BradoSanz

The melody sells this one for me. It's a very entertaining track to listen to. Has a very happy vibe which I love. Great work on this one.

ER

I like it. For being your first song you did good. Nothing is too overpowering. I'm glad you could use my acoustic :D

ER

Came across this gem today. Had to stop in for another listen because it's so groovy. I love this one man. It's one of your best ones, in my opinion. Btw, for some reason, the track is not perfectly 80 BPM when I import it to my DAW haha. It gently sways around in tempo - so subtle but yet enough to throw off a structure haha. Nothing that harms the music though :)

ER

One thing I noticed is that the high end is harsh, particularly on the vocal; the vocal feels too concaved with a lack of presence and harms the beauty of the song because the sharpness of her voice is too strong.

Despite that, the music is SICK. I love the instrumental man. You should make a stand-alone version without vocals and do something with a lead synth. By far, my favorite part has to be 2:50 to 3:51. Your electronic skills have come a long way in a very short time :) Kudos, great work!

ER

snare hit*

Also, I hear some harsh clipping at 1:05.

Unique beat. I like the arabian influence. I feel like the hit is a little weak but that's just my taste. That lead synth in the second part is so dope!

ER

This needs a fat juicy bass to fill in the low-end and it'd be KILLER. The groove is really driving. Awesome. If you need someone to master it, I'm willing to do it! Hit me up when it's done.

ER

Wow just came across this one - I love it right at the start haha. You have a knack for this stuff :) I'm very impressed. This one has a great feel to it. You did very good on the mixing, if I may say so myself! I like what you built around my piano loop :D

ER

Wow, I just checked my loops and came across this gem :) You have a beautiful sweet voice that is very captivating to my ears. Amazing tune. Glad you used my loop!

ER

what do you mean by no mastering done yet? lol

I think the drums coulda had a tad more crispy punch and a tad more presence in the mix but thats just my opinion :P The song structure was really cool, could have been a tad more complex in some spots but overall a great composition.

ER

Your voice is strangely captivating to my ears haha. I like the effects you applied to the vocal. The music is driving but not aggressive, which I appreciate. Reminds me of a good ol' 80s song haha. Kudos on this one!

ER

I uploaded the stems to this track into my DAW and it is struggling to handle the sheer amount of tracks that are contained in it :D Does the BPM move around for this one or stays the same throughout?

ER

I agree that this song lacks the punch it should have. It mainly goes to the drums and the way they were mixed. They're too far away. I think you might need to raise the volume of the drums up a bit so that it helps add the punch I so much desire for this song!

ER

I think one thing this song is lacking a little bit of high-end. Maybe doing a wide sweep (say, 2kHz-15kHz) with about 1dB boost at the max crest would help this song a lot! Sorry for double post!

ER

Juicy synth, driving drums, airy reverberated pads. Perfection imo. I like it. Great job for mastering! It probably came down to your great mix that made your mastering easy. If you've got a good mix, mastering will only put the icing on the cake so to speak. Great work!

ER

That synth and drum go really well together. It's simple but in a complex way, if that makes any sense :D The vocal is really cool, has some neat effects applied to it. Honestly, the drums are my favorite thing. They are very groovy and carry the song into a higher level of percieved complexity even if it may be basic at its core.

ER

You should make a song with just piano and some super deep, muffled synths and large sweeping strings. I love the way the piano sounds in this one. Superb job.

I feel like the voice is varying a lot in volume in certain parts. I'm not sure if you're using a vocal compressor but if not it'll help your voice sound more even in volume. One more thing, I feel like the music is too quiet haha. You got a nice flow though, I must give you that. Ponderful lyrics as well.

ER

This is beautiful beyond words. I finally listened to it on my studio speakers. Wow, I'm blown away. One thing I would have liked to see was some more sweeping strings but overall an extremely excellent job man.

ER

I feel like there's a tad bit too much reverb on Oceanically's vocal but the bassline/chord progression is so sick. Great production on this one man. I have no complaints regarding mixing or mastering besides that one issue. Great job!

ER

YAY!! Another hit from one of my favorite composers on LM. What'd you use for the guitar harmonic? There are a few parts where it sounds a little MIDI-ish but it's probably not noticeable for most listeners - so it's not a game changer :P Beautiful composition as always and like zac, I wish this one was longer :) Great work, as always! I will add you to Skype soon - just having issues with it updating right now, trying to figure that out.

ER

You should upload those drums as a loop. I can never find good-sounding dubstep drums with a normal beat O_o

Your editing of the vocals fit well with the song. The rap vocal sounds a little too far away imo but to each their own. The snare is also a little weak (?) but since it doesn't consume the vocal, I'd say it still works. The second part of the female vocal is too soft and I can't hear what she's saying - maybe turning up the volume of her voice at those points will help. Good idea overall. Very chill track and a catchy synth and string plucks!

ER

Cool but not-too-exciting piano at the start. Very chill song. Could hear a slow heavy rap over this haha. What do you use for your drums? Software or hardware?