You guys really know how to work together and create some fantastic stuff. This one is sugar to my ears. The sounds are so clear and vivid. If this track would be 1 hour I still be listening to it all as it doesnt get boring. Respect!
Awesome track. Watched the video on youtube and it is made very profesionally. The mix is spot on and the vocals are great. The best thing is how you perfectly blend in all different types of vocal shots and fx. Definetly favoured!
Very nice tension buildup. The vocals are definetly very strong and you mixed it well in with the track itself. The transition to the 2nd part is seamless. Very nice track!
Very nice track you made here. The first part is very good and you did some good work on the macbook. You should notch it up a little. I understand you want to keep its small so the 808 will hit harder but now it was a bit too minimal. The drums and 808 hit nice and the hihats play nicely on the beat. The melodic sounds you put in are well mixrd and give an excellent vibe to it. Nice job!
The track has a nice flow to it. I think it has a very wide range of vocals that would fit to this track. the mix is good and ready to explore the deep ocean sea!
Very nice production eventhough there are enough parts that could be mixed better. The volume of the vocals differ too much which coudl easily be altered. The repeating closed hihat is a bit boring. try to put on a bit ping pong delay and a small bit of reverb. It will sound very vivid then. For teh rest good stuff and fun to listen to.
Very nice beat with some badass 808s. Love the vocal shots as they add up to the quality of the track. You even put in a nice hook. Hopefully you can find someone to spit some bars on it. Great job!
Definetly one of the best spoken word tracks I ever heard. The story is captivating especially as it feels like an inner discussion and struggle to keep your head above water. The music is very supportive and blends in well. Just remember, life is never worthless. You are gifted and I am glad I pushed the play button on this track!
Very well composed track. Love how the track build up a lot of tension without being to bombastic. The short elctric guitar is surprisingly fresh and maybe could have had a bigger place in the track. Nevertheless a very good production. Thank you for sharing!
I think everything has already been said in the comments. Another fun and unique spivkurl track. It is always a surprise where come up with every time :-)
With almost every track I release any more, I am simply shocked by the reception... the plays, comments, and whatever else. I can personally understand, but when I step back and try to view things as a whole, it gets confusing. It is worth making songs simply for these chances to connect with like minded individuals, other artists, and art lovers. Thank you very much for listening, and leaving a comment!
Very nice complex cinematic sound. Feels like i have returned to the middle ages listening to teh first part. It has so many colourful and complex changes.Feels like classical rapsody. Liked it a lot.
Very original and interesting start. The track sounds like a big build up to a musical climax. But the climax is not there at the moment. I think you could make a nice drop at the 1:35 mark. Maybe introduce a new synth or add an extra layer to the existing sounds. A very nice start of a potential great track...
thank you very much for the kind words .
agree with you about 1:35 too , but according to this my only track all & all made by loops , I haven't written any note for this , and I won't .
24 people have downloaded this and maybe one of them can add another synth layer to it .
I really appreciate your comment .
thanks man , no i busted up some envelops in a malstrom tweeked some noobs and came out with this sound that almost has a loop to it when i hit the key and sounds wicked
no arps nothing and that is one key making all that noise
Man Orlando, your musical learning curve has gone up a few levels I hear. You definetly know how to create some great musical expression. The first part is an almost classical piece of art. Very nice and warm instruments combined with a great melody in the first part with the guitar ramping up a bit of tempo in the second part. The only thing I personally would leave out ist the drum part at the end. I think less is more here. Nevertheless big complemnts for ccreating this very nice piece of music!
Very nice ambient chill out music. A very mystical ambient sound that really captures your trip to Bali. The eastern sound with all the background sounds turn this track into a deep layered quality sound. The choir at the end is unexpected but fits well into this piece.
Very nice start with the guitar....a real tensionmaker! A good mix between electronic music and soft rock. YOu managed to keep the sounda very clear and full which makes this track stand out. You can hear this is not your first track...very well done!
Well....a nice preview it definetly is. Nice timing on the vocals. You might turn the bass a notch up when you start your vocals. Then it will sound a bit more full. But great stuff overall. Looking forward to hear the whole track.
Damn this track is a journey on its own. From the hasty highway through the industrial part of the town straight to the central station and back again!The constant flow of the modulation gives this track a lot of energy. The vocal breaks are very smart implented to keep teh track interesting all 6 minutes long. Nice work!
Hey mudhoen! Thank you for taking a listen to this one and leaving your words! Had a blast recording this one, and it was quite cathartic as well. The song captured a moment in time pretty successfully, which is not always easy to do within the confines of a DAW. Been having an interesting time rehabilitating from all the years of virtual sound, and I think it is helping me grow as an artist. I really appreciate you stopping by!
Your voice has some really nice colors in it. Sometimes you timing is slightly off but that is just minor. But when you sing the long notes your voice shines. Some of the best singers used nazal sound so as long as you dont overdo it it actually is quite pleasant to listen to. The only thing is the quality of teh recording. It has way too much reverb in it and if I am not mistaken there is small autotune on it as well. Cut that all out and dont boost it anymore. you have talent, you just need someone to mix the tracks for you!
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Many many thanks for this supportive and encouraging feedback!
With much appreciation____Orlando
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That high pitched sound is great and really sets the groove. Nice and fluid panning on it.
this is a instafavourite. Solid track!
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Will keep this in mind next time I do a mixdown!
Appreciate it!
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This track did a heavy job, but it was worth the result.
Welcome and appreciated words, thanks for the fav
sorry the english.
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thank you very much for the time and attention ,
your kind words means alot .
I really appreciate it .
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Well done!
Thank you for your great feedback I really appreciated.
I am glad you liked it.
Thanks again.
Jamid
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agree with you about 1:35 too , but according to this my only track all & all made by loops , I haven't written any note for this , and I won't .
24 people have downloaded this and maybe one of them can add another synth layer to it .
I really appreciate your comment .
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no arps nothing and that is one key making all that noise
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With much appreciation_____Orlando
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Great job and thanks for posting.
Glad you like the track and appreciate your detailed feedback! :)
Cheers!
-EB
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