kingmadi

The songwriting is very good. The sound of the track is very clean technically. The vocal on the chorus is out of tune, or flat I guess. I like the lyrics. I think you have good vision. Seems like you need more confidence on the vocal. Good job on the quality of the recording, and overall sound.

Very nice work I like it.
Well done.
Jamid

Hello Mate,
Wow, great track mate,
Wonderful track.
Well done
Jamid

You get a great recording for your vocals, from the performance to the quality of the recording. You pronounce the words clearly and are very articulate, I can understand all the lyrics. They sit well with the music which surrounds them and doesn't interfere with them so the production and mix is well done. I liked the intro, it built some tension giving the verse impact when it got calmer, good dynamics.

Cool track man!

Wayne

It's actually pretty good. Just needs the mastering and it is probably set!

DAAAMN BOI!!!

wow great

Talent, bro.. good job

I just treid to post a comment but got logged out when I hit the post button (again)...hope this one works...
I think you should keep it going Kingmadi..you have a good voice. You know I`m not a good source of advice on the genre but I would think in terms of putting in a bit of a break at the end of this part (with a key change would kick it up)..and then do the next part with a bit more instrumentation, synth or whatever...a bit less minimal...maybe widen the additions out a bit around the vocal with placement and/or some mid-side processing...well done...keep it rolling..Ed

Hi,
This is a brilliant track mate.
well done .
Great Job
Fav's
Jamid

Interesting, beat is very addictive and vocals fit right in, I especially liked the chorus. Original song indeed!

Really nice.. Love the vocal and the Beat is great!!

Well done

Interesting stuff.
Don't think I've heard anything on here quite like it.
Couldn't make out the lyrics could be my ears.
But most songs since about 1970 couldn't make iout the lyrics.
You're right it's not done yet.
Be sure to let us know when it is because it's a great little number this.

pretty good

Your style is crazy! like in a good way. You sound like a rap artist from like the 80's era and that's crazy you have that sound. I like everything about this track down to every little instrument sound. Keep up the great work!

idk why but this reminds me of Madonna lol

HOT FLO BRA!

Dope so far. Keep it up

Sick track kingmadi! That beat is so funky with an ill vibe to it. The flows are dope too. The overall mix sound solid. This one's a Fav. Nice work.

Wow - this is amazing. Best hip hop track I've heard on Looperman for ages.

Such a cool groove, great vocals, cool samples. The main riff is so funky and tight. Nice additional percussion.

This has a really cool old skool, positive feel that really appeals to me. Sounds like it could be a big commercial hit. Excellent stuff. No criticisms.

2:20 rapid vocals are awesome!

A favourite 10 times over for me...

This shit is fire king..! I Love it & those chops go perfect Well done! Keep on PLAY!!!

Fly track!
Delivery is smooth AF!
Awesome job.
T2

Nice delivery. Very funky for a funky instrumental. A good mixing can make it pop.

- VicaMOOR

your right, this song stradles genres. more like chill out. gives me a feel of driving with the windows down while cruzing the strip. very nice.

Old School!