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well done man , beautifull & innovative tracks which includes complicated counterpoint rules in some moments . it's a hard work & hard harmony & notations also proper modulations that you've done it so perfect. good luck man & best wishes .
__Behnam

I'm glad to find & can listen to another one of your beautifull & recently tracks Mr.Brown . instructive combine & another proper usage of synth lines with high presige mood .well done music ,thancks for sharing & best wishes .
__Behnam .

I listened it & enjoy paulo , I didn't think if you may have such a good point of view about arabian music , just now I'm still in my job office & so I'm in a hurry ,but I'll notice for you later about some little point about arabian instruments & tonalities in their ethnic music harmony ,
but you surprised me with this one too .
& your guitar usage in it learns me alot man .
I admire you & should say really bravo my dear talented friend .Best wishes

hey ! well , I think an innovative one & one of your best & most completed tracks which I've listened , & should congratulate you for such a welldone track . string sounds so real & bright I thought it's a live string lines & your drum passage shows your worthwhile experiments about heavy metal genre which makes you have such a professional mind about membranophonic instruments . goodluck paulo .

think your fusion tracks are always well done man .thoughtfull harmony & counterpoint & proper selected instruments & sounds are admirable in this one too .bestwishes .
__Behnam

well, It's Second track which I've listened to from you .
your Improvement is undeniable , & I'm listening to your more dominance while singing .your sound is more impressive in this track & such Notation & chords ,& I guess some reverb could smooth & add a gloss on your voice which seems forgotten & your voice has not enough reverb .
your improvement rate is admirable ,I mean if you enumerate your mistake rate in this one ,you'll see false moments have decreased to 1.4 than your first track rate ,& obviously more solfeggio trainings will solve such thnigs as soon as you can't believe . & else in the end I wanna tell you I enjoyed your text & your harmonized notes for singing your words in accompaniment of music notes & beats & your proper & good selected notes to harmonized vocal melody & Instrumental chordation were one of the most important reasons which made me to listen your track from first till ending . & think you should appreciate such a melodist mind in yourself brain & pay attention your tallents & skills balance . just may I know if you (yourself) write this lyrics or not ? by the way may I know How do you practice to sing ?have you ever test any machine vocal to sing your harmonized melody instead of your sound before singing & record it ?
+appologize for such long commenting,regards & best wishes.
_Behnam

impressive & interesting style & good stuff guy,I enjoyed it .

well,it's first track I've listened to from you.
groovy intro by proper usage of percussive instruments & then delicate synth line blows into & my favorit moment is @seconds 58'' an innovative modulation & beauty tonality changing in accompaniment with opportune melodic string & airily synth line & at last an impressive ending (@1':27'') by your combained powerchord & splendour of such string duet & still the same good usage of percussive Instruments .
I was waiting to hear your bass when I read your profile but it was quite complete without any bass line too .
well done man . Regards.
__Behnam

innovative & opportune usage of various loops & proper selected guitar notes to accompaniment such electro(synth)beat,was laudable & I enjoyed it . well done idea & certainly tallented mind specially for second track .

hey paulo ! sure it's one of your best track which I've ever heard till now in this short time(best in 6 tracks) , obviously I knew I have a tallented guitarist friend with skillfull fingers which dancing on his fingerboard artistically ,& also I already knew about your ability for composing in various genres , but you surprised me man ! specially about very welldone orchestral intro . I think this track could be a cinematic-or serious game- track too ,I really do admire you in this track my dear friend . I really enjoyed it .best wishes paulo .

hi,it's first time that I've listened to one of your tracks , & I enjoyed it , beauty,groovy,funky,jazzy & with innovative moments .regards.

well done man, I enjoyed it & instead of anything more about my perception about it,I prefer to listen it more & again.

well. . also when I went to your profile I understood I'd listened some of your other music(your band I mean) randomize before too .& I remembered I had been admired your tallented band . Best wishes.

innovative(but different with progrossive) synth usasge & wholeness total amount welddone.
I enjoyed it & should thank you.
Regards .
__Behnam

Hi,It's your secnd track which I've listened to .
28 seconds beauty seynth intro is enough to present groovy beat Intro in best seconds.then @seconds41''synth bass accompaniment was a proper sound coloure to take us to seconds57'' , when powerfull beat rhythms gets on our notation train .
then,@1':37'' (also @ 2':33'') such a reverse acapaella machine mellody was one of the iinovative moments in
track .also @2"47''such melodic synth was a good Idea .
& at last @3':33'' impressive rhythm was an on time persuation for me to make me follow track till the end .
& fade out was a good Idea for make me accompaniment track till the end .
I enjoyed it ,welldone & groovy track , very better than making music just for fun man !I think you're tallented.
Bestwishes for a kind & gentleman.
Regards

Hi & it's the first track wich I've listened to from you .
& I enjoyed it . groovy beat Intro , & then some hopefull melodic bel line(or I don't know,it's like glockenspiel too)
blows like a good thing to beats & proper synth notes accompaniment them .
well done man.
regards
__Behnam

it's second track which i'm listening to from you & enjoyed both .I admire you again for such a very well done music man Innovative beat for intro,thoroughbred string line to accompaniment with it & Else , somewhere in half of track (there were seconds before the second when again membranophone line backs to this track ,there where some swift piano arpeggio which I really enjoyed . welldone counterpoint & relationship between voices that are harmonically interdependent in your track,which this piano accompaniments , was one of your positive traits in it ,& I really enjoyed . regards .
__Behnam

first time I've listened to one of your track & I just should tell you very well done track man .
really I enjoyed it & admire you for such a complete cinematic track.
regards
__BehnaM

beauty rhythm for guitar intor which your flute acccompaniment makes it more complete .& yes I'm agree with last comment wich is written about lyrics & vocal too .
also while I was listening to your track I was thinking
if it was mine I'd prefered to try on some ocarina or panpipes lines too (U know how great respect I have for you & just I'm writing some idea to you because how I'd told you before I really enjoy how you play your flutes& such instruments)
any way in same version which I heard to it was well done man like you usually are .
regards
___BehnaM

Hi & it was the first track wich I've listen to from you .
well done & really chill down track wich blows in my mind with all good feeling while I'm hearing it .
also complicated counterpoint & relationship between voices that are harmonically interdependent (polyphony) in your track is one of your positive trait in it , which I really enjoyed .
Regards

__BehnaM

first my appologize for such a late commenting .

Hi,I heard vocal version in (lightas1fear)page in some random search,& it's your first track wich I've listened to.
as you've used it for intro , I'd loved & used this really incredible guitar line from dear tallented Bear,in one of my tracks .
& Adrian you may be so young but honestly & fair I should say you had an obvious better idea than me about making a beat for accompaniment that nice guitar loop .I admire you & I should say [cheers & Bravos spanish young guy ]
HipHop is not my genre & my version was not a hiphop track & I hadn't prefered to upload it & the days have passed by , but you can hear it if you want,& it's enough to tell me your email adress & I'll be happy to know your Idea about my version too .
Regards

_BehnaM

well it's the first track which I've listened to from you (random but honestly I should say your avatar was the reason because of my own avatar ! & I was curious to hear a male vocal when I heard a young girl was singing )

= aobut lyrics: I think it was an innovative storyteller song ,more advanced than a college student normal perception .

= about Vocal & singing style : I think it was a tallented voice , capable larynx which shall know better about music theories,tonality in harmony & notation tune ,to never gone false & get a better performance number in performance evalution , but undeniable the larynx ability could get a good number in potentio meter .

& about vocal melody ( melody notation as a separate opinion & harmonize pursuant Instrumental version ):
I listened to a heartfull melody which was in a harmony & proper for Instrumental version from (Quavor) , it's hard work U'd done & have such a set melody line , pursuant the instrumental version .& I think it was good .

my appologize for such a long commenting .
Regards

_BehnaM

appologize because such a late & long comment, but it's first track which I've listen to from you & I'd been loved original version of this track combine with various memories & (you might underestand me it's so hard to enjoy from a cover version in such condition) , so I began to mutter in my mind as I wanted to start for listening to your version.
but your innovative version surprised me & stopped my unfair muttering .also I admire how you've sing heartful this song.
Regards

__BehnaM

Innovative & impressive synth & tabla ( If I don't make any mistake ) intro , opportune & also interesting synth line wich sounds like an aerophonic instrument (or I don't know if it may be an aerophone instrument -any way very well done ) which combines very nice with another synth sound & makes me feel like traveling on the wings of the light wind & blowing softly .
& then my favorite part , proffesional transition to a new mood & in fact an artistic passage for combining of beats & main theme , with some far acapella which make such perfect music & seconds when I felt there is some thing new to learn here for me in your track .
Well done Mr,Brown & I admire you how you have such experience in your music & innovativeness wich every week has a new & perfect Idea for making music .
Regards
__BehnaM

yes it sounds better in itunes . and any way it causes calmness & relaxation in me really like a sedative.
I enjoyed it & commend u & think the name was quite proper & propotionate Mr Brown.
Regards .
__BehnaM