I'm liking this! It's a very experimental touch on electro music. I have to agree with BLEEP on the industrial atmosphere also. It reminds me of a warehouse!
If you want, feel free to take a listen to some of my older tracks. 'Codera' is an electro track I wrote that got a lot of hype on here and other platforms. Feel free to take inspiration in any way :)
Awesome job with this! The sounds are super crisp!
The only constructive criticism I really have is that, although it's typical to trap style music, there should have a little variance in the bass line. Two notes gets a little boring to the ears after about 16 bars and the song loses it's unexpected touch.
Other than that, this beat could be some straight fire with the right rapper on top. Hope you find that collab! Check out some of my tracks too, maybe we can make some crazy hybrid electro-trap thing!
I like what you've done here! Brado Sanz and Austin are both awesome talents like you had said, and I think it really shows here in this track.
As far as the track itself goes, Brado's guitar is delightful and Austin's lyrics are touching. The syncopation between the two could use a second touch in some spots, but otherwise you've done a wonderful thing here!
Can't wait to hear more from you soon! Hopefully some originals :)
If there was ever a track that made me reflect on my life thus far, it would be this one.
A couple of my friends are traveling the country together, filming and photographing and editing, I feel like this is a track they would use in a final edit to piece everything together.
Keep up the good work Brado. Always nice to hear your work :)
Now if you excuse me, I need to buy 500 boxes of kleenex.
I just saw this comment, I apologize. I appreciate you stopping in. Your friends can use it for their video - I'd LOVE to see it when it's finished as travel videos are my favorite.
I really like what you've done here. It's like a merger between rock and electronic.
I'm picturing this in a movie. It seems like the perfect introduction to a movie about a high school boy....most likely played by Michael Cera lmao
When you say you're feeling like something is wrong with the track itself, I believe that's just you being your worst critic haha personally, this track is very promising and has a LOT of potential!
One thing I would change though is the synth you've used in the electronic portion. It's a little too harsh. Try bringing the cutoff down a tad and slapping some reverb on there if there isn't some already!
Hope I've been of some help! Stoked to hear more from you !!
The electronic dist guitar used is a soundfont so there's no cutoff knob on the plugin I use. There's already a reverb but yeah, I do believe it's a bit harsh! I'll try finding a way to fix that.
Although the bass could use some boosting, the mix seems to cut out most of the low end and replace it with too much high end. If you need help mixing/mastering, don't hesitate to give me a shout! :)
Best,
Skwish Fish
P.S. Check out my new track 'Focus' and leave me some feedback!! :D
Thank you very much, it does mean a lot to me that you think so highly of this piece! I don't think the original track is assigned to any label unfortunately, but if it was I surely would. But again, thank you so very much for listening and enjoying :)
-7venthSense
This is amazing Penga. Good frickin work dude. Super catchy melody and those attack saws in the drop are flawless.
I do have to mention that, while I believe this track is mixed pretty well, the mastering could've been a little better. I found myself bumping up my volume a little.
That's really all that I could give for constructive criticism haha everything else is practically perfect!!!
This is a very nice track. All the components that exist within it work together in perfect harmony.
I do have to say though, it seems like it's missing a lot. It relies heavily on the repeating piano riff and the acapella to drive it along. The drums are hardly noticeable and seem very distant when they are. Also, the vocals at the very end do not seem to be in the same key.
In order to become ready to be released as a single, this track needs to be touched up on. Add a few more varying piano parts in there and maybe even a little melody to help drive it along.
I hope I haven't been too harsh. This track is absolutely wonderful otherwise!! :)
WOW! Immense amounts of control in this one dude. Great work!
I always try to leave a little constructive criticism in my comments and I had to sit here for a bit just to try to listen for something. The only thing I would adjust is the levels of the drums, they seem like they're getting a little lost within the growls.
Awesome job mate! Check out some of the tracks I have on here!
Hey Skwish can I make a request? So you're a DJ? Once I finish adding bass and mastering it and if you play it in your set could you possibly take a video or have someone take a video of it? Just a phone video or something? It would make my year!
Hey dude! This track has serious potential. I do have some feedback that I need to get off of my chest though.
The intro seems really chaotic and out of control. Although there are only 2 main synths that I can hear, it seems as though they are not in sync with eachother.
Second, opposed to popular opinion, I think the drop synth is very unique. The only thing I would change is the heaviness of the phaser as it takes away from the core sound itself.
Also, the drums are very drowned out until the bass comes in. I don't know if that's from a mastering malfunction or if there is a volume envelope, but either way I would change it. The track seems to be missing something until the drums come in and having them so underneath everything else is teasing the listener, which is (put bluntly) annoying.
I'm sure if you fix this up it will be ready as a nice release!
Check out my stuff if you can! There's a link to my latest EP in the forums as well!!
on Clouds Above by WongKiShoo
I'm loving the arpy synths :)
Good luck in the contest!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
on Synthesiz3r - Dream Drive by Synthesiz3r
Amazing job with the layering and mixing. This reminds me a lot of Neon Indians (which, if you don't know them, is a compliment).
Hope to hear more from you soon!
Happy New Year!
Your Friend,
Skwish Fish
on Outside by MOONLYTE
The backing vocals really add the perfect touch to the meaning of this track. Good work!
I'm glad you made it through this garbage year :)
Stay strong!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
on Sure Thing by AviatOfficial
The only constructive criticism I have to give is, like MistasBeatz said, the mix. It seems really treble heavy, which for bass music is a no-no.
You've got a good thing going here! Just boost the lows and miss while lowering the highs a tad and you've got yourself one hell of a track mate!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
Thank you for your feedback. Even I liked the snare very much xD
Working on the mix and fixed the high treble Hz. And yes it's sounding good!
Thanks once again.
Regards,
Aviat
on Les Fleurs Du Mal by BLEEP
Perfect night drive music! The chill vibe is something you don't hear on here too often so it's always nice when someone throws it at us
Stoked to hear more from you soon! :)
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
glad to read you! i'm happy to see that this kind of melt has a pretty good result! i had doubts because people only listen without comment.
thanks a lot for your positive opinion, be sure i will follow your work too :)
Friendly
Bleep
on Without you by MGproduct
Your synths are super bright! What VST are you using? Sylenth? Massive? Do tell !
Also, check out my tracks if you feel up to it :)
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
I checked you , amazing work you had
Respects,
MG
on Broadway is Calling - ft Young Mo by cej97
I don't know if you've heard the new Childish Gambino album, but this reminds me a lot of that!
Keep up the good work bro!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
on Desolate by Crypt
I'm liking this! It's a very experimental touch on electro music. I have to agree with BLEEP on the industrial atmosphere also. It reminds me of a warehouse!
If you want, feel free to take a listen to some of my older tracks. 'Codera' is an electro track I wrote that got a lot of hype on here and other platforms. Feel free to take inspiration in any way :)
Hope I've been of some help!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
on Mindless - Elevated by geodaniels32
Awesome job with this! The sounds are super crisp!
The only constructive criticism I really have is that, although it's typical to trap style music, there should have a little variance in the bass line. Two notes gets a little boring to the ears after about 16 bars and the song loses it's unexpected touch.
Other than that, this beat could be some straight fire with the right rapper on top. Hope you find that collab! Check out some of my tracks too, maybe we can make some crazy hybrid electro-trap thing!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
on What it was Like by wikkid
I like what you've done here! Brado Sanz and Austin are both awesome talents like you had said, and I think it really shows here in this track.
As far as the track itself goes, Brado's guitar is delightful and Austin's lyrics are touching. The syncopation between the two could use a second touch in some spots, but otherwise you've done a wonderful thing here!
Can't wait to hear more from you soon! Hopefully some originals :)
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
I'm hoping AustinMusic can get the stems and do another vocal that using Brado's music, since both are open to a collab.
I should have some originals up very soon.
on The Lost World by Eendee
Those violins are GORGEOUS. We should try to get this into the next Matt Damon space movie lol
But in all seriousness, amazing work my friend. Can't wait to hear more from you in the future!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
on Not Done Yet - Instrumental - Vocal Ready by BradoSanz
If there was ever a track that made me reflect on my life thus far, it would be this one.
A couple of my friends are traveling the country together, filming and photographing and editing, I feel like this is a track they would use in a final edit to piece everything together.
Keep up the good work Brado. Always nice to hear your work :)
Now if you excuse me, I need to buy 500 boxes of kleenex.
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
I just saw this comment, I apologize. I appreciate you stopping in. Your friends can use it for their video - I'd LOVE to see it when it's finished as travel videos are my favorite.
Best,
Brado
on Insomniac by Blaptized
I'm excited to hear some more from you! If you feel up to it, check out some of my tracks too! :D
on Legatum by bitronix
I really like what you've done here. It's like a merger between rock and electronic.
I'm picturing this in a movie. It seems like the perfect introduction to a movie about a high school boy....most likely played by Michael Cera lmao
When you say you're feeling like something is wrong with the track itself, I believe that's just you being your worst critic haha personally, this track is very promising and has a LOT of potential!
One thing I would change though is the synth you've used in the electronic portion. It's a little too harsh. Try bringing the cutoff down a tad and slapping some reverb on there if there isn't some already!
Hope I've been of some help! Stoked to hear more from you !!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
Thanks!
on Midnight And You by MGproduct
Although the bass could use some boosting, the mix seems to cut out most of the low end and replace it with too much high end. If you need help mixing/mastering, don't hesitate to give me a shout! :)
Best,
Skwish Fish
P.S. Check out my new track 'Focus' and leave me some feedback!! :D
on FREAKPASS Horizon 7venthSense Remix by 7venth12
Not a single bit of constructive criticism I could give. I'm sure if you sent this remix to the right label they'd release it immediately.
Again I say, beautiful work.
Best,
Skwish Fish
-7venthSense
on Come With Me by ReonN
I must agree with Eighteen though. There's a lot of mono-level going on and the compression is indeed a bit too high.
It seems to me that this is more uplifting dubstep, different than what you usually post. That's good. I like different :)
Hope to hear from you soon!
Best,
Skwish Fish
P.S. Happy Holidays!
on DTMYLM Feat Kamoflage by 7venth12
That sample is hilariously awesome! XD
This track reminds me a lot of something you would hear on Blue Slide Park by Mac Miller. Great work my friend!
Hope to hear more from you soon!
Best,
Skwish Fish
on Benghazi by Penga
I do have to mention that, while I believe this track is mixed pretty well, the mastering could've been a little better. I found myself bumping up my volume a little.
That's really all that I could give for constructive criticism haha everything else is practically perfect!!!
Can't wait to hear more from you soon!
Best,
Skwish Fish
on Sailor by oliverzookamoo
I do have to say though, it seems like it's missing a lot. It relies heavily on the repeating piano riff and the acapella to drive it along. The drums are hardly noticeable and seem very distant when they are. Also, the vocals at the very end do not seem to be in the same key.
In order to become ready to be released as a single, this track needs to be touched up on. Add a few more varying piano parts in there and maybe even a little melody to help drive it along.
I hope I haven't been too harsh. This track is absolutely wonderful otherwise!! :)
Keep on making music! Hope to hear from you soon!
Best,
Skwish Fish
on Hands Up - Tevin Lopez - Electronic Dubstep DNB by Tevysound2
I always try to leave a little constructive criticism in my comments and I had to sit here for a bit just to try to listen for something. The only thing I would adjust is the levels of the drums, they seem like they're getting a little lost within the growls.
Awesome job mate! Check out some of the tracks I have on here!
Best,
Skwish Fish
on Flyaway by 7venth12
Congratulations on your first EP!!! I remember that feeling. Yours is a billion times better than my first one though haha
I hope you've heard the artist Flume before because this style is super similar.
Awesome job on this track mate. Hope to hear more from you soon!
Best,
Skwish Fish
on Snowy Night by ReonN
The chord progression is BEAUTIFUL. Absolutely phenomenal job.
Keep up the good work, my dear friend. And check out my new track 'Glaciers'!
Best,
Skwish Fish
on Its a Twvrk by Poppe
This really would be a KILLER banger to play in the club. Put a fat 808 in the drops and I'll play this in my next set!!!
Best,
Skwish Fish
on Electro track 1 by Silenttwilight
The intro seems really chaotic and out of control. Although there are only 2 main synths that I can hear, it seems as though they are not in sync with eachother.
Second, opposed to popular opinion, I think the drop synth is very unique. The only thing I would change is the heaviness of the phaser as it takes away from the core sound itself.
Also, the drums are very drowned out until the bass comes in. I don't know if that's from a mastering malfunction or if there is a volume envelope, but either way I would change it. The track seems to be missing something until the drums come in and having them so underneath everything else is teasing the listener, which is (put bluntly) annoying.
I'm sure if you fix this up it will be ready as a nice release!
Check out my stuff if you can! There's a link to my latest EP in the forums as well!!
Best,
Skwish Fish