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off the charts
bro, im gonna smash this

there you go bro, hope you like it
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/246286

nice track very sweet too, you voice is nice but as mentioned needs fx to give it depth and warmth it also adds character.
to get the best results set yourself a processing chain and use bus channels, for vocals, reverbs, delays do everything on a separate channel and route each channel to its bus not the master, the buses are routed to the master.
if your unsure about bus channels YouTube it you'll be amazed how important it is, you have more control and your vocal sound will improve spearcarrier, try some EQ too cutting everything below 60hz and low end and dipping the high ends as it leaves.
it really is a case of practising and improving your engineering

goes hard Jonathon, nice to see you around bro 'i know we havn't met yet great hook to tie with the title

simply put bro, fire. im bouncing 'i dont need to say more' :))

ok bro ive jumped on it but ive had to do some editing, (sic tho) to add length to your music, i needed the intro to roll and the drop at 0.19 and run through till 2.40, i dont really like doing it out of respect to the beatmaker, but i will drop you a link when i post, i promised you fire, you wont be disappointed Milky.

great track bro, not seen you for time.. hope things are going for ya, tight lines great flow too, the beats hot

cracking track bro, great synths, that beat is of the charts Ben, dark gritty, menacing, ominous, great plucks, great percs, and the distortion is fire too

fire bro, hits hard. excellent sound and the production is mint clean, top top job, real Gangsta

love that intro bro, cut that quiet 1 sec start i would have that vocal start at 0.15, its a great hook/chorus, and then the spaces can be filled by a great vocal Angel :)) this feels like something she would relish and she's a great artist and a good friend here, the mix is set for someone to jump on, its top work bro im sure it will be used

hi i listened to this last week, something must of distracted me because i never commented. your voice is really sweet and sits side by side with the uke (love the sound of that instrument) i agree in principal with most what is said, you state your trying to improve your engineering and mastering skills aren't we all :)
Manuela hits the nail on the head. if you make it studio or too studio it will take all away from the original and unique sound its almost live like raw and gritty. being a songwriter myself im impressed with your story telling, good content, well written lady.
i have learnt most of what i do now practising and being daring, loads of help feedback and critique too from our colleagues here in featured.
the second vocal doing a chorus would be good, maybe a male add a deeper accent or have a couple of lines repeated your voice just EQ different. just dont over engineer it as it will take away the charm spearcarrier. keep writing comics but keep writing songs too

fire track bro, i reckon i could blow to this :))

hi Michael its nice to see you about bro, hope your good. nice track and arrangement, Bella has a great vocal. good production too bro sound clarity is good on both headset and speaker, great return

nice to have you back around Wayne, great to here your style, sounds like you had great fun using your new kit, it all sounds great as always and can only add to the motivation to keep grinding great sound quality everything is pin sharp and clear

really nice words and delivery Alex, excellent music from Danke, together they deliver a beautiful piece, very well done

there you go bro
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/246106

nice work bro taking a juice world track to electronic really like the sound you capture great drums the glitches and automation the ##### synths is dirty bro, you captured his track and took in a different direction, nice job

there you go bro, hope you like it, your music was beautiful...Paul

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/246012

nice work TRE yeah reminds me of juice world too, sorry to read about your diagnosis bro, ALS is degenerate isn't it, im sure thats what Steven Hawkins had, great message too bro take nothing for granted in life, and what stands out most to me is how cool you just drop it in, most would have kept that quiet or be blaming everyone else for their problems, your like, its just one of them things, props bro, if you got any anger show it in your music, we got ya here in featured

nice pop track, got a nice melody hot sub good beat, got a good groove to it too, well done,

nice work bro it goes hard both vocals are tight hot beat, keeping grinding

nice track bro, sounds really cool as is so im looking forward to the changes you make, like the title to it was a nice listen, keep up the hard work

really nice work, lovely sweet vocal. instrumentation is excellent, just the right amount keys strings and the atmosphere pad is a great place, the drums are just there not trying to stand out but still showing, the sound and production are good to, keep up the good work boyz

great work, i like your creativity bro but this is a different cook up, its from your heart.
all my work is driven from my heart too.
well written verse its authentic.
maybe we should collab sometime, like in your last line,
life is a gift and my message is love, me too bro keep grindin'