Amazing when new color comes in at 2:13 - really like the sun coming out from that point. I would be interested in your understanding of how this is ambient as opposed, say, to chill out, or trance for that matter. Nice work. Like it a lot.
oh wow - that hurts at the end! how devastating! I was thinking about chill out versus ambient. I suppose the steady beat argues not ambient. but regardless of genre, your track is spellbinding. nice work. Regards. Dan
It is so startling to hear an oboe and bells after electronica and hip hip. I played the oboe at one time. Sparkling jewel here. Sweet sounds. Best regards - Dan
Thanks Dan! I agree hearing an oboe and bells together is magical. I love woodwind instruments. The sounds can take you places you never imagined, which is why I'm becoming accustomed to using them.
the satanic responses are creepy as hell. i can so relate to this dialogue. cutting it all out on the word 'well' is startling brilliant. love this brother. congrats.
a well sustained mood, sad as an unfinished story is perhaps sad. I see a a character alone, reflecting. Perhaps we see snips of his memories. beautiful, musical work. Regards, Dan
what beautiful new color that vibe sound adds at a about 2:20. lovely sounds and mix. real ear candy. and yes - it get the robot romance from this combo of techno grooves and lyric strings. beautiful work.
such a reflective mood you set. the sounds are beautiful and beautifully mixed. don't know much about trap. what puts it in the genre? nice work. regards. Dan
Thank you, really that means a lot to me !
I'd say that what makes it sound like trap are the drums and the 808 but imo you could just do hip hop or rnb on it, it is just a question of feeling. Regards
fantastic sounding track. the delay effect you use very musically.really interesting and effective transition into the rapping at 2:36. Big inspiration all the way through. Fav!
you pace the whole thing out really well. yes - it is repetitive, but it is building all the way and you add new bits. nice mixing also. listened to it straight through twice and liked it even more second time through. nice work.
the repetition definitely creates the hypnotic quality, and again, your vocal mixing is very nice. you have a fresh style. Good luck with the release. Regards - Dan
This is the thing that gives you ants in the pants. I think it is! It's a hypnotic groove and the rapping is super. I like the vocal mixing also. Nice work. Cheers. Dan
Interesting ideas Arbus. Really enjoying the crazy licks and the effects. As far as mixing goes, it just seems that the levels are softer in the first two thirds than in the last. Perhaps you did two different sessions? I have been there (electronically - not live). Best wishes. Dan
this is the kind of music i loved to be stoned to and get lost in. what do you know, i am getting that escape with your work even without the weed. great work and look forward to more. Dan
Hi Dan, I guess it is a bit stoner-ish but I'm not so sure I would want to get lost in here. Kind of a dark and foreboding track that tends to suggest there is something scary in the far reaches of outer space or within the dark corners of our minds.
I can relate to the desperation, the frustration, the agonizing in the vocal. Given over 600 plays, someone else must be feeling this as well. congrats on great work Pat.
These are surely desperate times, and then the po po's and admins wonder why people are acting out in desperation! It is one of the few medicines left for a sick society. I had no idea this song would get played this much, since it's over 700 now! Soundcloud is so pathetic now... this song has 13 plays there... just sayin'! It's always a pleasure to have you visit one of my songs, and I'm looking forward to seeing what's new on your profile.
solid mix. i wonder if you could normalize the whole thing up to a higher volume if you hard limit those two bits of wave that are sticking up like flagpoles. nice steamy lyric. great rapping.
Thanks Man... I really appreciate the critique especially being that I'm working on the final mix down. Sometimes you get studio ears and really need another opinion before you get started. Its like I get tunnel vision. I will definitely normalize and maximize the volume. Thanks for the constructive criticism its greatly appreciated.
your timing of music with video is excellent. i like the moment when the girl tells us to stay quiet. creepy that moment of a woman rocking an empty crib. beautiful writing.
thank you. the video was fun to make. some of the videos were stock videos and 2 were on you tube. I put credits to the producers on you tube. when I created the piece I felt I needed to put a visual to it.
Whoops, I should have read both posts before responding below ms. Yeah that's happened top me before as well. Hope you gave it a second listen. Glad you like the track and thanks for the comments bro.
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