GramoChopin

ha i know what you mean about getting sudden melodies in your head! i remember i had a sudden inspiration while i was on the toliet one day! lmao and then i FORGOT it and i was so mad. lol but i usually sing to myself or hum even when i'm walking somewhere or even when someone's talking to me! lol too much in the head ya know? so i can relate! but yea, this is definitely needs to be finished. stop teasing yesh! regards

Neobane

Very ill use of the sample yeshintae! i see your really into the hip hop phase. i kind of feel from the hip hop scene to work on my cinematic kraft. so i haven't gotten to build on my hip hop kraft lately! not really into sampling on any of the hip hop beats i got though. i rather build from scratch ya know? but regardless this is ill, and a solid entry to the competition. regards and respect brudda

Neobane

whoo very nice abstract/ambient hip hop beat. Has a very nice vibe to it! i'm feeling it. Could be just a tad bit louder though! solid track my friend regards and respect

Neobane

Sup chase! ha it looks like you chose gaffs beat from the loop challenge i had a while ago. i really that beat too. anyways but yea homie it seems like you rush alot of your tracks man, especially vocally wise. The vocals are really dry and non-present. And you could work on your flow alot more man. With even "one" verse i usually do on average maybe 50 takes. i don't like to be off time or have any imperfections. A little more emotion couldn't hurt either homie! The beat is right on, but you could of tackled it more efficiently. nonetheless this is just my honest critiquing bro, don't stop for the half-way. aint no such thing as a half-way "rap". lol regards and respect brudda

Neobane

Very ethnic sounding indeed proxy. which leads me to question what do you compose on for the majority of your tracks? But very nice track man. Allow me to share some of my imagery with you. (i haven't done that in a while, which i usually do with cinematic pieces) Anyways, i invision a ritual of sorts. maybe almost someone attempting to revive the dead. The group of individuals gathers around the campfire hoping they can bring back a loved one. A spell is casted by the elder of the group and lights the flame ablaze higher into the air....and a shock wave of gust tackles the individuals. And then smoke fills the atmosphere. Barely able to see, the group eagerly tries to see what is beyond the smoke in hopes that the spell has succeeded..but beyond the smoke is a horrific sight...their loved one risen from the dead within monster form...with bright red eyes..long sharp claws...and a ghastly disfigured body..with no emotion or recollection of memory..it attacks them...

*nevermind my question, i see on your other tracks you compose on fl.*

Neobane

Oops! i heard exactly what phyruis heard in the piano! it stutters and skips, almost like the piano isn't looped right. but that's just at the beginning so far that i've heard. but ha you collabed with ol' cybertooth did ya? i gotta collab with him one day. anyways but this is really intense though man! i still love that piano and especially the hard drums! and that underlying heavy string really makes a difference.ill track waper! regards

Neobane

Distorted illness! and the piano fits in perfectly! I can see you took your time on this, considering you say it took you half a year. epic composition my friend! regards

Neobane

Well what do you know, i downloaded this beat a long time ago, and i forgot who made it on here. and now i found it! i didn't rap on it or anything though, i just liked the beat and saw it was up for download. anyways, a solid and creative melody gives this a great flow and forward march type of feel to it. great and ill job! lately i've also been feeling grime could be the new hip hop. nowadays the mainstream ish is getting washed up and it's annoying. i only have faith in a handful of mainstream artists like lupe and nas. but regards on the download and respect brudda!

Neobane

Nice bit of ambient music Phyruis. Really sounds like fountains are pouring out of the monitors or headphones, which ever when you used to mix on. anyways a very nice mix, my only thing with ambient music is that "space" is also a useful asset. As it creates a more atmospheric presence rather than more musical. something similar to this maybe. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ZX2N9_7NO8&;feature=related But regardless that's just how i go about the genre. regards and respect

Neobane

Hey your back! I don't know if you remember me on the site, i was neoenigma on here before. i had a sort of falling out as well. bannment as well lol anyways very creative track you have going here. indeed tranceful heavy, can hear this in the club and just zone out to it. excellent track! regards

-i don't remember a situation like that but regardless i accept your apology?? lol see ya round

Neobane

Smooooothhhh operator! damn! is that you?? Very nice mix. Very professional sounding! If i knew you had tracks like this uploaded i would of stopped by sooner. very nice! regards

Neobane

As soon as i pressed play that guitar transported me to another mindframe. Has a type of final fantasy vibe to it. very sincere, very passionate and indeed classical my friend. I'd say your recreation is above the podium on this one man. truly great work. alot of artists on here deserve more recognition than the ones that become famous over garbage or uncreative. and your one of those artists to be honest. Very nice man. regards and respect

Neobane

Very nice track man. But in a way, from the tone of the track and the darkness of it, it's almost like your making them out to be hopeless, maybe just a little too much pity. I would rather be praying for them, hope for the best, and create something more upbeat and positive. Don't get me wrong, this is great and fits what their going through...but if i could do something to help out, i would. Just got a different vibe and view on it is all! other than that, great mix, and very nice melodramatic choirs! regards and respect

*just my opinion man! don't get offended! honest critiquing! regards!*

Neobane

Nice solid track man. i get a daft punk vibe at the 1:30 bridge. with the squeaky synth added in. The mastering could a bit louder, but other than that, real solid man. regards

Neobane

Haha man this doesnt sound like any sad day at all! lol i really get a type of ambient elevator vibe from this! it's kind of funky actually...lol this is really great man, and elaine only makes it better, great job!

Neobane

Hm i like your style man, very nice dark ambience. I also like how you describe with the listener should hear, i do that alot too. i see imagery in almost every piece i listen to, and this is no exception. The only thing i would suggest is just let that beginning part with all the open space and real nice ambience evolve for the whole track, instead of adding the guitar and later drum beat. I've heard that guitar before too, it's a loop right? anyways, that's just my two cents on how i would change the composing/structure side of it. add a couple of variants, a suttle string maybe. and some dark fx sounds would fill the ambience quite nicely. other than that, solid approach my friend. regards

Neobane

This is nice spiv! I like the echoey weird sounding synth lol Hmm and as far as the complex part, it doesn't seem that complex to me, but maybe you did some advanced sequencing of sorts or composed in a awkward time signature. nevertheless, very nice track spiv, regards

Neobane

Nice really nice entry! i like the adding of piano in this, adds a different element to trance! great job!

This is really nice man! you made if from loops right? Pretty solid mix. The only thing i thought could of been fleshed out more was the bassdrum, other than that, everything else hits pretty hard and in your face. great job!

Neobane

Pretty fresh track man! I like the delayed strings and synth. the snap is pretty good too. everything flows quite nicely. great job man!

Neobane

This is as really nice track to dance to man! I like the synths and the clap. Very nice effects too. greatly done brother

Neobane

Haha this is really sick alx! It really sounds like some "bug" war or something lol very solid mix to it too. i like the guitar and the main drumline as well. Very nice blend of loops, how many did you use if you dont mind me asking?

whoops didn't see that! my bad! lol

Neobane

Pretty sick man! Could be louder on the mastering side! And it's nice for a loop based track for my comp! ill job nontheless bro!

Neobane

Haha Saxophone! We just finished recording some sax in a session i had at school! still here too! lol great track man, solid contribution! regards

Neobane

This was one of my favorites on your mixtape man. really dig the beat as well. And hey don't worry about "making it big" so much and gaining access to a corrupt music industry. Me and my boys used to be driven on that, but (at least for me) it can hurt your creativity sometimes when your making music for the wrong reasons like for money and fame. I make music just because i love to. point blank. half the time i don't care about the money. But as long as i can create and share it with people I see the most, that ends up being the most satisfying. So do you man, don't worry about the critics and haters and welcome back to the loop once again!

ha man no worries, it's all good

Neobane