Hi, its not poo its deffo worth continuing with, good sounds, nice beat and Vocals go well my only advice would be on the intro, too long (54 seconds) as it is, possibly shorten it a little or bring in other sounds gradually leading up to where the main flow starts.
I like this, thats an unusual kick sound there, I've got several hundred kicks in my collection but not any that sound like that. Good synth riffs, well done you.
It's got some real good riffs and the guitaring is nice but it sounded very muffled....maybe its supposed to sound like that. In my opinion it would sound better if the sounds were clearer...
I see what you mean. I think it's because it was uploaded/downloaded a few times before I finally got the mp3 file, so some of the quality might've suffered :/
Very well done! Smooth sounds and that moody/melodic bassline sounds real good in this, nice piano work and some strings I think I heard. I see you are studying music technology, good on you, I can tell you have been paying attention in class.
This is a nice refreshing sound to hear on here, your voice is very soothing although you appear to come in a bit loud or high in places it needs to be a tad smoother also the guy on backing vocals needs to be turned down a touch in places and in a couple of places there is too much on the backing vocals where it doesn't need to be. That lightening effect could be a bit more subtle or left out completely. Only minor issues in my opinion but you do sound really, really fab.
This is just my opinion, I know musical taste is variable and differs from person to person I can only speak from what I personally hear.
I do welcome and appreciate your opinion, thanks for taking the time. Only through inputs like this it's possible to evolve.
And you are right on every point except there is no guy on the backing vocals... hahahahaaaa... only me ;)
I will look into this... soon... just need a little break and a glass of wine I believe :)
Cheers
Lena
Hi, this is a good melody and track though it needs more, a nice melodic bass would sound good also if I may suggest altering the melody just slightly in places so its not too repetative and try adding a few extra hits on the hats here and there and a few on and off beats on the bass drum, just play around with it. On the whole, good work, keep working on it.
Hi, looking through the genres I noticed one called industrial and I thought what is that when it's at home? Now I know, fabulous piece, it's crazy but in a good way, good effects and the guitaring part was epic.
I thought I was going to have to change my undies at around 1.38 in to the song (damn headphones on loud volume) seriously though, good stuff, good for film effects.
I agree with conohamaru, it did feel a little out in places, I think you could either slow the drum beats down or speed them up to bring it in line with the bass, it does have a metallica feel to it, If you were going for the off beat effect you may need to listen to it again, you can pull it off, just try.Dont waste it, keep at it.
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This is just my opinion, I know musical taste is variable and differs from person to person I can only speak from what I personally hear.
And you are right on every point except there is no guy on the backing vocals... hahahahaaaa... only me ;)
I will look into this... soon... just need a little break and a glass of wine I believe :)
Cheers
Lena
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