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well , I've listened original version & according to really hard harmony & counterpoint in music should tell you it's really hard work you've done & think your cover was very welldone & really admirable .best wishes . __Behnam .

yes, special voice with remarkable & lovely timber in depth, tallented larynx with various abilities which no doubt aren't used to fit intro one track , and obviously admirable for the first attempt .welldone girl .Best wishes & regards .

dear Dave ,althought it's not my genre but I've listened to various house music style tracks in various years ,and think it was really professional & even better than some famous musicians & Bands in its genre & obviously admirable .
I really enjoyed it. best wishes for you .
__Behnam

Bamman , first I should tell you , your name was my first reason to take a look at your profile & your face & think about your nationality & listen to your track .
it's admirable specially for first attempt . think more drum kick & passages could make a powerfull drum line which makes me feel that I'm really listening to a heavy metal track, also a designed * harmonized Intro & ending too , could make it more completed . althought it's quite good enough for first trial . wish my idea hasn't annoyed you . and hope you know I'm an experimental musiscian whose Idea is not such a worthwhile critical opinion you needed to think about it .
regards Bahman,best wishes .

aaahhh ! appologize-I meant to write((yourself laughing recorded sound)) in my comment((written laghing!)) , but my dictation will never get better (hehehe)!

really admirable for the first track !sure if hadn't seen your below notice , Never I could guess this is the first track you've made .suitable & proper usage of loops,some times is harder than making them and shows you're tallented. a vocal line makes it quite complet &(excuse me-but) why don't you think about adding acapella or any machin vocal loops to this , if you don't sing , even some simple voice, like yourself(a woman) laghing recorded sound , gives an exclusive phase & special meaning to such tracks . regards .
__Behnam

shab dreams about the moon & moon dreams about the sun & sun dreams about shab & again shab dreams about the moon & moon dreams . .
seems this cycle has make this beauty trance music,in a night which has missed someone .
khoshhal shodam , va sedat ham amigh va dust dashtani bud. well done man .

hey ! very well done man , today I found a new tallented guy . so I'll look forward your new tracks . Best wishes .
__Behnam

really innovative & admirable , I mrak it fav , sounds like dodecaphonic pieces which I've loved . greatest regards.
__Behnam

an admirable , thoughtfull , heartfull & impressive music & remarkable lyrics . I'd listened to your other tracks before ,but it was most beautifull track from you I've heard here . no doubt as dear Bear has told too , your tallented larynx & innovative mind for best lyrics + Ed = an amazing package .
regards.

heartfull ,gentle,smooth&sentimentall; .every thing was pleasurable for me while listening to & I admire your lyrics too .thanx for sharing it & regards .
__Behnam

well & maybe I first should say ''wellcome'' .
I think alittle more attention & cretitude & training on solfeggio , could considerably make your heartful & beauty lyrics , more impressive . althought & anyway it's very better than my first track .regards.__Behnam

it's 3th time I've tell you Hi today ! hahaha . .
so I don't write anything but my question about collaboration
my question is this
(well , if I'm not an english Vocalist , so is there any way for collabortion ? )
I'll be glad about this one or any other one you may think I can do anything.
waiting your reply . thnx for such completed & welldone track.

well, I've listened your both tracks & both are admirable . first thing which is clear & obvious in both, is tallented larynx which no doubt can easily cover any upper tonalities & some singer girl who knows her style & what is she doing & knows the true intervals notes & also correct respiration while singing. beside & else I liked impressive text (in both)& groovy harmonized melody for this beautifull instrumental track , and at last remarkable usage of your abilities & skills about sensational talking mades a possitive point for remembrable ending part with such a professional & cool narriating in accompaniment of the beats,that I think you can use it as a exclusive style signature in your future tracks . appologize for such a long commenting & regards .
_Behnam

some times bitter accidents , makes the deepest music & your track had followed this rule . I really felt it deep inside & admired you for such a perfect cinematic track . thanx for sharing such beauty . regards .
__Behnam.

well done man , beautifull & innovative tracks which includes complicated counterpoint rules in some moments . it's a hard work & hard harmony & notations also proper modulations that you've done it so perfect. good luck man & best wishes .
__Behnam

I'm glad to find & can listen to another one of your beautifull & recently tracks Mr.Brown . instructive combine & another proper usage of synth lines with high presige mood .well done music ,thancks for sharing & best wishes .
__Behnam .

I listened it & enjoy paulo , I didn't think if you may have such a good point of view about arabian music , just now I'm still in my job office & so I'm in a hurry ,but I'll notice for you later about some little point about arabian instruments & tonalities in their ethnic music harmony ,
but you surprised me with this one too .
& your guitar usage in it learns me alot man .
I admire you & should say really bravo my dear talented friend .Best wishes

hey ! well , I think an innovative one & one of your best & most completed tracks which I've listened , & should congratulate you for such a welldone track . string sounds so real & bright I thought it's a live string lines & your drum passage shows your worthwhile experiments about heavy metal genre which makes you have such a professional mind about membranophonic instruments . goodluck paulo .

think your fusion tracks are always well done man .thoughtfull harmony & counterpoint & proper selected instruments & sounds are admirable in this one too .bestwishes .
__Behnam

well, It's Second track which I've listened to from you .
your Improvement is undeniable , & I'm listening to your more dominance while singing .your sound is more impressive in this track & such Notation & chords ,& I guess some reverb could smooth & add a gloss on your voice which seems forgotten & your voice has not enough reverb .
your improvement rate is admirable ,I mean if you enumerate your mistake rate in this one ,you'll see false moments have decreased to 1.4 than your first track rate ,& obviously more solfeggio trainings will solve such thnigs as soon as you can't believe . & else in the end I wanna tell you I enjoyed your text & your harmonized notes for singing your words in accompaniment of music notes & beats & your proper & good selected notes to harmonized vocal melody & Instrumental chordation were one of the most important reasons which made me to listen your track from first till ending . & think you should appreciate such a melodist mind in yourself brain & pay attention your tallents & skills balance . just may I know if you (yourself) write this lyrics or not ? by the way may I know How do you practice to sing ?have you ever test any machine vocal to sing your harmonized melody instead of your sound before singing & record it ?
+appologize for such long commenting,regards & best wishes.
_Behnam

impressive & interesting style & good stuff guy,I enjoyed it .

well,it's first track I've listened to from you.
groovy intro by proper usage of percussive instruments & then delicate synth line blows into & my favorit moment is @seconds 58'' an innovative modulation & beauty tonality changing in accompaniment with opportune melodic string & airily synth line & at last an impressive ending (@1':27'') by your combained powerchord & splendour of such string duet & still the same good usage of percussive Instruments .
I was waiting to hear your bass when I read your profile but it was quite complete without any bass line too .
well done man . Regards.
__Behnam

innovative & opportune usage of various loops & proper selected guitar notes to accompaniment such electro(synth)beat,was laudable & I enjoyed it . well done idea & certainly tallented mind specially for second track .

hey paulo ! sure it's one of your best track which I've ever heard till now in this short time(best in 6 tracks) , obviously I knew I have a tallented guitarist friend with skillfull fingers which dancing on his fingerboard artistically ,& also I already knew about your ability for composing in various genres , but you surprised me man ! specially about very welldone orchestral intro . I think this track could be a cinematic-or serious game- track too ,I really do admire you in this track my dear friend . I really enjoyed it .best wishes paulo .