AlexBorvin

Sometimes I think songs like these should be radio-friendly. It's hard for me to understand their meaning. However, if I were to evaluate a specific track, namely this one, I would say that it Good quality of execution.

Well done. Strive to do better. Always strive to do better. Even if it's already the maximum.

Something dark. I can't imagine how difficult it was to write. I'd get tired of listening to that overdriven bass. But overall, the track is interesting.

The concept is great, but the execution is poor. Something needs to be done about the bass line. It's too loud for this format. My suggestion is to make it quieter and reduce the midrange frequencies

Dude. This is incredible. Great rap. I really love this kind of stuff. So, no further comment.

It's very difficult. There's so much airtime. There's a real lack of perception, but a genre is a genre.

Bro, you asked for advice yourself.

Look, theres this thing called harmony. Without it, nothing really lands. No matter how dope the vocals or how sweet the melody, your track still wont truly hit people in the feels.

Im just keeping it real, no negativity. I really hope you hear me out. I get it when youre making your own music, every riff or hook you write might sound like straight fire to you. But the truth is, its not there yet.

A lot of people here are super nice and dont want to hurt anyones feelings, so instead of giving real constructive feedback, they just gas you up with praise.

Dont get me wrong Ill give you props too. Youre doing your thing. Youre putting in the work. Thats seriously cool. But if you wanna make truly great music, you first need to study the greats or learn from someone whos been around the block.

Youve got it in you to write a killer track. And honestly, this one? For someone whos still learning? Its actually pretty solid."

Let me know if you'd like a version that sounds more like a voice note from a producer friend.

I don't understand why it's called "System Crash," but the track rocks. The melody is well-written. Although I would have slowed it down a bit.

If you wrote this track yourself, then you're seriously awesome. That vocal sounds incredible such a classic 80s vibe. Im a huge fan of that era's music, and this just hits the spot. Mad respect

A.B.

That track has a very specific, almost hypnotic melody seems like its supposed to lull you into some kind of trance. Then that overdriven kick drum snaps you right out of it, and the whole arrangement kinda glues those two headspaces together. Theres no real breathing room in the track. You could throw in an interlude, but at three minutes long, theres not much space to squeeze one in without it feeling forced. Another move would be to chop the track into a few similar-but-separate sections with actual breaks in between.

For someone like me who comes from classic hard rock, this feels pretty off the beaten path. Not what Im used to.

Respect,
Alex Borvin

The lyrics add variety. I think it's a bit lacking in melody. Still, it sounds pretty good. I suppose the style itself suggests this format, but I'd still like to add something. Maybe some other instrument with a drawn-out sound, or short synths

You're great. Sincerely, Alex Borvin

the voice is gorgeous and the music is gorgeous

It's hard for me to give a proper description. I don't understand the genre. But I see many people like it. I love jazz. I just don't understand it.

I guess I'm stuck on the fact that the drums are too loud. I'd probably like some hi-hats and light percussion. Overall, it's a good melody.

AB

Quite a high-quality and cool track.

Well done. The track is powerful.

I don't know why, but the melody's motif is a bit reminiscent of the music from the game Space Rangers. If the beat were a little more subtle and maybe a little slower, I think it would definitely fit in that game. Overall, it's very good music.

A.B.

The voice is beautiful. Good sense of rhythm. But for me, the volume gap between the intro and the start of the beat is a bit strong. If I hadn't looked at the waveform, I would have been scared by such a sharp change. But overall, it's a good track. I liked it.

A very cheerful melody

I think there are a lot of sounds on top of other sounds here. But the mood of the track is really pleasing. I think it could even be used in a game.

Damn. This is such a hard-hitting blast that I'm shaking my head so hard I almost rip it off. The sounds are really well-placed. What I would change is the beat. I think it should be harder.

It's just pure meat. It rips through the speakers and gets you moving. I absolutely love it.

More sounds. Interesting idea.

It seems like something Egyptian, but in a neuropunk style.

Drum and bass is a very strong and complex genre. It sounds good.

A very calming composition. But for some reason I think it needs to be louder. Otherwise, it's very beautiful. Well done!

A.B.