You have been able to "play" with the voices of a good way .... even though the voice of Patricia is a bit in the "cotton" and not clear enough (at least on my system) ....
Aside from that, I like your concept, and the idea of bringing together these two "divas" is original and well thought ....
Thanks Dan. I spent a lot of time getting the voices good. I had to cut up both tracks to make them fit. About the 'cotton effect', I don't hear this. Maybe the compression (under 10 mb) required on Looperman is too much? There is a 11 MB version on SoundCloud. I have tested the track on 3 different soundsystems and it came out okay. Thanks for the comments!
Mélange pas toujours "Heureux" mais qui tente rien, n'a rien n'est ce pas!
Je t'encourage à persévérer car il y a de bonnes choses ici, malgré tout.
Il n'est pas toujours évident de "travailler" sur différents pellas .... mais pas d’inquiétude, j'ai entendu pire ....
Bonne chance pour la suite ....
c'est toujours instructif d'ecouter les critiques je suis en train de la modifier et j'espere que ce soir je la mettrais en ligne.
j'aurais souhaite travailler avec d'autres personnes mais malheureusement je suis seul et franchement cela n'est pas evident
GF
Me, I believe that it's well, because your concept is original, with enough variations to give interest ....
Thank you for sharing this moment and these harmonies.
I encourage you to persevere in this way ....
I am very grateful that you took the time to check this out. I think that my ideas are original, no doubt. However, is being original going to put me out there up to other's status quo? I am going to keep doing my thing, regardless. Thanks man!
Thank-you for such a great description, i agree, this track is so low in the mix that (like you say) the saturation seem none existent, when i get it mastered, it will sound so much better :) thanks for the comment.
The bass bring certain depth to this music .... and the voices of greatness. I love this concept .... and I hi here your particular talent.
This is an unexpected music, and I thank you for sharing this moment of great intensity ....
Perfect (although nothing is perfect in this world) .... I appreciate here, your concept and it's great success of integrating the voice ....
This is ingenious, all as the mix of good quality .... Do not be modest, because your work is excellent.
I nearly to miss this great track .... As usual the quality of a good musician you are is to go (au rendez-vous in French), here ....
You have been able to give at the voice of Stephanie, the elements, and the support quite suitable.
Your brief appearance, are always accompanied by a musical component of high quality .... I'm a fan of your concepts.
Thank you to share this moment of great intensity .... see you soon.
I remain pleasantly surprised, listening to this very nice track.
Aside from the usual small plaisenteries in our mutual comments .... I confess that I have great interest in what you are doing .... Because there are a lot of personality, ingenuity, and also the talent to realize your concepts, your themes ....
In short .... It's great your piece here .... and sorry for the delay to listen.
First, you're like a lot of people here .... Who have only the pleasure of sharing a musical moment.
I encourage you to percéverer, because what I just heard, is very nice, although a bit short to really appreciate ....
Thank you for us carry in your musical world .... I hope you find here or elsewhere the singer that will give the interpretation adapted for your musical talent ....
Again, I like what you have done, and this theme ....
Je t'ai déjà exprimé ailleurs, ce que je pensais de ta production avec Pete .... Je te renouvelle ici, toutes mes félicitations, et mon support .... C'est vraiment génial.
No! I just enjoyed your "work" at fair value .... Being a fan of the voice of Carole, I also appreciate the respect of the vocal part that you have brought here.
Again, congratulations, and good luck for the future ....
This is a good theme, good melody, who I honestly think, needs to evolve.
For example by providing some voice and providing a bit more shades because very repetitive after a while. Forgive me, but I write my feelings by listening ....
This in no way detracts your creative talent .... and your good ideas.
Have you tried to propose, your music to a singer? Your orchestrations are sufficient and good quality to try this challenge.
A simple friend's advice, of course ....
Bless you Dan, I love your honesty, that's why I asked you to checkout the track for me, your right of course its missing vocals and my acoustic guitar and where there are repetitive passages, it would be played, or filled in by a lead guitar, unfortunately not my 'forte' so the track becomes more expressive. over the next few weeks l will be buying some gear that will allow me to record live through Cubase, that's been my main problem, very frustrating. this might be the push I need, and I'm very grateful for your thoughts. peace to you Dan. Mickey
A magical moment here ....
The "Floyd" guitar is very impressive, which I am unconditional.
Again a lot of professionalism here .... and when I read your bio, I understand everything.
Thank you for sharing this moment of great intensity.
FANTASTIC .... Woooow! you know to wrap, the voice of Carole, of a nice melody, and with beautiful harmonies. With so little instrument, you are able to create this great atmosphere .... You have a great talent.
I love what you've done here .... and thank you for sharing this magical moment, this moment so intense ....
Congratulations.
Thank you so much! I can't believe these comments are sent regarding a song I was involved in. I spent many hours polishing this song and your comment along made all the hard work worth the effort.
Your comment seemed to suggest that maybe "I #####" on the song. I want to be clear Carole did ALL the vocals (Whispers, Singing and Rap).
You have an exceptional voice, and I'm sorry to find you so late here .... This jazz interpretation and its accompaniment are very well done.
I have great respect for the voices that accompany me in my musical adventures .... in another style, another area, but if you feel like it ....
Listen to some of my arrangements, and if you are interested, we can consider collaboration .... For fun, of course.
Thank you for sharing, of this instant ....
The concept is good, although a bit repetitive in its progress, but I like the harmonies used here. It's your voice?
Perhaps a demo, but already well accomplished for me .... I encourage you to persevere.
You have done well to make us listen to this very contemporary track, and in a style very "dance".
The voice is very smooth and harmonious, the mix very correct.
Some FX effects, could be suprime, but it is minor in this set.
Thank you for sharing this instant, and congratulations to you both ....
As the "fever of Saturday evening" with a very personal touch.
A good time, as can do my Canadian friends.
Thank you for sharing this instant, and lead us in this musical fever from another era.
on Miss You feat Patricia Edwards and Janis71 by DjoeGio
You have been able to "play" with the voices of a good way .... even though the voice of Patricia is a bit in the "cotton" and not clear enough (at least on my system) ....
Aside from that, I like your concept, and the idea of bringing together these two "divas" is original and well thought ....
Dan
on Janis71 by gfdeux
Mélange pas toujours "Heureux" mais qui tente rien, n'a rien n'est ce pas!
Je t'encourage à persévérer car il y a de bonnes choses ici, malgré tout.
Il n'est pas toujours évident de "travailler" sur différents pellas .... mais pas d’inquiétude, j'ai entendu pire ....
Bonne chance pour la suite ....
Dan
j'aurais souhaite travailler avec d'autres personnes mais malheureusement je suis seul et franchement cela n'est pas evident
GF
on Unknown by MisterBloodworth
Me, I believe that it's well, because your concept is original, with enough variations to give interest ....
Thank you for sharing this moment and these harmonies.
I encourage you to persevere in this way ....
Dan
~Ookami
on Lost and Found by HPVM
Very good concept, with enough variations to give interest .... You "play" with the reverb very cleverly.
A good trip to the harmonies, but attention to the dynamic sometimes the saturation limit (at least on my systhème) ....
Thank you for sharing this moment ....
Dan
on The Mystical Way by JabariG62
Unfortunate that the theme is repetitive .... but the sax brings nuances that make you forget this detail ....
Dan
on Mystery of Sound by Themebenzo
The bass bring certain depth to this music .... and the voices of greatness. I love this concept .... and I hi here your particular talent.
This is an unexpected music, and I thank you for sharing this moment of great intensity ....
Dan
on I Feel FT Tara Toxic by brillbilly
Perfect (although nothing is perfect in this world) .... I appreciate here, your concept and it's great success of integrating the voice ....
This is ingenious, all as the mix of good quality .... Do not be modest, because your work is excellent.
Dan
Sometimes less is more when the vocals are so beautiful.!
I just let this track move along with Tara's Beautiful vocals!.
Thank you very much for your very kind comments.!
Im lost for words when it comes to taking so much loving compliments.!
Thank you Dear friend!
on I dont need you featuring Stephanie Kay by RichieWinn
I nearly to miss this great track .... As usual the quality of a good musician you are is to go (au rendez-vous in French), here ....
You have been able to give at the voice of Stephanie, the elements, and the support quite suitable.
Your brief appearance, are always accompanied by a musical component of high quality .... I'm a fan of your concepts.
Thank you to share this moment of great intensity .... see you soon.
Dan
It's great to hear from you and many many thanks for your kind words.
Richie
on Sensuality by crucethus
I remain pleasantly surprised, listening to this very nice track.
Aside from the usual small plaisenteries in our mutual comments .... I confess that I have great interest in what you are doing .... Because there are a lot of personality, ingenuity, and also the talent to realize your concepts, your themes ....
In short .... It's great your piece here .... and sorry for the delay to listen.
Dan
on Thief In The Night by MWRatridge
Your voice is a little far here .... damage
Dan
on sweat - toxic x voltage by arashsinghbagri
First, you're like a lot of people here .... Who have only the pleasure of sharing a musical moment.
I encourage you to percéverer, because what I just heard, is very nice, although a bit short to really appreciate ....
Dan
thank's a lot for your precious comment ... :-)
nd thank's to encourage me....
.. ur this comment boost my energy to do more tracks ..:-)
on MAYBE SOME OTHER TIME by Mykael
The stereo is special here .... with your voice far left (on my system). I like this effect that gives some "relief" of Music "Live" ....
the Track to evolve perhaps, but it's a good approach for me ....
Dan
Love & Light,
Mykael
on PART10 by Abysss
Thank you for us carry in your musical world .... I hope you find here or elsewhere the singer that will give the interpretation adapted for your musical talent ....
Again, I like what you have done, and this theme ....
Dan
on Bonnie Rabson I want to Soap rock edit by Soap
Les chemins se croisent .... Encore une fois ici.
C'est vraiment du très bon boulot, ta production. Très professionnel.
Je n'ai même pas eu le temps de "décortiquer" .... l'imprégnation est si forte ....
Dan
Dur de rater son coup avec une si jolie voix à portée de clic ;)
Peace
Chris
on PeteJonTebar Doing the best I can by Soap
Je t'ai déjà exprimé ailleurs, ce que je pensais de ta production avec Pete .... Je te renouvelle ici, toutes mes félicitations, et mon support .... C'est vraiment génial.
Dan
Chris.
on Spirit of Music - Feat Janis71 by craigers01
No! I just enjoyed your "work" at fair value .... Being a fan of the voice of Carole, I also appreciate the respect of the vocal part that you have brought here.
Again, congratulations, and good luck for the future ....
Dan
on Crimson Highway by mickey1160
This is a good theme, good melody, who I honestly think, needs to evolve.
For example by providing some voice and providing a bit more shades because very repetitive after a while. Forgive me, but I write my feelings by listening ....
This in no way detracts your creative talent .... and your good ideas.
Have you tried to propose, your music to a singer? Your orchestrations are sufficient and good quality to try this challenge.
A simple friend's advice, of course ....
Dan
on the omega answer by supertex
A magical moment here .... Yes! Excellent
Thank you for sharing this moment of great intensity.
Dan
-andrea
on PART 7 by Abysss
A magical moment here ....
The "Floyd" guitar is very impressive, which I am unconditional.
Again a lot of professionalism here .... and when I read your bio, I understand everything.
Thank you for sharing this moment of great intensity.
Dan
on Spirit of Music - Feat Janis71 by craigers01
FANTASTIC .... Woooow! you know to wrap, the voice of Carole, of a nice melody, and with beautiful harmonies. With so little instrument, you are able to create this great atmosphere .... You have a great talent.
I love what you've done here .... and thank you for sharing this magical moment, this moment so intense ....
Congratulations.
Dan
Your comment seemed to suggest that maybe "I #####" on the song. I want to be clear Carole did ALL the vocals (Whispers, Singing and Rap).
Thanks!
Craig
on Digital - Alex Chamberlain by donalexz
Un good moment of guitare here .... You have a certain talent and a lot of dexterity.
Dan
on While You Were Sleeping by BrandonMichelle
You have an exceptional voice, and I'm sorry to find you so late here .... This jazz interpretation and its accompaniment are very well done.
I have great respect for the voices that accompany me in my musical adventures .... in another style, another area, but if you feel like it ....
Listen to some of my arrangements, and if you are interested, we can consider collaboration .... For fun, of course.
Thank you for sharing, of this instant ....
Dan
Respectfully,
Brandon Michelle
on Surreal by Killumineye
The concept is good, although a bit repetitive in its progress, but I like the harmonies used here. It's your voice?
Perhaps a demo, but already well accomplished for me .... I encourage you to persevere.
Dan
on Let it Slide by Abysss
You have done well to make us listen to this very contemporary track, and in a style very "dance".
The voice is very smooth and harmonious, the mix very correct.
Some FX effects, could be suprime, but it is minor in this set.
Thank you for sharing this instant, and congratulations to you both ....
Dan
on I know you are Insane by crucethus
As the "fever of Saturday evening" with a very personal touch.
A good time, as can do my Canadian friends.
Thank you for sharing this instant, and lead us in this musical fever from another era.
Dan