I suggest you do the repeat claps using a delay plugin. Would sound much better. Also, lower your hats, and use a stereo enhancer and fruity convolver to widen your melody a bit. Keep going, you got this!
lol bro, you're probably using in ear headphones right? If you're listening with something bigger that has more bass it might not be that sharp. But thanks tho.
This is great. I have a few problems with this though, first; The snare. If I were you, I would either layer that with another snare or just swap it out for a new one. I have that same snare, and its no good by itself.
Second, the kicks NEED to be louder. Only by 1.5 db though. But then you should sidechain the kick to the master track using fruity limiter. There are videos I can give you to help with that.
Third. YOU NEED PERCUSSION(all of these are drum related issues).
Put something on 3 and 7 beats. Could be a snare, click, clap or snap, or even a tom, just put something.
I only give you this much critique because I believe you can do better than this. Keep going! Don't give up!
Also, you prob should remake it like Verdi said, and then in the process follow my tips. You do you, though.
Great work! Sometimes I do better when i dont make expectations of what I want, and just flow with whats in my head, so I get this track alot. Keep up the great music!
Good Track! I suggest you search up some videos on compressing vocals and practice that, they are long videos but worth the time spent! Keep up the great music!
Good work on making this, but you should try to add your own style to type beats, or they tend to get annoying. Also, your snare rolls are a mess. A good snare roll either keeps the same speed (1/2 step) or slows down (4 rolls with 1/2 step, then 2 with 1/4 beat). Keep practicing that!!
Nice lyrics! Although I think you could be a little more confident in your vocals. I hear voice cracks here and there. Spit those words like your talking down to someone!
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Second, the kicks NEED to be louder. Only by 1.5 db though. But then you should sidechain the kick to the master track using fruity limiter. There are videos I can give you to help with that.
Third. YOU NEED PERCUSSION(all of these are drum related issues).
Put something on 3 and 7 beats. Could be a snare, click, clap or snap, or even a tom, just put something.
I only give you this much critique because I believe you can do better than this. Keep going! Don't give up!
Also, you prob should remake it like Verdi said, and then in the process follow my tips. You do you, though.
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