Modnex

Hey man, thanks for making this. The sound effects mixing with the drums does add a creepy factor to this. I really like the little girl laughter that was used in this, definitely wasn't expecting that.

Very nice remix!

Nice track here. srob! I like the vocal synth you used with that drum boost that comes in around :45 seconds. I think a great rapper could add so much to this track, I hope you can find one. Very good job at the mix down of this one.

Hope to hear more like it in the future.
Thanks for sharing!

Great track here! I'm a huge fan of house music and I have to say, this one was definitely not disappointing. This actually sounds very mainstream. One thing you could probably do to add to this is duplicate the vocals and layer them on top of each other. You could even add a reverb on top of the duplicated vocals and pan it more to the left while the main set is panned more to the right.

If I was you I would experiment with filters on the main vocals, as well as duplicating them once more, adding some cool glitch effects to it and placing the glitch set in sections of the song where the main vocals are not. These are just ideas though, but overall very nicely done.

Woah there's a lot going on in this track and I like it very much. What type of drum n bass is this classified as? Would like to hear more of this type. The song structure is great and the way everything sits is also very nice. My one critic on this would probably be the loudness. In certain parts the track gets really loud and I had to turn my speakers down. Other than that nice one!

Nice start to your uploads here. I think everything here fits well. The melodies were very nice to listen to. My only criticism would be a little more variation. I was expecting new synths to come in somewhere in the middle to end of the track. It doesn't have to be anything special, just something to keep the song interesting. Regardless of that very nice work and hope to hear more from you in the future.

Hello Slone,

I've noticed a few issues while listening to your track and thought I should point them out and try my best to help you fix them. The vocals on this track sounds too loud in my opinion and it makes it very difficult to hear what you're saying due to the amount of distortion the loudness is creating. One way you can fix that issue is by either turning down the vocals, making sure the levels are somewhat in the same range as the instrumental or you can even try to adjust the levels of the master channel.

I'm not entirely sure if the vocals are that way due to your work in your DAW or if it's from the way you recorded it. If the recording itself happens to be the issue, I would suggest you try to record it over. Make sure you have space between the microphone and yourself, that can help a lot when it comes to distortion. Once you do those things, I think you will see a big improvement. Keep striving for improvement and you'll get there one step at a time.

-Modnex

Great track! Can't sing? You sound great! The instrumental along with the vocals makes this track out to be a mainstream track. The timing could be a little better as some parts in the song seem to be a little out of time, but other than that great work and hope you finish it.

Thanks for the listen,
Modnex

Great work! I love that old school vibe you guys placed on the track in the beginning. The instrumental is very nice and the vocals boost that by 10. Great collaboration here fellas, hope to hear more tracks like this in the future.

Thanks for sharing,
Modnex

Dude this beat is so cool. I may try to rap on this if I do I'll send a link your way. Great work!

This is such a great piece. The emotion expressed within this track makes me speechless. I can picture so many things happening all at once just by listening to that beautiful piano. Like Spivkurl has stated, this one can definitely fit somewhere in a film.

I suggest making it longer, even though I know from experience, extending it can be easier said than done. Rather you choose to extend this or now. It is liked and appreciated by me. Thanks for sharing and hope to hear similar tracks like this in the future.

-Modnex

Nice snippet here. Very enjoyable listen, wish to hear the entire song.

Nice track here! It had me nodding my head up and down. Everything sounds great and the sounds create such an elegant atmosphere. The mix sounds very well mixed, no complaints from me.

Great work!

Nice one here. The instruments chosen remind me of an attari game and hat brings back memories. The track is very catchy and makes me want to dance.

Overall very nice track keep up the solid work mate!

Nice work here. I like the vocals a lot. The lyrics are deep and that's what make a rap good. The instrumental is good too and very emotional.

Thanks for sharing,
keep up the good work!

Nice track here. It has a lot of the same tension you get from the tv music and can be used in all types of media related projects.

Great work!

Great track here. Those vocals are great, very strong vibe they give off. The instrumental you created around the vocals fits nice and takes the track to a unique I wouldn't normally expect for these type of vocals, but it works.

Good work here mate!

Very nice tune here, Beerling! The pop feel is strong here and I love those vocals. Who did the vocals if you don't mind me asking? I think they are really nice and fit the instrumental really good. This track has potential to be taken into many other directions too, like house or dance for example.

Overall very well done,
keep up the great work!

Nice one here. The instruments used sounds great together and the vocals is timed in well and fits the instrumental very well. My main criticism is probably regarding the mix itself. There is a lot of noticeable distortion aka cracking in the mix. It's mainly in the beginning area, but it shows up later on in the mix too. I would suggest adjusting your volume on the instruments or maybe on the master channel. If you turn down even a few instruments that can help a lot.

Other than that little bit, I really enjoyed your track, keep up the great work and stay on the path to improvement.

Hey 2D2R, I really like the start with the piano and love how you changed the vibe of this track to electro in such a short time span. Your vocals sounds great on this and only added to the instrumental that much more. You say your vocals suck, guess they were right when they said we are our own worst critic. I think they really work with this track even with the autotune and that's saying a lot considering I normally hate autotune.

Anyways very nice work and hope to hear your vocals on more tracks in the future.

Nice track here. This one combines a few genres. I hear electro, regga and a few other ones in there. Nice one there. Its very unique and was a nice listen. Thanks for the share and keep up the good work.

Nice little snippet here. The instrumental you managed to create around the vocals is absolutely stellar. Very catchy melody you created and those kicks only help add to it. I hope you win this contest, but if you don't you're still a winner in my book.

Very nice work, sir!

It's been a while since I seen your stuff up here, happy you're still producing quality music. This track is awesome and has a lot going for it. The deadmau5 vibe is strong here, but the track contains a lot of originality as well. The melody is catchy and takes me to a place far away. The sound choices along with the overall structure makes for a great listen.

Great work as usual old friend,
hope to see more like this in the future.

Great track here Brado! If I may ask, what is the intro for? The vocals here with that beautiful guitar makes the hair on my arms stand up. It would also be interesting to me to find out what was the original story was of this song. For some reason I always like to know what was going through the artist mind wile they were in the development process. Regardless great track and hope there is more in the future!

Nice track Crypt! I can definitely hear the horror tone and think this one work very good for a horror running scene. When a character is running away and a man with an axe is chasing them. Good job!

Interesting piece you create here. The instrumental is well done and the vocals are very smooth and add to the chill factor the beat gives off. I'm usually not a fan of auto tune, but I have to say you made it work and that's very cool!

Thanks for sharing!