Vocals definitely need to come up in the mix. They are very low on my end, both using speakers and headphones. Might want to change up the drum pattern in spots as well. Has promise though.
I agree with StaticNomad...some good things going on but needs work. The intro doesn't really work...at least as an intro. Once it get's moving around 1:52 things get a lot better.
Thanks man, really, I thought I would get the most flack from the tone issues in the second half, but at least it is more discernible than the first half. I appreciate the listen and the feedback.
Why did I not reply to you before now? Punctuality is not my strong suit. Thank you for the kind words. I think the bass should be even with the guitars, but that's a bass player's opinion. You said the "T" word. Tool is one band that makes it work. Bass and guitar sharing the load. Love 'em. I'm 30 now, hopefully there is a new album out before I retire!
It is very Old School Video Game to me. Interesting track and I dig the drums a lot. It might sound weird but I could hear Robert Smith singing on this.
Thanks TV. i HAVE RE EDITED THIS TRACK FROM YESTERDAY. Much better by far. I get lazy most times until I hear it again a day or two later and think, it's crap ! so I go over it again. Thanks for listening :)
Awesome stuff...really lives up to the chill out genre. This just washed all over me as it came out the speakers. Felt like an Audio Loofah, loosening up all the tension and making me feel " clean " again. :) Thanks for sharing it.
I think you need to go back and remix this track. At least the vocals. They are hard to decipher and are only on one side of the mix. Getting vocals to sit nicely in the mix can be tough.
Not my Genre at all but I enjoyed this. Catchy riffs, well mixed. I think a lil more bass in the mix would sound nice, but like I said, I don't know this Genre at all. Overall nice job. Especially for a quick throw away track spurred on from boredom. Some good stuff can come out of situations like that. :)
I like it bro, it has a stripped down apocalyptic feel to it. Cool vibe going and things are well mixed. I would like to hear your vocals processed a little more and boosted in the mix a bit. I think from 2:30 to 2:50+ could use a change or some new texture added but Overall a nice track. I dig it.
I also agree with danke and Darkreine. I think the vocals are sitting to up front and we are not getting to enjoy your guitar work and the rhythm you have created. Other then that this song is tight and very solid. Real nice job.
Hi Topvega, song is remixed now :)
... recording the song needs less than one hour.
Remixing and mastering took me much longer, and I am never content with the result.
Yeah this rocks, nice guitar work and great vocals. Feel like I got in a time machine and went back to the late 80's early 90's. :) Thanks for sharing it.
Pretty cool stuff...I think you should stand tall and bring your vocals up in the mix. They sound good, just a little to in the background. I especially love the harmonica on this. Nice track. Solid job.
Thanks for the listen and the comment. I'm still working on getting the mix right. I have limited equipment but I'm working on updating this situation. I went back and listened to the track, I do need to bring the vocals up in the mix. This is why your comments and opinions count to me. I really listen to you and others for improvement of my tracks. Again Thank you for your ear and comment.
Sounds like you are channeling some Kathleen Hanna a la Bikini Kill... :) Fun track and the mix is nice and tight. Thanks for the smile, Oh and I will go move my car. :)
I don't usually make it over to the trance genre but i had to see what you are up to. :) Has some interesting sounds and the beat is nice and tight. Sounds like a calorie burner if you are out on the dance floor with this. Nice job, and the mix is first rate as always.
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