Mrbillionx

This track is hilarious.

Only because people can post fake pic's online these days.

So you probably in love with the picture - yet you gonna get who knows what.

Lovely and hilarious.

Thanks for the laffs.

Good luck with this song - I don't think it has much substance considering how things go online.

yeah ok I played this 3 or 4 times to confirm that this.

Umm the music is fine and all - yet lyrical style seems to be lacking. "day" I mean if you have to say it that many times
seems to me you are watering the song down for lack of other words you could use instead of "day".

Thanks but no thanks.

Even tho this is a sample - the female vocal seems out of place for this song.

This is something that shows you are still getting even better as time moves forward.

I can't begin to say enough about this that others have not already said.

But I will say that the start of the song reminded me of something I heard before then you suddenly change it up before I can think of it. hmmm

I can see how many will love this.

I can't wait for the album!

I wish I could download this

nice work on this a plenty.

Thanks

This has a nice feel to it not overly done.

Thanks

this is so on point

I would tip my hat if I had one ...

Keep it up

Dang Yo this is hittin on the right stuff

let me have this so I an swag to it

please

Thanks

bumble bee bass LOL
yeah here we go.

Thanks for this one

reminds me of some old school trance back n tha day

That is smooth n easy.

nice sound to this.

as normal for me I can't get enuff bass.

So a bit extra is always a plus for me.

I was waiting on some distortion on my mind LOL

Thanks

Here we go...
Haven't I heard that "roger that" line enuff already in another song.

IT really doesn't fit well with the song.

Lots of good talent here - to hear it ruined with that in there.

also the levels on this seems a bit loud but it could be me.

so go thru and check the levels of all the elements in your track
you probably will find the problem.

Thanks

This sounds real ruff around the edges.

the lil hand clap thingy needs to be eliminated or upgraded.

don't know what mic was using for the vocals but you might want to upgrade that as well.

maybe all that will produce a "smooth" track that is worth a listen.

thanks

Someone should sample the vocal and reuse it somewhere LOL

Yes well done music in this - even tho I would change it up a bit.

Just for me.

thanks for this

This is really nice
I can't complain at all on this one.

So when is the album coming out?

oh man the vocals sound so fake - you might want to pitch them back down.
Thats the first thing that threw me before reading that you did anything to them.

I always hated the chipmunk sound.

yes the vocal is amazing considering.

as for the beat itself

yes yes yes - we have heard this basic beat pattern so many times before - lets hope you don't plan to keep it this way and introduce this to the world.

Try again before you find out its been done.

( seems like someone is upset - or does the truth hurt )

With over 30 plays and no reviews
I figure I would take a stab at it.

Those "clap" sounds are so over done you need to just plain
undo some or not use them at all.

Your choice of other instruments seems to be lacking so I suppose you have a purpose behind that - but I think you need more to fatten out the sound.

Take your time to really play it and hear whats going on in the track. maybe you can get a feel and not just toss in "claps" and "pops" for the hell of it.

Hip hop has evolved past this and its still 2010

IS this really breakbeat?

I was waiting for that part of the whole thing.

hmmm

If so then this thing really needs work.

yea this is what I call trance

a bit dippy in places but its got a lot going for it.

thanks

This has to be some sort of generic sounding beat pattern.
why are the drums that you use in this so well not to punchy

sounding rather weak or cheap sounding not so polished.

Where is the bassline? Something has to carry this track over.

all I can say is I played it and was waiting for something.

( everything I SAID? - I didn't say much - maybe you need to read it again or just....)

This song just goes on and on and on in my head..

Good stuff.

hmmmmm
This thing bounces around so much I didn't know it was trance

maybe I am just not with this newer trance stuff.

ok I replayed
maybe it just needs to be normalized some

Still waiting for this track to take me somewhere

let me know when its done.