This is a wonderful composition. I love the arrangements and the emotion I get from the very start. All I can say is great work here. If you ever want to work on a cinematic piece together, let me know, I'll definitely be up for it.
I'm quite impressed with this track and might attempt a remix. Everything here sounds professional and I can see why this is on major streaming networks.
Keep up the great work, look forward to hearing more from you in the future!
I think the intro needs more variation. It goes on for too long and becomes repetitive really quickly. I would suggest adding some percussion or perhaps another synth to make it more interesting.
The mix sounds a little bit muffled and as the song progresses it gets harder to hear everything clearly. This happens specifically around the 0:58 mark. I think you should EQ things that should help.
Overall, you're off to good start and if you keep working on it, this track can be really good.
The melody really caught my attention. I very much enjoyed how things slowly progressed and turned into a nice bouncy dubstep track. This track has some similarities to mainstream dubstep, at the same you've managed to maintain originality and that is always great to see.
Great work here. It's amazing to see how everything came together in the end.I can see myself listening to this while on the road in the car. Keep up the great work, you definitely got my fav!
Very nice piece here. It definitely fits the narrative. It's peaceful tone along with smooth soothing transitions, makes this one a wonderful listen all the way through.
Thanks for your deep insight comment. Transitions or short key modulation I use are very ordinary method that root note moves within half or whole tone including substitution root(Db-G) , and 2 same notes common in before and after transition codes. For simple and easy mood, I applied Oscar Peterson's piano mood on soloing. Thank you for deep listening!
Well mixed, well arranged and the vocals fit nicely. Usually, I would expect a metal or rock track to be the genre for this type of vocals but you pulled it off.
This one is definitely a keeper, keep up the great work!
Trap isn't a genre I listen to often, so I wouldn't really know how to critique it, but from what I can pick up, I think you did a nice job producing this. My only criticism would be to add a little more variety to the track, as it does get a little repetitive. If that's how trap songs normally go, then disregard that comment altogether.
This one is very chill, Neuro! I always find it amazing how you guys can take different loops from different places and mash them together and turn them into a song. That's not something that's easy to achieve, but yet you did a great job at it, which takes skill. Very nice work, thanks for sharing!
Interesting take on the dubstep genre and I have to say I liked it. The drop was nice and I like how you brought in the vocal sample. As for your comment about your friend, don't let him get you down, man. People can be cruel and this is something every artist has or will eventually go through as we can't please everyone and we shouldn't have to. I'm happy the comment didn't discourage you from doing what you love and I hope you stay positive and continue to ignore the naysayers.
Very great work here! This track sounds like something they would play on the radio and that sir is what you want if you ever want your music out there. The instrumental is nice, but what really caught my attention was the vocals. They are great and sounds like you recorded them very well too. My only criticism would probably be about the drums. The drums could use a little more EQ on it or even a bump on the compression side. Mainly the kick drum, as it sounded a bit drowned out when it first came in.
Other than that, well done and keep up the great work!
Hey man, it's been a while since I listened to some of your tracks. I have to say I was definitely missing out with this old gem. I love it. The drop is especially wonderful, great work on this old tune of yours!
Hey Modnex! I have to say thanks! One for the awesome comment, and two, for reviving me. I had forgotten about Looperman due to extensive schoolwork. It feels great to know that I still have listeners, even after all this time. Cheers bro! I will strive to be more active. :)
Nice track here. The instrumental and the rap is very catchy. I have to say, this is very good especially considering the small amount of time you've been rapping for. Your flow is on point and you have your breathing under control.
Nice track here! I really love the main melody, it sounds great and fits the mainstream vibe, which is what you want if you ever want radio play. With that being said, in my opinion the drop can use some work. The issue I have is more towards the sounds/instruments you used and less towards the notes those instruments played. A lot of the sounds do not fit with each other well, they sound sort of harsh on the ears and that hurts the track, as the notes being played sounds like it would be really great if you chose better sounds.
I would say try to soften it up a little bit and I think you'll have a really great track on your hands. Remember these are just my opinions, don't take it too seriously. Nonetheless, well done! Keep up the great work!
Nice track here, Beatz! I really enjoyed those strings and pad sounds, it gives the track a mysterious kind of vibe and that would work great for a mystery/crime based film. There's not too much I would do different. The only thing I could think of, is adding a few more sounds here and there to mix it up a bit and see what other type of expressions you could create within the track.
Overall, very nicely put together.
Keep up the great work!
Wow this is your first finished track? Very impressive. I wish my first song sounded even close to what is expressed in this track. I can tell just by hearing this piece, how much dedication, time and effort you put into this one.
This track needs more love! You did an absolute stellar job at incorporating everything. All of the elements of the track fit together. It reminds me of classic uk drum n bass. Nice one mate, keep up the great work!
Hey Dan, I have to say this one gives off of a jungle vibe. I feel like I'm in a futuristic jungle located in space while listening to this one. The sounds were all chosen wisely and work great together. Your description is an interesting one and I can hear those emotions being expressed within the track.
I don't know jungle. Gonna look into as inspiration for the effects. I stuck to patches in Sytrus. Seems I have better luck combining patches off the same synth. Glad u enjoyed Modnex. Thanks.
The orchestral sounds are a fantastic touch to this track. It makes this a very emotional/sad hip hop instrumental. If this track can get an amazing storyteller/vocalist to spit something magical on this, I can see this track truly touching people. Great work and I hope you find a vocalist!
Funny title lol. I really like the grim-ish vocals on this one. Definitely a track I would love to bump loud in my car. The Einstein profile picture only adds to the comedy to this track, as I picture Einstein doing the rapping. I think this track sounds very well. My only issue is the length, I wish it was longer, it kind of ended quite abruptly.
Great sounding track you made here, Nate. Congratulations on the top artist accomplishment! After listening to a few of your tracks its not hard to see why you are a featured/top artist, your music speaks for itself. I really love what you did with this track and love how its a combination of electro music and trap, well done!
Hey Mosaic , stellar track here. Trance is normally not a genre I frequently listen to, but when I hear a great one like this one, I can not ignore it. I have to say I love the overall atmosphere of this. The track has such a dynamic feel to it and that vibe makes me feel like I'm flying.
Thank you for stopping by and checking out this one, even if not your normal genre to listen too, even more so that you stopping by and enjoy the track, much appreciated...Peace n Respect...mosaic...
Very enjoyable track you got here. I was expecting this to be metal full through, but liked the little change ups. I'm not exactly sure of the other genres you expressed in this track but I know its not metal. Anyways well done!
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It will be very good to work together.
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Keep up the great work, look forward to hearing more from you in the future!
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The mix sounds a little bit muffled and as the song progresses it gets harder to hear everything clearly. This happens specifically around the 0:58 mark. I think you should EQ things that should help.
Overall, you're off to good start and if you keep working on it, this track can be really good.
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This one is definitely a keeper, keep up the great work!
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Other than that, well done and keep up the great work!
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I would say try to soften it up a little bit and I think you'll have a really great track on your hands. Remember these are just my opinions, don't take it too seriously. Nonetheless, well done! Keep up the great work!
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Overall, very nicely put together.
Keep up the great work!
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Well done,
keep them coming!
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Well done,
keep up the great work!
Thank you for stopping by and checking out this one, even if not your normal genre to listen too, even more so that you stopping by and enjoy the track, much appreciated...Peace n Respect...mosaic...
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Thanks for sharing!
You are not alone - i never know where to categorize what i made. :)
Sorry for the late reply, for long time now just chasing myself...
Regards, traz