... always worried my tracks sound substandard... comments like this really help me to know I'm headed in the right direction :) Thanks. Lisa
I loved the first mix you put up of this track, so when i saw this one i had to have a listen. I must say i think you have done a fantastic job with. the vocals work well. it has a deep emotive feel, and after reading your description it's easy to see why. i think it's beautiful that you are maikng music from the heart and not out just to make money. although i think you probably could. peace and progress...
I'm glad that you liked this. I couldn't see myself making music just for the sake of a few $$... it takes too much out of me to only be for that purpose, you know? I am planning on putting together a cd once I have enough tracks worthy of it, mainly because I've been asked by a lot of the folks I did the karaoke thing with (and a lot of my friends as well). It will be a small production, I can't afford to go all out... and maybe I'll make some money to put toward my kids, who knows :-) ... but money or no money I'll still make music, it's not a want, it's a need hehe. Thanks for listening and for the nice review.
cool track. keep going and make that track that defines you. You do have really talent, don't let anything get in the way! keep it up. what are your future plans for getting signed? lookin for away in although i don't think my tracks are good enough yet.. I have found a website that puts unsigned artists alongside the pros which you can make money from. it lets you know the standard we are both striving for. http://www.audiojelly.com/index.cfm?action=unsigned_genre.cfm?id=Trance peace.
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