As a master of Metal and all things goth/Screamo (im a screamo vocalist) - I cant stand this track to me it unfortunately sounds like a mash-up of saturday night live, chav induced violence, mixed with fruity loops presets.
Only problem i can tell is the backing has a low end distortion that is constantly all the way through. as if you've been using a low end recorder and then edited it, as the distortion skips.
So apart from the swoosh wooosh, skip wooosh, in the back its fine.
Hey slap, that collab is around the corner as soon as i get my beat running properly. (and call me jez :P)
So what can i say about this ska track, hmm, being in a ska band once, i can say this is awesome work mate, the melody, your horn/sax work and mastering are just sky rockets to the moon, with jelly and icecream for all :)
As always ska is close to my heart and thus, you've made me a happy bloke today :P
Chilled out beat, the changes are good, but the track lacks a sense of direction (if u get my meaning)
Its lead is on the slight repititive side, and overall i guess the track is too short to really derive a good review of what could be added or follow.
This is a good starting point, the track could be made longer with a chorus line, and an ending that sounds completely or close to completely different.
Dont get my wrong most of my first stuff sounded the same way, but with guidance and of course the looper crowd expanded further.
It was just an idea that I had at the time so i wasn't really going in a set direction, i was willing to let the creative process go ahead of a planned set structure. All music is repetitive for a set period of time until it switches up. I have to agree that it is a good starting point because the track itself isn't a very long piece of work. None of your work sounds like this because I made this.
sounds like a college party i went to once, when i got totally smashed and everything sounded like one, but your track doesnt, it has a clear and even set pieces, and yea reading planets review it does need some high end or low end action. I was thinking maybe some kind of aborignie (i cant spell it) dancing or something, that would go well with such and organic arrangement,
Thanks DJ_JEZZA. High and low end action...this has got me thinking about the possibility of a drone weaving in and out as well. I'm going to pull up the multi-track and see what might work. Thanks!
techno/dance with a small dubstyle bassline, i wouldnt mind having the files to this if you didnt mind? - im using logic/reason, fruity loops, cubase and ab live, so if u like email me and ill hook u back (from my looper links)
I would gladly collab a remix of sorts to this if possible, or collab a new track and let u play with my ropes if u get the drift.
the lyrics....
Your down again,
I can see that you'v been cheated.
And your heart has been mistreated.
Dont you worry, girl I got you,
I'll revove this cloud your under.
You can trust me, you will never need another.
I'll bring you through your morning sunrise.
I can hear you call, im here for you..
Be your every thing,
take you far from your misery.
Chorus
I can hear you heart,
I can hear your heart like thunder
I could be just what you'v been dreaming of.
I'll remove this cloud your under, and
bring you through your mourning sunrise.
The pain is deep,
and the words they are still ringing.
In your thoughts the nightmare singing.
you can fight this, I will help you.
By your side I'll be here waiting.
You will make it,
Be your bridge I'll, take you over.
And bring you through your mourning sunrise...
Thanks for the listen Jezza, was not sure what phase meant so Wikied it and: The term, like sentence, verse etc. has been adopted into the vocabulary of music from linguistic syntax. Though the analogy between the musical and the linguistic phrase is often made, still the term "is one of the most ambiguous in music....there is no consistency in applying these terms nor can there be...only with melodies of a very simple type, especially those of some dances, can the terms be used with some consistency." So it's me and evry one else :-)
Nevertheless I agree with your comment, I don't this mix of two elements stands up to close examination, and I wish I could have done a better job with Eshars track, still trying to grow, with very little time between work and well you know the rest of things............. Peace.
thought i'd hit u back on the great review u popped one of my tracks, love the bass on this tad on the overload of the eq though (and i got a top end system) - nothing a filter on my bass unit cant fix though ;)
Apart from that, good vivid lines and synths.
however i do think it needs breaking up a little faster, with the parts and one of the synths needs a tune up?
Cool Vibers, I'm a bit out of touch with the music scene at the moment, but i love this "outdated" feel, its rather refreshing and all the pieces fit together perfectly.
on For My Daddy I love U so much by Becca
But overall its a nice track, id put this more into "house" really.
on Evil by BeeDeeEYE
on John Browns Body-Ghost Dubs-ultrabase mix by ultrabase
But hey you hit it up nicely on this track :)
Its cheered me up and im in a deep deep depressive mood :(
Grats on the ace vibe.
i'm glad i have cheered you up a bit,the power of music ;)
on On Edge by SweetRampaige
But i do give u dibs for trying.
on My Brain Is Working Overtime feat. Rivers Cuomo by SoundsOfEscape
Only problem i can tell is the backing has a low end distortion that is constantly all the way through. as if you've been using a low end recorder and then edited it, as the distortion skips.
So apart from the swoosh wooosh, skip wooosh, in the back its fine.
DJ_JEZZA
on TabbMann - Liquid World by UFlash
Your subtle, changes make all the difference.
on MySpace by lofthouse
Anywho, fresh production, this is more ebm than industrial though, but nvm :P
Keep up the vibe.
Lates
on Keep on pushing through; Global Ska Network by SLAPJOHNSON
So what can i say about this ska track, hmm, being in a ska band once, i can say this is awesome work mate, the melody, your horn/sax work and mastering are just sky rockets to the moon, with jelly and icecream for all :)
As always ska is close to my heart and thus, you've made me a happy bloke today :P
Laters :)
on The Nerve (JUNE All Genre ENTRY) by sobstory
Nice melody, style and composition.
Cant see a flaw in it really lol
DJ_JEZZA
Hope to be uploading more stuff soon.
Thanks again,
on Intro track no hook Instrumental by jai1
Cool vibe, good basslines and nice production.
DJ_JEZZA
on Synthetic Harmony by ZWR
Its lead is on the slight repititive side, and overall i guess the track is too short to really derive a good review of what could be added or follow.
This is a good starting point, the track could be made longer with a chorus line, and an ending that sounds completely or close to completely different.
Dont get my wrong most of my first stuff sounded the same way, but with guidance and of course the looper crowd expanded further.
Thanks for the Upload.
DJ_JEZZA
on Getto Bitches by ScDub
People really shud chill and just let it roll.
Lates.
DJ_JEZZA
on Polyglot Pidgin by n0mad23
Well done as a whole though :)
on something in the air by smallpaul
Jazz style drums go well with this track, the vox, is used well and the track is well mastered.
Seriously I'm surprised I have not come across you before around the loop.
Laters.
DJ_JEZZA
on EVERYDAY REALITY by Cynical_Sense
Other than it is fine.
Lates.
DJ_JEZZA
on Miss You Remix by MJaxx91
Should hear my first track, its like a bull in a china shop ;)
Well keep it up,
DJ_JEZZA
on When it Rains!! by ScavengerDink
Im always up for a collab, hit me up on my links or find my website there ;)
lates.
DJ_JEZZA
on DJ-onny - invectopia by jonnyh4
I would gladly collab a remix of sorts to this if possible, or collab a new track and let u play with my ropes if u get the drift.
tips, tricks, loops let me know i have em ;)
DJ_JEZZA
on mourning sunrise by Dj4Real
I want to test it in a evil style :D
lol sweet collab, slap does a great job, adding to your talents mate, love this piece.
Laters,
JEZ
Your down again,
I can see that you'v been cheated.
And your heart has been mistreated.
Dont you worry, girl I got you,
I'll revove this cloud your under.
You can trust me, you will never need another.
I'll bring you through your morning sunrise.
I can hear you call, im here for you..
Be your every thing,
take you far from your misery.
Chorus
I can hear you heart,
I can hear your heart like thunder
I could be just what you'v been dreaming of.
I'll remove this cloud your under, and
bring you through your mourning sunrise.
The pain is deep,
and the words they are still ringing.
In your thoughts the nightmare singing.
you can fight this, I will help you.
By your side I'll be here waiting.
You will make it,
Be your bridge I'll, take you over.
And bring you through your mourning sunrise...
Chorus.. Its sung along with the sax...
on Falling towards the sky - By Eshar (Gone remix) by Steevo
Only problem i can see is there isnt much of a natural vibe with the lyrics, theres far too much "phase" which, spoils the backing vibe.
but hey keep it up :P
Nevertheless I agree with your comment, I don't this mix of two elements stands up to close examination, and I wish I could have done a better job with Eshars track, still trying to grow, with very little time between work and well you know the rest of things............. Peace.
on 'No Regrets' by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
lol
Seriously favourited and fully enjoyed!
on COME DOWN SELECTOR (bass, guitar, etc) by MiracleManTracks
The idea is good, but as others have said, wheres the bass?
I'll give u a 8/10 for the try though.
DJ_JEZZA
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll repost this in the Jungle/garage area. Appreciate the feedback. Peace and love.
on The Machine by MisterFujisam
Apart from that, good vivid lines and synths.
however i do think it needs breaking up a little faster, with the parts and one of the synths needs a tune up?
Great overall :)
on Ax Dj - O Yeah Man by AndreaDub
Other than that is fine.
Which program u using? - sound like fruity/live to me
the programs i use are : fruty loops, mixcraft 4.5
reason, nuendo and sometimes cubase
on Planting The Seed by MEDICALMARIJUANA
I will keep an eye on your work, see you around.
DJ_JEZZA