Basically, it's a great concept. This is a type of song that once you take everyone's advice and apply it, it will be a hit. You did a good job.
I would recommend looking at your "Why" you produce. If your focus is making the best experience for your listener, then you'll automatically prioritize certain things, which in this case is the vocals always being heard easily.
Thanks so much dude!! I'm literally looking at all the comments and improving the track every day as much as possible. This is pretty much the reason why i love this community bc there are so many nice and helpful people everywhere!!
Wow, you need to start doing scores (if you haven't already). It was very easy to visualize a underwater world and the a scene of finding something large a ominous.
NateJMusic thanks for the kind reply i haven't done any scores but i strived to build into this track a sonic pallette to create a thought or image. In this case the degradation of our environment and the animals in it. I frequently think animals are much better inhabitants of our home than humans.I really enjoyed your music you uploaded this month here on looperman which is top drawer, polished and professional, well done. Best regards
Thank you for stopping by, just was fiddling around with vocals, didn't really take much notice to be honest, just was happy the way they came about...Peace mosaic...
Its a fusion of R&B (tempo), Dance (melody) and Urban (the drums). I would recommend studying the genre better to understand the thought processes behind the music. That is where the secrets are revealed. I produce for a wide gambit of artist so I'm always having to learn a new genre or style.
Yes, I did comment on that track. It's very nice. Right now I am challenged with garageband on my ipad. It's new so I haven't yet figured out how to import a track to sing over.
I love the Timbo/Aaliyah feel with (no disrespect intended). I guess the only thing I would recommend having a radio friendly version (3mins 30sec with a clear verse, pre-chorus, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus out format). A singer/song writer would love this. Those vocals at the end are so dope too.
Thank you for listening and leaving a comment! Regarding "Timbo/Aaliyah" I actually have no idea what you mean. I don't listen to pop music, aside from that which was made quite some time ago (60's through 90's mainly). Since this was simply a remix of someone else's song for a competition, and I did not succeed, then I probably won't take your advice to change the mix. Probably will delete it soon to make room for more songs! Thanks again!
Concept it great. The tempo you might want to adjust. R&B is not the way it use to be. Pop and Trap have seriously undermined R&B these days so its rare to hear a ballad at this tempo. However the quality is high and the track is NOT overproduced. Good Job!
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I would recommend looking at your "Why" you produce. If your focus is making the best experience for your listener, then you'll automatically prioritize certain things, which in this case is the vocals always being heard easily.
Keep grinding bro
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haha yeah hypnotic boppin groove indeed.
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Thank you for stopping by, just was fiddling around with vocals, didn't really take much notice to be honest, just was happy the way they came about...Peace mosaic...
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I would to interest you in working on a Ballad together. Please take a listen to my most recent track and give me your thoughts.
Thanks
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/179660
Ideas very much welcome! :-)
Thanks.
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