Very nice clean sound well laid out.
A hint of Kraftwerk type influence?
I like it.
I too have uploaded a track called The Factory but mine consists only of industrial sounds/machinery.
I spent weeks manipulating the sounds to make it as musical as possible.
How about you check it out tell me what you think?
Where yours is very clean and well balanced I don't think mine is so much.
Yours has a lot of commercial value I think where mine is just an experimental thing.
Love your track.
Sounds nothing like Reggae to me but it does sound like a great little tune.
Just had a listen to the other track you uploaded and that's pretty neat one too.
I'd have labelled them both cinematic to be honest.
Powerful stuff.
Thanks buddy, I'd never properly listened to Reggae before, and the only reason I made this was for our world music project, where we had to make a song in the style of a country's traditional/signature genre.
This is a pretty dated song now, I had made it way before I uploaded it, it's not a very accurate representation of my 'skill', I'll be uploading a new one as soon as I'm able.
Can't fault the finished product here.
Very well put together.
I just read the colab idea you posed on my thread.
I'll take that as a compliment and maybe some time a bit further down the road because I just can't commit to anything right now .... that reality stuff is taking way to much of my time just now but ... I will escape promise ya!
Typo there ... it was meant to say I actually like the softer kick in this.
Just listened to half human and that's gotta a helluva a kick and it should have in that piece but this one to me sounds right being a little softer.
thanks man i really appreciate it i know the drums were a little dim and all but i can work on that in my next songs which will indeed be melodic like this one cx
Ok I'm ##### faced right now.
Being ##### faced gives me the advantage of being a simple listener for pleaeure .... gddit?
No how did he do rthi that blah.
I'm actually here enhjoyig people stiff/.
I like this a lot has a lo of potential.
and i H Think I
I';lll coke vack tomorrow sorry hjus t can't sto[p laughing/reat trtack.
Richie is right about the vocals being in the wrong place.
It's like a three minute intro and a minutes singing at the end.
It's a shame cos there's a good piece here.
Sorry to be negative but the vocals seem to have been buried ... swamped.
I can't really make them out very much.
Sounds like a good piece but badly produced.
Summats not right with it in my headphones but it sounds like a good piece that needs re approaching.
Please don't shoot me.
1.47 to 2.06 had to write that down before I forget ... no pen handy for some reason.
I think you have got a great little number going here with a title suiting the mood of what you have put together.
But but but ... at 1.47 it fails.
The change over is wrong.
So I'd change or re do the bit between 1.47 and 2.06.
I'd also work on volume levels on the different tracks because to me it sounds flat ... no depth ... all samples at the same volume.
I'd also want a little base background in there ... maybe a drone who's volume changes here and there along the way.
I wouldn't change the piece itself though because it sounds very Arabian Nights and I can imagine people downloading it and using it in youtube vids so don't be surprised if you come across it on youtube.
I absolutely love your voice Billy.
I love your spirituality too.
A truth seeker and preacher of love and hope.
A people person beyond doubt.
A man for justice.
I might vote for you as king.
Let my people go?
Funny but I'm trying to write a piece at the moment regarding austerity for the common man so the wealthy elite feel no discomfort.
The demand for luxury yachts is outstripping supply while more and more people go hungry stateless homeless and fall into despair.
You have a magical presence that draws me in.
In fact I think you should see about getting a job as a voice over artist.
Great little number mate.
This is not getting the attention it deserves in my humble opinion.
You need to get your ass out on other peoples tracks to get this back in the charts my man.
No one will see your work if you don't comment on their stuff.
It's often the way on Looperman that comments on tracks can be verbose and occassionally miss the point. In this case I'm just knocked out with the brevity and hope the WOW means WOW what a great track (I'm hoping it does). Many thanks for stopping by and listening.
hello Silverman. Thank you for listening and taking your effortless effort to leave a comment. I much appreciate that! First of all I respect you a lot so do not worry. thanks for such an abstract comment by the way. Glad I coud help giving your works more exposure too at that time (had no idea of the particular looperman circumstances). Best to you, Alex
CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's the title.
Wonderful the piece of music.
For some reason around the 1.50 mark it started raining ... in your piece and in my head ... I had to look out the window but no nice Sunny day.
But I could almost smell the warm rain ... how weird is that.
I went back to the start and sure enough at the same point rain is evoked in my imagination.
A pleasant welcome warm drizzle.
I think you've made a very interesting piece of music there and it's gone in my favourites.
Love it.
Title ... just don't get it ... doesn't match my warm rainy shower experience at all.
Look forward to hearing more from you.
Very pleasant experience indeed.
Have no idea what the original would of consisted of but this is brilliant.
Sounds very pro to my consumer ears.
I actually like the sax. It's a little muted as opposed to brash and in your face and I think that suits this piece very well.
Only slight niggle I have is the base that comes in at 2.47.
That to me doesn't quite sit but but but .... I have a hangover and may well change my mind after the fog has lifted.
Hey Silver man,
Thanks for the kind words! I really had fun making this track, and I'm glad that you find it professional sounding! About the niggle(that just sounds racist to me. lmao) having to do with the bass at 2:47; it is the same bass that comes in at 1:16, so it may just be the hangover lol.
Anyways, thanks so much again for the feedback!
Rico L.
I might have to do a honky version of this because here in the U.K and indeed across the western world poverty is a growing political aim.
The Ghetto will stretch from forever to forever before long.
The demand for luxury yachts is outstripping supply but living in the fifthe wealthiest nation on the planet means we can no longer afford to look after our sick and disabled and old.
Looks like living in America the wealthiest country in history is the same ... the people black or white really don't matter.
If the wealthiest countries on the planet can't look after their people there's not much hope for any of us.
I'm going to write a song about it ... you just inspired me.
Nice tune sorry mate rant over.
I might have to do a honky version of this because here in the U.K and indeed across the western world poverty is a growing political aim.
The Ghetto will stretch from forever to forever before long.
The demand for luxury yachts is outstripping supply but living in the fifthe wealthiest nation on the planet means we can no longer afford to look after our sick and disabled and old.
Looks like living in America the wealthiest country in history is the same ... the people black or white really don't matter.
If the walthiest countries on the planet can't look after their people theres not much hope for any of us.
I'm going to write a song about it ... you just inspired me.
Nice tune sorry mate rant over.
on The factory by IndoTronic
A hint of Kraftwerk type influence?
I like it.
I too have uploaded a track called The Factory but mine consists only of industrial sounds/machinery.
I spent weeks manipulating the sounds to make it as musical as possible.
How about you check it out tell me what you think?
Where yours is very clean and well balanced I don't think mine is so much.
Yours has a lot of commercial value I think where mine is just an experimental thing.
Love your track.
on College Work - Reggae by MatthewWLang
Just had a listen to the other track you uploaded and that's pretty neat one too.
I'd have labelled them both cinematic to be honest.
Powerful stuff.
This is a pretty dated song now, I had made it way before I uploaded it, it's not a very accurate representation of my 'skill', I'll be uploading a new one as soon as I'm able.
on TRVPCITY ALLSTARS - TH3 FIXXX3R by fixxx3r
Very well put together.
I just read the colab idea you posed on my thread.
I'll take that as a compliment and maybe some time a bit further down the road because I just can't commit to anything right now .... that reality stuff is taking way to much of my time just now but ... I will escape promise ya!
on BlackMagik - Last Light by BlackMagiko
Just listened to half human and that's gotta a helluva a kick and it should have in that piece but this one to me sounds right being a little softer.
on BlackMagik - Last Light by BlackMagiko
I like the piano coming in at I think 0.54.
Very pleasant and together little tune.
I actually the soft kick.
on 05 In Here Forever by Eighteen
sorry .
tmx fpr tje konsd wirks
amd chresss! :)
~Eighteen
on 05 In Here Forever by Eighteen
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on 05 In Here Forever by Eighteen
Being ##### faced gives me the advantage of being a simple listener for pleaeure .... gddit?
No how did he do rthi that blah.
I'm actually here enhjoyig people stiff/.
I like this a lot has a lo of potential.
and i H Think I
I';lll coke vack tomorrow sorry hjus t can't sto[p laughing/reat trtack.
on Play All Day Feat Epic Record by DrvanLansberg
It's like a three minute intro and a minutes singing at the end.
It's a shame cos there's a good piece here.
on Play All Day Feat Epic Record by DrvanLansberg
on Play All Day Feat Epic Record by DrvanLansberg
I can't really make them out very much.
Sounds like a good piece but badly produced.
Summats not right with it in my headphones but it sounds like a good piece that needs re approaching.
Please don't shoot me.
on Arabian Nights by ReonN
I think you have got a great little number going here with a title suiting the mood of what you have put together.
But but but ... at 1.47 it fails.
The change over is wrong.
So I'd change or re do the bit between 1.47 and 2.06.
I'd also work on volume levels on the different tracks because to me it sounds flat ... no depth ... all samples at the same volume.
I'd also want a little base background in there ... maybe a drone who's volume changes here and there along the way.
I wouldn't change the piece itself though because it sounds very Arabian Nights and I can imagine people downloading it and using it in youtube vids so don't be surprised if you come across it on youtube.
on Let My People Go by Billydragon1
I love your spirituality too.
A truth seeker and preacher of love and hope.
A people person beyond doubt.
A man for justice.
I might vote for you as king.
Let my people go?
Funny but I'm trying to write a piece at the moment regarding austerity for the common man so the wealthy elite feel no discomfort.
The demand for luxury yachts is outstripping supply while more and more people go hungry stateless homeless and fall into despair.
You have a magical presence that draws me in.
In fact I think you should see about getting a job as a voice over artist.
Great little number mate.
Me as a king ...nah mate, i'm just here to serve. :)
You should definitely pursue that idea you have. Incidentally i did write something about money a long time ago, maybe this will help. The track should be on my page too.
http://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/4658/money-by-billydragon1-140bpm-spoken-word-acapella
Thanks for the feedback and ideas too. God bless you cuz.
Blessings - B.
on GangstaWalK TRVP R3MIX - TH3 FIXXX3R by fixxx3r
You need to get your ass out on other peoples tracks to get this back in the charts my man.
No one will see your work if you don't comment on their stuff.
on I cant make you love me featuring Lisa Worth by RichieWinn
It's often the way on Looperman that comments on tracks can be verbose and occassionally miss the point. In this case I'm just knocked out with the brevity and hope the WOW means WOW what a great track (I'm hoping it does). Many thanks for stopping by and listening.
Best
Richie
on Union With Creation by Couchie
on The Source ft FutureAnalysis by promenade2239
Can't fault it from here.
It reminds me of something from way back but have no idea what.
Going in my favourites.
on GangstaWalK TRVP R3MIX - TH3 FIXXX3R by fixxx3r
That's the title.
Wonderful the piece of music.
For some reason around the 1.50 mark it started raining ... in your piece and in my head ... I had to look out the window but no nice Sunny day.
But I could almost smell the warm rain ... how weird is that.
I went back to the start and sure enough at the same point rain is evoked in my imagination.
A pleasant welcome warm drizzle.
I think you've made a very interesting piece of music there and it's gone in my favourites.
Love it.
Title ... just don't get it ... doesn't match my warm rainy shower experience at all.
Look forward to hearing more from you.
on A Quercus Among Acers by Evisma
Sounds very well put together.
Evan
on SHE ROCKS by Timmons2
Great voice for this kind of thing too.
on Running nowhere by smallpaul
on This Could Be Love-Tropical Remix by 15ludwicke
Have no idea what the original would of consisted of but this is brilliant.
Sounds very pro to my consumer ears.
I actually like the sax. It's a little muted as opposed to brash and in your face and I think that suits this piece very well.
Only slight niggle I have is the base that comes in at 2.47.
That to me doesn't quite sit but but but .... I have a hangover and may well change my mind after the fog has lifted.
Thanks for the kind words! I really had fun making this track, and I'm glad that you find it professional sounding! About the niggle(that just sounds racist to me. lmao) having to do with the bass at 2:47; it is the same bass that comes in at 1:16, so it may just be the hangover lol.
Anyways, thanks so much again for the feedback!
Rico L.
on Niggaz suffering in the ghetto by omeezedalegato
The Ghetto will stretch from forever to forever before long.
The demand for luxury yachts is outstripping supply but living in the fifthe wealthiest nation on the planet means we can no longer afford to look after our sick and disabled and old.
Looks like living in America the wealthiest country in history is the same ... the people black or white really don't matter.
If the wealthiest countries on the planet can't look after their people there's not much hope for any of us.
I'm going to write a song about it ... you just inspired me.
Nice tune sorry mate rant over.
on Running nowhere by smallpaul
on Running nowhere by smallpaul
The Ghetto will stretch from forever to forever before long.
The demand for luxury yachts is outstripping supply but living in the fifthe wealthiest nation on the planet means we can no longer afford to look after our sick and disabled and old.
Looks like living in America the wealthiest country in history is the same ... the people black or white really don't matter.
If the walthiest countries on the planet can't look after their people theres not much hope for any of us.
I'm going to write a song about it ... you just inspired me.
Nice tune sorry mate rant over.