Hmmm... I like it, but I feel like there's too much going on in some parts. Overall, good flow and use of cadence on the beat. I'll need to listen to it a few more times, maybe it will grow on me!
thanks for the feedback. TBH i don't really know what your talking about when you say "add more melody"
The sub bumps pretty hard when i play this in my car. i tried a bunch of different ways of trying to turn the sub up but when its any louder than it is, it starts to distort pretty badly (assuming this is what you mean by harder bass). So the sub is pretty much as loud as digitally possible. Bass has a weird way of sounding better when it's 'quieter'. Obviously the noises i chose for this song have a lot of high pitched harmonic tones so if you aren't listening on an actual speaker thats all you'll be able to hear during the drop
Side note, the squeaks are my shit, especially these ones, and they are the best part of the melody in my opinion. (Honestly one of the cleanest high pitched bass noises ive ever heard, idk. prove me wrong). I understand to some they might be ear piercing but to others they're face melting and to me they're dank.
fuck this comment was too long my b lol. I hope i don't come off as defensive either thats not my tone, i appreciate the feedback i just don't really know what you mean by it
THIS IS INSANE!!! I LOVE THAT DRUM LOOP WTF!!! amazing. I'll be checking out your projects for sure. I love the african inspiration mixed with a techno vibe.
Thanks for the listen Kingmadi. I love playing around with samples too. Sometimes you can just build an idea around it, which was the case here.
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You win! Thanks for melody atmosphere consistency is important. I appreciate two same opinion may reflects there are many people think so. I studied a lot. Great comment!
Dude holy shit your voice is amazing... Like, better than some people on the radio today. Please get signed or recognized or SOMETHING. You have a voice people will pay to hear. Use your talent! Its so good. I seriously wanted to ask if this was even you because it sounds so professional...
And the lyrics are great, really casual.
The second you said "My friends are dicks (sorry if I'm wrong thats just what I heard) it drew me right in.
You have a real talent dude, I have no criticism to say about this.
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The sub bumps pretty hard when i play this in my car. i tried a bunch of different ways of trying to turn the sub up but when its any louder than it is, it starts to distort pretty badly (assuming this is what you mean by harder bass). So the sub is pretty much as loud as digitally possible. Bass has a weird way of sounding better when it's 'quieter'. Obviously the noises i chose for this song have a lot of high pitched harmonic tones so if you aren't listening on an actual speaker thats all you'll be able to hear during the drop
Side note, the squeaks are my shit, especially these ones, and they are the best part of the melody in my opinion. (Honestly one of the cleanest high pitched bass noises ive ever heard, idk. prove me wrong). I understand to some they might be ear piercing but to others they're face melting and to me they're dank.
fuck this comment was too long my b lol. I hope i don't come off as defensive either thats not my tone, i appreciate the feedback i just don't really know what you mean by it
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And the lyrics are great, really casual.
The second you said "My friends are dicks (sorry if I'm wrong thats just what I heard) it drew me right in.
You have a real talent dude, I have no criticism to say about this.
And yes you're hearing that correctly! Glad you enjoyed it!