AlexBorvin

The music sounds like it belongs in some old 80s cyberpunk movie. Interesting composition.

It feels like these are two genres in one. If you practice merging genres, it's a cool experience.

too good. Unfortunately, this is not my genre, so I have no thoughts on what to note. However, the mixing is clear

I like cool, abrupt transitions to a different style. The beat stays the same, if I'm not mistaken, but the mood of the track and the overall tone changes. Very cool.

I was actually thinking about adding some text here. There was a word there, I think it was "push it." But I'd like something more. It's really cool otherwise.

More drive than rally

Wow. Ill be honestthis track is remarkably dynamic for its genre. The riffs hit hard, the pacing is airtight, and the vocal delivery is top-tier. Sure, the 7.5-minute runtime might test the patience of the average listener, but for those who appreciate the craft, its just more time to sink your teeth into. An absolute banger.

a very gentle melody

Sometimes I think songs like these should be radio-friendly. It's hard for me to understand their meaning. However, if I were to evaluate a specific track, namely this one, I would say that it Good quality of execution.

Well done. Strive to do better. Always strive to do better. Even if it's already the maximum.

Something dark. I can't imagine how difficult it was to write. I'd get tired of listening to that overdriven bass. But overall, the track is interesting.

The concept is great, but the execution is poor. Something needs to be done about the bass line. It's too loud for this format. My suggestion is to make it quieter and reduce the midrange frequencies

I dont know how to say it, but this music sounds and is made in such a way that you can concentrate on work or the road. Well, I understand that the melody implies there will be lyrics. But honestly, I'd just like to listen to this track without words.

I love long tracks. But I don't think this genre likes to be that long. Although the melody is really cool.

Dude. This is incredible. Great rap. I really love this kind of stuff. So, no further comment.

It's very difficult. There's so much airtime. There's a real lack of perception, but a genre is a genre.

Bro, you asked for advice yourself.

Look, theres this thing called harmony. Without it, nothing really lands. No matter how dope the vocals or how sweet the melody, your track still wont truly hit people in the feels.

Im just keeping it real, no negativity. I really hope you hear me out. I get it when youre making your own music, every riff or hook you write might sound like straight fire to you. But the truth is, its not there yet.

A lot of people here are super nice and dont want to hurt anyones feelings, so instead of giving real constructive feedback, they just gas you up with praise.

Dont get me wrong Ill give you props too. Youre doing your thing. Youre putting in the work. Thats seriously cool. But if you wanna make truly great music, you first need to study the greats or learn from someone whos been around the block.

Youve got it in you to write a killer track. And honestly, this one? For someone whos still learning? Its actually pretty solid."

Let me know if you'd like a version that sounds more like a voice note from a producer friend.

I don't understand why it's called "System Crash," but the track rocks. The melody is well-written. Although I would have slowed it down a bit.

It's a bit of a heavy tempo. But oddly enough, it's very melodic.

If you wrote this track yourself, then you're seriously awesome. That vocal sounds incredible such a classic 80s vibe. Im a huge fan of that era's music, and this just hits the spot. Mad respect

A.B.

That track has a very specific, almost hypnotic melody seems like its supposed to lull you into some kind of trance. Then that overdriven kick drum snaps you right out of it, and the whole arrangement kinda glues those two headspaces together. Theres no real breathing room in the track. You could throw in an interlude, but at three minutes long, theres not much space to squeeze one in without it feeling forced. Another move would be to chop the track into a few similar-but-separate sections with actual breaks in between.

For someone like me who comes from classic hard rock, this feels pretty off the beaten path. Not what Im used to.

Respect,
Alex Borvin

The lyrics add variety. I think it's a bit lacking in melody. Still, it sounds pretty good. I suppose the style itself suggests this format, but I'd still like to add something. Maybe some other instrument with a drawn-out sound, or short synths

You're great. Sincerely, Alex Borvin

As I understand it, I have the honor of being the first to comment on this masterpiece. I don't know English and as a result I don't really understand what they're singing about. However, the song is so gorgeous, set to such a beautiful melody, it touched me. I had a strong desire to do something similar. You're great. The track is simply amazing. I say from the heart, you're a genius, whoever you are or aren't.

Sincerely Alex Borvin

the voice is gorgeous and the music is gorgeous

It's hard for me to give a proper description. I don't understand the genre. But I see many people like it. I love jazz. I just don't understand it.

I guess I'm stuck on the fact that the drums are too loud. I'd probably like some hi-hats and light percussion. Overall, it's a good melody.

AB

Very emotional. But honestly, for some reason, it's hard to tell if I'm feeling sad, calm, or anxious. Even though the track is very melodic, it doesn't seem to focus on one emotion. It feels like I'm being swept into different states. But overall, it's a very good piece.

AB