AlexBorvin

I say it's good, very tough vibe. Added to favs!

Hey Alex very nice, like the buildup and the groove overall. I also like the static effect on the vocal though I couldn't understand what was being said. I still thought it made the track interesting, nice work.

D

Love it!

Heres another track that reminds me strongly of the raves and glo up parties once attended, only this one is even more interesting than most. well done.

intensity is building up progressively and nicely, interesting lyrics. I like it.

I am not that familiar with this style but I believe I can understand music no matter the genre. I felt you did a brilliant work on this track, with lots of variations to keep the interest of the listener and great use of effects and sounds. In total, it has been a very pleasant listen. Very well done
My best regards, Anthony.

I like the energy in the cymbals. Powerful indeed

Its appreciated my friend,,,,, relay good work!

Great track, only thing I would change is make the vocal a bit more loud/stand out in the time of the song 54-58 by sidechain, boosting the vocals db a bit in that part, or using a eq to sidechain some mid to high hzs where you can here the vocal character of the synth that plays at the same time. I know pro eq 4 can do this but don't know if the fl's eq can. it's not a big issue and it just could the bad pair of headphones i'm using to listen to this track.

Very cool sounded, post-apocalyptic, cold, dangerous track.
Kinda "don't believe in nothing, not even in yourself' one.
Hats off,
Danke

It's awesome. It's like nothing I've heard before. Very original

What a amazing track! The intro had Silent Hill vibes all over an I really liked it.
Ended little bit too soon, but still impressive.
Great work! :)

-J-

That's a pretty slick track you got here. Excellent work on the mix. Everything is crystal, it all sits well by way of stereo separation and panning. I like the vox as well. In the beginning, it sounds like a vocoder and some distortion, maybe? I think the only thing I would have done differently with them is add a little reverb and or delay. But, that's just my own personal preference. What you have is just fine the way it is. I like the way the second set of vox are a little cleaner and dryer.
Yeah, this is a good track. I think my only real complaint is the abrupt ending. Even then, it's a small complaint.
Excellent work.
Take care.
V.

Great build up, Alex. Loving it

The intro is absolutely great, impressive sound. The whole song is very interesting with its electronic dance style. I liked it a lot. What I would possibly like more should be a slightly different ending. But anyhow, it is a very beautiful work.
My best regards, Anthony.

Hi Alex, I like your track, has a dark feeling, love the intro.

The "walking sound" starting at 00:16, is that intended as walking sound? If yes you could consider to record a real sound using your phone (using the right shoes at the right place and correct beat) I did that once before, walking on a gravel path, a 120 bpm beat on my earplugs to keep the pace for the duration I needed, the phone pointed downwards to record the sounds.

If you need assistance with the English pronunciation, try Google Translate (if the browser is allowed to play sound).
Put the English text in the left box and set it to auto-detect or English, then click the speaker icon (listen) at the bottom left of the left box, Google Translate will "speak" the text. This solution is most likely not perfect but better than nothing at all.

I need to sleep
But hate to sleep
I need to eat
But hate food
Need education
But I'm too old
I need help with this
But I am alone

I have put in the English adjustments - I hope that helps. Not easy writing in another language. A good dance track. I felt it needed a bit more vox stuff before the end. Kay

Ilike it a lot and the lyrics work well with the track. It sounds like an army marching, and the lyrics match that. Great job!

Fantastic!!

That analogue wave squeezing and biting soundz is impressive in my opinion, I like a bit of ruthless modulations and there's more terrific, terrifying, techno perturbations dropped so we get the point at the end which is also nice.

It sounds cinematic, I can imagine this being played in the background of a dark scene where the main character walks through the streets heading towards the villain's hideout.

The only criticism I have is that I agree with BaoBou in regards to there being a bit heavy on the compression, I feel like it is a bit too slammed on the brick wall causing the track to lose its dynamics a bit.

Hi Alex,
that sounds great and I could imagine seeing it performed live in a huge hall. Personally, I think the dominance of the bass here is perfect. However, for my taste, it could be longer... much longer. In any case: great work!
Best regards,
Micky

I agree with some of the other commenters on improvements to the track, but I think this version has its appeal. The low frequencies being more presents gives it this really (I don't want to say underground) unique feel.

Honestly? I think if you speed this up to around 135 BPM you have an absolute fire track (I tried it quickly in Ableton and holy crap that's good).
Clearly that's not what you intended, and that also sort of works, but I feel I need something to give the track a bit more punch. Maybe a bit less compression on the master track?
In any case, great work and glad you brought it out!

Excellent track i enjoyed my listen :)