Hey sorry for long response on your email .
This does have a better kick .
The bass still doesn't feel like a real bass . You should change the oscillators pitch to -12 or adjust them some way . I noticed few build ups that's good :) . Now you need to add some more things to make it more interesting . It follows same things all the time . Could use some extra lead or anything to give it more energy . :)
thanks v much, no worries, thanks for taking the time to write it, yea i havent quite got the use of 'effects' yet, but ill get there, watch this space
So here we go
I think you need to EQ , Compress the kick . It feels like a Fruity Usual Kick . It could use a tail to make it sound better .
Your kick is killing other sounds . The bass isn't deep enough , I mean it doesn't have that woofer feel ( sry english isn't the best ) . Volumes needs adjusting .
Feels boring as it does need to bring some effects , buildups etc ...
But in the other hands vocal is done good . Fits into the song .
yea i was worried it was all a bit eJay lols, hopefully reading a few tutorials and forum tips will help me improve my technical ability, atm its all kind of experiment twiddling knobs until i get something similar to what i want :D
Your voice is amazing . This track is arranged very well . Quality good , mastering good . It would be an honor to make a track with you some day if your interested .
Not bad . I do feel like it would use an extra stronger bass / deeper bass to get the vibe going . The plucky sound was kinda annoying , kinda reminds 90's that way . Other than that good work with the track .
Yes!I achieved a 90's track in 2006!I might catch up one day and suprise you with a 2020 track in ,well,2030?lol!
Thanks for a great review,I do apreciate it!!g.xxx
Boommm , this tune is banging my speakers and my ears , mwhaha going to use this song to rape my nabers at night like they rape me some times . Really top dubstep . fav
This track is sweet. I love that you added nice builds for the track to make it more interesting . Good energy on the track . The quality of the track is really good , top production . I guess im going to check more of your tracks later :)
This track is better . ( sorry if im picking on you :P ) ... but you should edit it a little more . The chords should be louder and the synth ( i guess its z3ta ) the filter/cutoff should be turned up slightly at some point to make it more interesting .
Other than that this one is good :)
Needs a bass . Kick is too deep . over and over same beat without any buildups . You need a good breakdown with pads / etc ... to make it more trancy .
If you need help about arranging trance track / making better or anything feel free to contact me . :P
Pretty cool . I think you should add some buildups ( like building with snare, open hihats , tambs or anything :P ) to keep the track running so it would give the track more energy . Good work with the track man
Thanks so much for your opinion! I'm glad you could get into this even without the buildups... I'm not very good at those. I'll try to practice them for future tracks. Thanks for listening my friend!
Wow . One of the best trance tracks I've heard on looperman . The laugh makes the song really epic and the synths are really great . Your voice is amazing . Keep up the good work . Definitely going to keep an eye on you to see more amazing trance tracks . Fav
Thanks man, but keep in mind that it is a preview, right now much hasn't changed but it could!
THanks for the kind words man.
I'll check one of your tunes out.
Steve
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This does have a better kick .
The bass still doesn't feel like a real bass . You should change the oscillators pitch to -12 or adjust them some way . I noticed few build ups that's good :) . Now you need to add some more things to make it more interesting . It follows same things all the time . Could use some extra lead or anything to give it more energy . :)
Good work
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I can help you out at some points if your interested .
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So here we go
I think you need to EQ , Compress the kick . It feels like a Fruity Usual Kick . It could use a tail to make it sound better .
Your kick is killing other sounds . The bass isn't deep enough , I mean it doesn't have that woofer feel ( sry english isn't the best ) . Volumes needs adjusting .
Feels boring as it does need to bring some effects , buildups etc ...
But in the other hands vocal is done good . Fits into the song .
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Thanks for a great review,I do apreciate it!!g.xxx
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Other than that this one is good :)
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If you need help about arranging trance track / making better or anything feel free to contact me . :P
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THanks for the kind words man.
I'll check one of your tunes out.
Steve
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Then it would be top work . Good job
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
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