silverman

Nice moody piece.
Needs a deep smooth male voice to make it complete for me.

Great track.
I think you should invite this young lady over to put the finishing touches to it ....https://www.looperman.com/users/profile/1243551

Not really my kind of stuff this ... bit like the last track I put together not my kind of stuff but my kids were into it so I thought I'd give it a go.
Had a listen and noticed that five people have downloaded it but no one has commented ... very strange.
Had a listen to your other tracks too.
It's obvious you're putting the effort in but I'm suspecting you may well be a little to experimental.
To experimental with a genre that's already faded I think.
People are expecting certain turns phrases spaces ups and downs and because you throw caution to the wind and don't do what's expected it's not grabbing anyones attention long enough.
That's my take on it anyway.
Conform you rebel or .... get experimental in your own creative original kind of stuff maybe.
I think if you want to do this kind of stuff you'll have to conform to certain restraints or completely reinvent it.

I experience the same kind of thing.
I do everything on headphones.
I then put on a disc and go for a late night drive and listen to it in the car .... it sounds nothing like I expected but it has given me valuable information to go home with.
All the different instruments sounds tracks cannot ever all be at the same volume or it sounds pooh.
It's a brash jangle or a muted mess.
The volumes and the pan (position) should vary throughout the track never staying the same. Sometimes subtley sometimes not so.
Get me sounding like the expert ... I'm not I just do this stuff as my number oner one hobby.
It's a big learning curve for sure.
I'm playing about with loops and VST'S mostly.

It might be me because ... this is the second track I've had a listen to in the last fifteen minutes and the volume seems all wrong.
The levels know what I mean?
It could well be me though.

I agree about the intro too.
To long and doesn't seem to be in the right tune.
Once the intro has passed what a great piece!
Sounds clean well put together and the important thing for me .... very listenable.
I dont buy music because of how it was put together I buy it because it flicks the right reward swithes in the pleasure centres of my brain and this flicked them switches.
Great littel piece.

I don't like that space at the begining just doesn't time right.
But fantastic and very commercial sounding piece to my ears.
Full of joy and youth and sunshine.
Sounds very clean cut and neat.
Sounds fun sounds positive sounds fantastic.

Listened to your stuff and like this one the bestest.

Amusing indeed and well done.

Spooky spooky and really well put together.

Wow full of sunshine!
I've been listening to a lot of the dark stuff on here and to then listen to this really feels like a burst of sunshine.
This is not a put down but in the not to distant past I had to watch a lot of Teletubies with a grandchld and this took me to Teletubbie land.
Great potential here for tv stuff.

Very nice.
Very German prog from the eighties with a more updated feel.
Very smooth and well put together.

Love it.
Very smooth very pro sounding.

I came back for second helpings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kinell man I'm exhausted after that!!
Did anyone manage to rescue the kid with the fat head and the bloodshot eyes?
I need to go and lie down ......

Simple repetitive and grabbed me straight away and kept me to the end.
Very nice vibe .

Sounds fantastic ... sadly to short.

I don't like Hip Hop.
Hang about ... I didn't like Hip Hop.
I still don't want to like Hip Hop but I like that ... a lot ... can we call it something else?
Very nicely put together and such a laid back sound.
I'm an old fart I don't like Hip Hop!
Sounds very pro to me .....

One very cool laid back number.
I could drive along the coastal express way(A55 in N. Wales the U.K) at two in the morning with that playing no problem.
A55 is my favourite late night road when I want to be alone and listening to stuff ... It's my realtime environment these days for listening.
Very nice piece.

I feel so unqualified to speak.
But I do have some qualifications.
Two ears and the love of music sound noise the breeze in the trees and the sounds in the grass and on the beach.
I mention those things because this just feels so natural ... so comfortable.
Not sure what it sounds like but it feels wonderful ... kind of wraps around my synapses in a spiritual kind of way.
Lovely.
Three favourites today and all very very different from each other.

I love it.
It takes me back somewhere I think I've been but might not have but it takes me back there .... I think.
Very dark and reminds me of the German prog rock days of Kraftwerk and that isn't and in insult by any means.
Back in those days I used to occasionally take some tablets .... only very very very small ones mind.
I think that's possibly where I think you might be taking me back to but the flash back wall is strong and stable.
I'm rambling.
Love it looking forward to more.
Will play this for my twelve year old grandson tomorrow when he's round because he loves this dark kind of stuff.
He'll probably comment using my account but I'll make it clear it's him.
Keep it up.

See another guy o here is calling it house!
Help me out here I need to learn my genres.

Love the tempo drop at 1.07 and total mood change to dreamy dreamland.
I'm sure it wouldn't have worked for me if I'd tried that but it works great and then again at 3.37 a total mood and mindscape alteration.
I'll be giving this another listen later for a little inspiation.
I see you've put it as Trance ... I' useless at knowing these genres. I've just done a banging one and thought it was Techno.
Please excuse me I'm an old fart and there seems to be so many genres these days that I really have no idea.
To me ... It's only rock n roll but I like it.
Great tune mate.

Very very pleasant.
Relaxing.
Thoughtful.
In my unqualfied opinion it sounds fantastic as it is.
Really nice vibe to it.

You have a great singing voice and presence.
Love the way the guitar just blasts in and knocks me off my feet!
Very well done.
A congregation of love ?