Man this is brilliant work! From the song title to the mindscape you gave me for an awesome ride. Fav'd.
The transition in the middle was just the perfect length before it started getting old...in other words your song writing was dead on for execution. Fade out at end finished it nicely.
That's not a comment on this track so please either stick to that or don't comment at all. And certainly don't just leave straight insults as they're no use at all.
Yes, extremely repetitive...apart from the constant changes. I'm not sure if you actually listened past the first couple of minutes (which do indeed have the same bassline running throughout).
For anyone who does, they will find that in 7-odd minutes the track moves through hip hop, jazz, drum 'n' bass, metal and even banjo metal. And that's banjo playing an Eastern sort of melody merged with metal guitar and hip hop drums. And there are other electronic elements and lead saxophone.
This is all a huge amount of variety and extremely unrepetitive. That bassline that I said goes on for a couple of minutes then continues into the d'n'b section. However, it changes to a house bass sound, which gives it such a different feel that it almost seems like an entirely new part. So I'd say that's being creative with repetition (which is sometimes necessary, especially when you want something to sit so that other parts can have a solid anchor to work off).
See also one previous reviewer's comment that this was one of the most creative things he'd heard on this site ("I think this is one of the most creative tracks musically I have ever encountered on this site"). No problem if you didn't like it but I think just dismissing it as repetitive is way off the mark and certainly no form of constructive criticism.
Well I'm genuinely surprised, based on your other comments on my tracks, that you thought this one was good. As regards freshness, I do actually have a much better and extended version, I just haven't uploaded it yet. When I do, I'm fairly sure it will be enjoyed by a few who listen to it. Hopefully, you'll prefer it too.
By the way, what sort of freshness did you have in mind?
Behnam,
This is a great short piece. Your timing is flawless. Glad to see someone in the younger generation picking up the guitar and not putting it right down again. The guitar deserves a lot of respect and yet it can be tamed.
Mark.
Mark , I learn from your generation & honoured to see your worthwhile possitive idea abouT this trial of mine.
& greatest appreciations of mine abouT your presence , attention & perception shared in commenT Mark .
else & beside , I listened '' I've known '' more than 10 times this week while driving from home to office & office to home in my car ..& enjoyed iT again & again . best wishes.____Behnam
Bloody hell, A review from one year ago that i missed somehow, Apologies for that, it's been a long time since i checked the stats on this track.
Cheers for your comments (although it was so long ago you probably don't remember leaving them lol)
Cheers!!!
FR
thank you so much....this was just a play through one time dill and sometimes things come together......but wait till you hear what i did to this after...hehehe
thanks again for the kind words and a listen mark...
It starts off solid and once you get going it has a good groove.
May I suggest alternating the notes in the main riff to keep the repetitiveness to a minimum?
This is a good start!
on The Darkside by Darkreine
I agree with Billy re the bass and synths.
I really enjoyed this one man. Two thumbs up. Fav'd. Loved the Star Wars clips.
Mark.
on The Hypnotist - Feelings by Indozizz
The transition in the middle was just the perfect length before it started getting old...in other words your song writing was dead on for execution. Fade out at end finished it nicely.
Mark.
on Way Beyond Wrong by StaticNomad
on Way Beyond Wrong by StaticNomad
Zzzzz.
For anyone who does, they will find that in 7-odd minutes the track moves through hip hop, jazz, drum 'n' bass, metal and even banjo metal. And that's banjo playing an Eastern sort of melody merged with metal guitar and hip hop drums. And there are other electronic elements and lead saxophone.
This is all a huge amount of variety and extremely unrepetitive. That bassline that I said goes on for a couple of minutes then continues into the d'n'b section. However, it changes to a house bass sound, which gives it such a different feel that it almost seems like an entirely new part. So I'd say that's being creative with repetition (which is sometimes necessary, especially when you want something to sit so that other parts can have a solid anchor to work off).
See also one previous reviewer's comment that this was one of the most creative things he'd heard on this site ("I think this is one of the most creative tracks musically I have ever encountered on this site"). No problem if you didn't like it but I think just dismissing it as repetitive is way off the mark and certainly no form of constructive criticism.
on Tribal Warfare by StaticNomad
It's good but I have heard it before. Needs some freshness.
Mark.
By the way, what sort of freshness did you have in mind?
on Demo Tape Intro by TurfGoldMusic
Mark.
on 1 minute classical guitar recital mood by deciBel
This is a great short piece. Your timing is flawless. Glad to see someone in the younger generation picking up the guitar and not putting it right down again. The guitar deserves a lot of respect and yet it can be tamed.
Mark.
& greatest appreciations of mine abouT your presence , attention & perception shared in commenT Mark .
else & beside , I listened '' I've known '' more than 10 times this week while driving from home to office & office to home in my car ..& enjoyed iT again & again . best wishes.____Behnam
on Runner by Darkreine
Another well mastered track from you...you are a machine!
I would go more theatrical rock on the genre.
Mark.
on Kiss your hands by janis71
This is fantastic! Fav'd and enjoyed very much.
Mark.
on Eternal Divine by the47
Mark.
on Trashed by FreeRadical
Mark.
Cheers for your comments (although it was so long ago you probably don't remember leaving them lol)
Cheers!!!
FR
on Keep it Going by crucethus
Great all around track with some exciting breaks from the groove.
Nicely done.
Mark.
on Paradise Road by Planetjazzbass
As always, you have delivered a quality track. You are one of the top Loopers in my humble opinion.
Awesome.
Mark.
on Burnt Memory by 520
Mark.
on you name it-cimematic chill by lostjoe333
Def Cinematic. Nice job on the keys and good production.
Mark.
thanks again for the kind words and a listen mark...
on Sealife by chabal
It starts off solid and once you get going it has a good groove.
May I suggest alternating the notes in the main riff to keep the repetitiveness to a minimum?
This is a good start!
Mark.
on subdural hematosis by bigcadillac22
This was uploaded a while ago. How are they doing now?
Mark.
on She Runs by Darkreine
Mark.
on melancholic intro by aelmen
This is great stuff. Very relaxing and entrancing.
Impressive talent.
Mark.
Thank you for listening!
Anders
on Dream walking by johnnyproducing
This is really serene....I imagine with all the downloads, this may be included in a few remixes. Nicely done man.
Mark.
on CHRIST LIKE by GeePeezy
Kudo's to a fellow Christian. Great start. This def needs some vocals to polish it.
Mark.
on right-dont talk to me by lostjoe333
This is one interesting track man. Psychedelic mind nectar from Joe's mind to ours.
Mark.
thanks for the comment and a listen as always....peace
on Shawty Makes Me Wanna by JodyJames
Pro sound and well written. I noticed my foot tapping on this one.
Enjoyed.
Mark.
Still waitin for you to do some joe Cocker type stuff =)
Be safe man & thanks again
Jody
on Natural Woman cover muzic by Richie Winn by FullCapicityMuzic
Fav'd.
Mark.
on Spirit of the Plains by Darkreine
This was total mind nectar. Imagined myself out in the Plains during sunset. Good voyage man, ty.
Mark.
Thanx for passing through, really glad you liked it. Music is such an emotional thing and sometimes seems almost tactile.
Really appreciate your comments, keep exploring your music, cos it is really good!!
Kenny