SliMusic

This is pretty okay bro, i would say that extra snare instance every two bars rather than it just landing on the middle of each bar is not to my taste. Also the 808 slides could use some polishing. Keep up the good work, though!

This is pretty nice for someone using the phone version of garageband, cant wait to hear what you sound like when you switch to PC! its wayyy easier and there's way more opportunities.

I think the style u got going but the mix is a bit poor, try to have the 808s lie on top of the melody but not smother it. I suggest you send all of your drums to one mixer bus and turn the gain down 4 decibels

I like it. Relly do. but i feel like this is missing some creativity and energy.

good melody... but where they drums at bro?? Would love to hear the finished product.

Beautiful track, and wonderful vocals. Great work, keep at it!

So jazzy, i love it. Keep up the great work

Very nice mix and I love the sample used, I'm using a lot of cymatics samples nowadays too, but I heard some of them aren't royalty free. The arrangement is done well too, hats off to you bro.

Think i heard a sample like this before, from a sample pack by JB Digital from Producergrind.... all the samples they have are really dope, and you killed this one. Great work bro.

this sounds amazing bro kudos to you and sweetcheeries. keep at it!

I love this, but personally would have preferred a more raw mix on the drums, otherwise it sounds too lofi. Great work however, keep it up!

This is a great piece, its really sucks tho when we cant get on the same page as artists sometimes... I just keep it professional whenever I collaborate with artists but some people like to make stuff personal. I like this different style though, great work.

This sounds really great bro. Even if it a draft, it sounds like great song.

I sent a response to your email with the track I wanted you to hop on and you didn't respond, just wanna know if you got it or not because I didn't get a response back. If you didn't like it, thats fine bro, just let me know. If there are anymore tracks of mine you'd be interested in, you're always welcome to request to work on it.

I like the drum work, good job on this one

Between 0:26 and 0:40, I would have said this is a nice track, but the rest of the beat is too confusing. The 808s are nicely used but the hi-hats and mixing are low quality. I won't lie to you, I didn't like this one, but there is always room for improvement!

Very nice mixing going on. I like it.

i like the drums but the melody needs to get chopped, screwed, or removed completely. Makes this hard to listen to.

Bro this really good. The mix is done well, I can see someone rapping on this.

Fire asf. You did it again bro

Bro how did you just do that....

You made an out-of-key beat slap.... MY MIND IS BLOWN

Someone call the fire department, this heat is getting out of control. Great work on those vocals too, I did enjoy this.

This is pretty fire, you might wanna work on the eq though. Cut out any frequencies that are too high or low. Keep at it!

It is really nice, but you should renew your drum sounds. Not saying you need trap drum kits, you can go with old hip-hop kits too, but you are using too many simplistic sounds. I enjoyed the way you arranged this too.

Drum variation, drum variation, drum variation. We need to preach this more. This is very nice and mixed well but my first problem was the same snare hitting over and over again in the same pattern. You want to keep things interesting. I know this good and well because I DEFINITELY struggle sometimes at making interesting beats.

If I were you, I'd replace any snares not on the 3rd beat of each bar with a dirty zaytoven rim for all bars except the last one. For the last bar I would replace them with an 808 rim.

For the melody, it sounds amazing. You did yourself a favor making this melody, it could be cleaned up a tinsy bit with some EQ though. Always put the EQ before the reverb.

This all up to you though, I can't force you to do anything. I think you did good on this track but it is just a bit boring.
If you want more feedback like this from more people dm me, I got something for you.

It is a bit stiff, the melody feels tight and cramped. You might have used a compression plugin on the pad and it doesn't help. I do like the rest of your mix, though. The stiffness problem could also be solved by turning the stereo separation up on the melody track.

Go for a bit of variation in the drums. It is okay to have 6-7 percs in one beat even though you see people on YT only using 2-3. Go for the drum bounce! This is a really chill beat and could be even greater with some tweaks. If you want more detailed feedback, i've got a place for you. Hit up the discord in my profile with a friend request.

Yeah, this is some great work here. Good job on the vocals too.