dimestop

Thanks mate - it's good fun and just as well as there is plenty of room for improvement : )

Thanks a lot buddy! You're right, the vocals need to pop more in the mix, but I want them rerecorded and fixed first.
And thanks a lot for the encouragement!

Thanks for checking it out DimeStop. Appreciate the comments. I am going to add a lead to it this week and present it again. Stay tuned.

Hey Paul,

Thanks for giving my track a listen and for the Fave.

I wish I had the gift of lyrics ( like you) to properly describe the feeling I get when I think about the old days with music,
It's a great feeling. I'm glad there is a place where I can
share those feelings so that they never die.

PEACE...

Thanks, i am still working on the full version.

Thank you!

thanks, paul — i had headed towards a reprise of the mallets and only switched that off at the last edit. hmm…
i am going to follow your lead and record vox in the shower. i’m gonna let the water run on mine, tho.

Hey Paul, thank you so much for stopping by - glad you enjoyed it. Cheers from Micky & Robbie.

no worries, I think Jynkz might be someone else dude, I'm Jkingz :) nice to meet you anyway and cheers for the review

Thanks mate, im james btw not Rob ! thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, means a lot :)

Paul, thanks for the love coming off of finals week, well I still have a little bit of work to do. Yeah there are millions of beats, sometimes I go down the black hole searching for them. I really loved this one. I have another track in the works about halfway done writing it. School first.
I didn't want to do too much definitely a little mowtowny they work well with hip hop beats. Show me the money!

Lets hear that track once Sunrise stops getting some love.

its always a pleasure my mate

Hey mate. So I have Covid right now. Sometimes when I write a song I want the music to tell a story. This story is about the brain fog that accompanies Omnicron. The first part of the piece is lush with sound, bass reverb, and syncopated percussion, then the Rhodes are atonal musically. It is meant to be annoying and off-putting just like I felt at the beginning of this virus. The middle is sort of the moment where you start to feel a bit better and the focus comes back, albeit very simply. hence the minimal funky feel of the base and the building guitar. Sort of a one-step at a time process. As we build to the end of the work, the guitars become more intricate and the synth pads bring some overall balance which is meant to represent getting back to normal. My goal with this piece was not to make a cool funk-dance piece that is easy enough to do (sic the second half). My goal was to tell a musical story. But you did pick out what you did not like and what you liked, so what I was going for fits your response. The double-time hat is a good idea and you are right it can break up the monotony of a long stretch. keep on sharing your thoughts mate!

Appreciate that man! Got a few more story songs that are fun you might like I'm currently working on.

Take care, be safe!

Wayne

Thank you dimestop!

Hey Paul, yeah I really liked those two bongo loops. One kind of sounds like rain pitter pattering, at least to me.

What's up Paul,

Thank you stopping by and giving my track a listen.
Your encouraging comments are greatly appreciated.
You make me want to "Poplock" lol. I'd probably break
something:-)

PEACE from across the "Big pond"...

Crowd up the comments all you want. I live for this stuff. The intro on the beat is fire, I wish I could get my hands on a .wav, the vocals would sit much nicer. Sometimes doing the instrumental justice is tough. I have the raw instrumental reposted on my Soundcloud by Kozy.

Thanks for the listen and the love! And you're not wrong I let my feminine side show in some of my songs. Most of my stuff debuts on Soundcloud.

Johnnie

Paul, first of all thanks for the love! This producer allows downloads for free with a tag as you've probably noticed. Blacklionzbeats on beatstars.com you can find it there... This was a beat in his guitar style beats its the sole RnB one. You can certainly give my vocals a try from any of my tracks. Much love. If you write some music for me I'll give it a go. it takes me sometime to write the lyrics.

Just saw your soundcloud gave you a follow on there. Most of my music is on my soundcloud profile. If it would make your life easier I could send you the instrumental to this. I'll be on the lookout for Reflection.

Johnnie

Thanks so much bro. I've got a scotch collection of my own, so I appreciate what a compliment that is. Glad you enjoyed it that much!

Right on, dimestop. We play, we have fun, we try weird things, and sometimes cool things happen. It's very helpful to get feedback to see if the weirdness sounds the same to others as it does to oneself. I never, ever know until I share. So thank you!