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Good track! But don't use Looperman as a springboard for Soundcloud or Youtube man. We all do that to some extent, but don't be too egregious about it ;)
Use Looperman for what it is; you may not make money here, but you will get honest feedback, and that's actually really valuable.

Lovely voice, but unfortunately the vocal and the music are not at the same speed and not synchronised (they do at least seem to be in the right key, which is a start). Make sure they have the same BPM, and then also make sure that the verse of the vocal goes with the verse of the song, and chorus to chorus.
Also, the vocal is too loud in the mix, so it sticks out even more.
Some more work to be done, I think!

Really nice, except it's too short! I think you should keep evolving this song (it has a Cranberries feel to it), add vocals (don't have to be perfect), a chorus, etc. Very promising!

Awesome vocals as always. Man she can sing.
Having said that (and I think I could probably listen to her reading out a shopping list with that voice and still be mesmerised), I think she is good enough to make an even cleaner take, eg 2.46 "every" isn't as clean as it could be.

It sounds like a first draft, and I think I've heard better of you both; still, your first draft is better than my final version, and it's a solid track. The music is there (and the lyrics too) and that's what counts.

Very nice and jazzy, good use of the "lo-fi" element.

Very nice and dreamy. Loved it.

Good track. Yes, the beginning is a bit long and not that exciting, it's good that you draw attention to that ;) so why not have the track start at 0:40 or maybe 0:32? Longer is not always betterder.
Good ideas here though, definitely enjoyable.

Just dropping by to say I listened again and enjoyed it even more. Off to listen to your other tracks to lift my mood.

YEah that's a good start, curious where it will lead to!

I see it's your Looperman-o-versary! C godovshchinoi!
Nice and relaxed track. Who cares about the genre, we are people without borders and we shouldn't try to fit music in small boxes - we should just enjoy it :)

Full of energy and passion, I like it. I understand what you mean: having a friend commit suicide is the worst feeling, you'll always keep wondering if there was something you could have done (hint - you can't. Also, the people who talk about it generally are not the ones who do it.)

Hugs from over here and thumbs up for a great track.

I like the guitar loop you used, and I think it works really well with the vocals, and it has a good beat. I'm not a huge fan of the distortion and the clipping of the music (it could be a bit less harsh for me), but I guess even that works, so, kudos :)

If you are going for electronic style cinematic, then I think you probably have done so to some extent. I'm personally not convinced though whether the electronic matches the theme of the title.

Regarding the melody, I assume you're trying to create something powerful and energetic, slightly uncomfortable, something that gets you on the edge of your seat for the next scene, or maybe the next track. If that's what you were trying to do, then it's a good effort, and I'd be interested to hear the next track :)

Very nice anc chill.

I like it! I have to say that the intro is a bit on the long side for a relatively short song, but it's just ok, and the wait is worth it. Good one!

Procto muzika is first music? Really good!

Loads of cool ideas in this track, and you manage to keep them together, which is no small feat. You're right, in space there are no borders, and let's remember that even on earth borders are pretty much imaginary if we want :)
Good job!! I enjoyed it all the way to the end.

Haha, that's very cool, I'm at the other end of the age scale at 51 ;) Good luck and keep making music!!

Lekker man! To be honest when I started listening to the track I thought after 5 seconds "oh no, this is not my thing", but you actually made it work, you keep the interest by bringing new elements, and there's a lot that makes me tap my toes and wiggle my ears. Good stuff!!

I loved it. Really good and interesting, and with that recognisable middle-eastern feel. Give me more, good for you to do your own thing!

Yup, that's a rave type of track and it's pretty good too! I'm not the typical audience I think, but I did enjoy it so well done :)

I love the variety of your trakcs; you don't stick with one style but try everything! Great stuff, and I think this is my favorite so far.

Perfect. Usually "relaxing" music just pisses me off and stresses me out, but this one has exactly the right balance. I'm going to save this :)

It certainly works for me. Some seriously wiggly toes here! And you didn't stick with one idea, several good changes.
I can't hear much of what the vocals are singing, but that's absolutely fine in the way you did it; the autotune and effects are not too overpowering. Good melodies too. Maybe you could work even more towards a climax at the end, but I think you already tried to do that. Solid!

I think you're on the right track. I love the amount of noise!