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I think it's great as it stands. Something fresh about it like that. Very nice work fam.... especially like the cello part.

hellz yeah! Love it from the start!! I agree with VM though...you gotta let everything take its turn. Imagine that its a band...you gotta have "jam ettiquete" and let everybody take a turn... But I didn't think it was too overcrowded, and I think it's awesome as it stands. Very nice work!

very nice work fam! Can't believe nobody wanted to collab with you on this...oh well, seems to have worked out better for you! Great Flow....great track!

Nahhh...not country with a Moby vocal. It's gotta have that twang in the vox man, thats what makes true country. Especially these days when honky tonk and rock seem to be influencing country music BIG TIME. But thats just because they are trying to come up with something new in a wore out genre.... why else would they accept KID FREAKIN ROCK as a country artist? The song is great though...no doubt. I love the dropped d guitar, thats another rock or blues element. I agree that its more southern rock. Great Job, fam... just try to stay away from country man, it'll suck you in and leave you without a truck or a dog!

Yes Dave! Man I love this...what a way to start my day! The instrument/percussion you selected are perfect for the movement on this. I love the way you pan the chimes like a wave. Great work and you know I love the tone of your bass, so I won't even mention it here.

Yeah man..starts a little slow for me, but it takes off nicely! Great flow!

wait a minute...we need a judge ruling on this one. Can you have an acoustic guitar in house music? Will it work? Well, the answer is a resounding.... YES and YES! Man this is so nice! I'm impressed. Simplicity rules! Just keeps ya movin right along and in the upbeat! Great job fam!

ahhhh.... it made me happy! There's just something about a nice happy melody! Great Job!

This was a great listen! I'm with you...I do all this hip hop and other crap on here...but I play guitar and have yet to put up an actual acoustic thing! I'm gearing up to start doing acoustic loops (rock and blues). I like the beginning part and then when you double it up.....oh man! In the beginning I hear a whole different song that could use a 90's hair band flowing lead... you know the one, kinda like Great White. Nothing too heavy.
Nice showcase of your talents my friend! Favd n Saved!

Hey this is catchy....but its not really rock of any kind. This is def a pop song. Nice work man

Miranda Lambert....not so much to me. Alanis Morriset...yes absolutely! Theres no mistaking it.... you probably wore out "Jagged Little Pill". I really like your voice! I can also tell that you were probably a little song bird when you were a little girl. Thats the funny thing about music...its either in you or its not... and if it is its been there since day one! You're a real treat Marj! Thanks for the great tunes and keep it up!

OOHHH, I'm in love! Girl, you got it going on! I love what you did with this....so smooooth. Your voice is so nice! You really know how to use it well and I can tell you really feel the music. You can't teach that...its either there or it's not. The quality is a little low, but the rawness of this is there. Very Nice....FAV'D n saved!

Man I love the rolling synth! this moves along nicely. great job

I like the hook Dub, but it doesn't seem to go anywhere! Seems just a little flat to me.... I think you need to put a phat bassline in there. I dig your tunes lil bro, and I know you what you got in you... thats the only reason I'm saying this to you! This just doesn't seem to be up to your usual "kill it" style! It's good for anybody else....but coming from you... its just ok to me. Still a good job...just not as great as you usually put out. I'm a big fan of yours fam, have no doubt about that!

Finally some real instruments!! I gotta say I love this....seems more rock/jazzish than funk...but I guess thats kinda what funk is. I love the name and the fact that your son follows you...haha...in hot pursuit! I liked what I heard, Slap... but I'm going to have to listen again when I get home through some Headphones to really give ya a good critique. But I gotta say I don't think I'll have anything for you other than get into the lead sax a little sooner. But I have a short attention span and I think the "Sax line" sets up the melody and the jam part perfectly! Maybe a shared lead...still chasing you but in a call back thing like he's right on your heels... (cause ya know he really is right there with ya Slap!)... but together.

Ok...i know you're not supposed to just say "cool track"...but COOL TRACK! Nice work and I love the trip hop beat!

what a great tune! Thats whats its all about...the feel...the jam....the music! The outro was sweet! Great job by all!

I disagree with you Becca....The MUSIC makes this soooo freakin sexy! He could be reading the Bible to this and it'd come out sexy (no blastphemy intended!). So smooootthhh. Awesome Job! Wish I had your RnB feel, girl! Now you should ad your voice with some "ooooooohss" and "ahhhhssss"...lol!

Nothing like a piano cello combo to drive some emotion. The cello is a little thin to me. I use Reason 4 also and I found an awesome cello in there in the NNXT. Maybe down another octave would be more suiting cause, of the emotion from the lower range on the cello will move you to tears. Nice job... keep your head up, everything happens for a reason! You can't find the one you were meant to be with if your still with someone who was never right for you in the first place!

Keep workin at it Lil Bro... just play with your DAW and tweak stuff here and there. First and foremost is you gotta figure out tempo and timing! The BPM refers to Beats per minute and thats the key you need to focus on...using matching BPMs or stretching/shrinking time/tempos on your DAW!

I love the simplicity... This is BEAUTIFUL! Great Job

This has potential... but it looses sync at around :45.... then everything seems to be a cluster f**k of sounds. Man this deserves to be worked on! The beats sound like they are panned wide and the guitar sounds center... consider swapping them and adding a bass line...rework the looping and sync it tighter! Compress the beats to make them stand out a little heavier. Get the music tight then flow on it. I say all of this because I think this can be great, and I really like it! But I want to LOVE it! Great job!

I love this Girl! The flow is so spot on! This is VERY good! The levels are a bit off though, cause the lead synth sounds like its clipping... and it too dominating in the track. One things I like to experiment with (I use reason 4) is creating another Bass device and drag that lead track into it and see what it sounds like as a hard bass. You should be proud of this.

Blume this is crazy! The one thing about reggae is the bass line flow, the guitar in the downbeats, the snappy drums... and you got it all in there and then some! This is really crazy, but really good. Reminds me of the way "Rage Against the Machine" started out with a hard mix of styles.

PJB...sounds like you threw this together in 10 minutes man...what? Oh...sorry! Great jam. lol! Not really sure what to think about this one, but the bass is superb. I love the jazz fusion sound on your bass parts. It always makes me think you are playing a fretless because of the "boing" factor. And I agree with JFW, very "Zappaish".