Very nice vibe from start to ending, I like the intro and the use of the guitar work along with the organ which adds a great deal of warmth to the track throughout. The touches of rock guitar also add flavor to the mix. I enjoyed this track great job,
Nice production throughout. And though I'm not a fan of auto tune, your vocal style along with the syncopated rhythm / groove
has a nice pop appeal which works well.
Perhaps this was your first version of this project? Don't get me wrong I like the concept and all it's just the song doesn't go anywhere from it's initial stage ie: build or changes. Other than that I think it's a good starting point if that was your intent.
Smooth groove, great vibes with a little mystery mixed in for good measure. I really like everything that kicks in after the 1:56 mark. Very nice and I enjoyed this,
Very Nice! Love the tone, effects & guitar overdubs used on this track. Nice laid back feel and your vocals fit the mood that you're projecting perfectly. So nice to see other musicians on here, I enjoyed this great job.
"Don't need a weatherman to know which way the wind blows indeed..." Your track embodies a mysterious, maybe even ominous feel about it in which perhaps you are trying to convey your message. In which case message received, I also like the fact (much like myself) that you've chosen the "say what you gotta say musical and don't prolong the song unnecessarily" if it is not needed approach.
hey Dennel, thanks for the listen and comments man. i wanted a ruined sound to reflect the images of ruin that permeates most media, it’s certainly permeated my consciousness.
i’m not really dogmatic about song length, but it is particularly gratifying when my long-winded ass manages to bring a sense of brevity to bear in a track. would that that were always the case!
peace, man
Nice! I like the rawness / unplugged sound of the track, and I also I like your vocal and melody structure of the song. I would agree with Eric in terms of being closer to the microphone and eliminating the background noise source. Other than that it's a nice song keep working on it.
I appreciate the kind words :) My recording method is pretty much just setting my phone down next to my amp and singing at the same time lol I managed to buy some cables and stuff so that I can plug my mic and guitar directly into my laptop, so hopefully the next song I make will be more crisp ;) thanks a bunch
This is a nicely done track, like the reoccurring hook throughout the song. The breaks at 2:01 and 3:00 were also nice and I like the guitar treatment at the end of the track.
Wow! This was very nicely done and creative, in my humble opinion this very much says "movie soundtrack" to me. The way you arranged / build the track using the elements of clocks, chimes, etc. Gives the track a mysterious and uncomfortable what's gonna happen to the character next sort of feel. great job and fav,
Hey bringer, this track is definitely "smooth & chilled" to the max. From the slow building opening to the mellow throughout sax treated body of the song. Very nice, easy and enjoyable. Certainly a fav,
This is a really nice track, love that feel and energy. The fade in opening and the break at about 3:15 of the track where you fade back in were nice also. Just a nice all around vibe and dance track. I enjoyed this very much great job,
Hey Rats, ... that intro is TERRIFYING! (Lol!) The groove is Rock Solid and kickin' up all kinds of dust! Had me boppin' my head for sure on this one, nice job I enjoyed your track.
Wow dimestop this is great man! Using your singing talent gives this track a whole new aspect. And I really like the lyrical content and how you put the song together as whole, it has a semi melancholy feel about it. The Danke music track worked well in conveying the mood and artistry. Fabulous job my friend,
thanks for the great comment Dennel, i know you are old old school long time here, we have only just started our friendship but words like yours give artists a lift to keep pushing, critique but constructive, we all need too, i add. i only got better from people like Rita Micky Manuela Angel Cinco too many to mention giving me feedback. i always reply, and i comment on most if not all the tracks i listen too. its not hard, and if it puts a smile on someons face thats a bonus, since you have only surfaced to me recently, i can tell you are a community player like mee, good on ya bro and your a great artist too.
This was a very well done track, like the breakdown at about 1:26 and the short break at 2:12. This certainly got me up and going on this early morning, great work
Surprised that I hadn't heard this before, it certainly has a certain mystique about it building up all the way to the very end. And the female vocal adds an alluring aspect to the track,
very nice.
Hey BaoBou, That opening is epic! The track is very laid back and very cool and not sure if that's you on the vocals but I immediately started drawing comparisons to Colin James Hay; the lead singer for the band "Men At Work." Just a nice vibe and cool track, I enjoyed this very much great job and faved.
Hey StarTravels, first: by the information you gave in the description this is obviously part of some continuous, ongoing Syfy epic you've created. Secondly: (my opinion) this track has a lot of "Funk & Swag" for a "Trip Hop" tune minus the low-end (bass). Not sure why I'm under the impression now that you must not like bass very much (lol), given your commentary in the last part of your column. "I would like to avoid such dominant bass here, because there are too many ice formations that could easily burst if there is too much bass, and that could be fatal, at least on this planet." Is this indeed your metaphor for no bass? Lol... to each their own I suppose, but I digress. The track as a whole is a wonderful tune and by the end I felt like I was in the club gettin' my groove on. The guitar solo that comes in around 4:33 really adds a nice touch to the tune. Great work and I enjoyed your track and faved.
Oh no, Dennel, I'm an absolute bass fan. If there really isn't enough bass on this track, tell me and I'll change it. That would make you the second person to feel that way. Cincocent meant that, but I don't know....he has extreme taste in bass. In his compositions this is 100 percent correct and appropriate. But, to be honest, that would be a bit too much for me.
Well, it's always a matter of choosing a genre here... I didn't find anything suitable and then in the end I just chose Trip Hop because I don't care anyway.
Thank you for your valued comments.
Kind regards.
Had to repost my comment because I made too many mistakes last time lol! Well Alright Then Micky, looks like you've got yourself a winner here. Gotta give you big props on your vocals man, and the production is great on this track. I enjoyed this very much and faved great job.
Hello Dennel, glad you like the track. There are no samples in there (except for those processed voices at the very beginning), which is why it took me quite a while. However, I'm not entirely happy with the brass section. If you need them you have the choice between real musicians with horns, which are very expensive and time-consuming, or samples or loops, but you have to live with what is played there, or VST horns, which never, never ever sound like real ones. I actually detest artificial wind instruments, but for love's sake I used VST horns here, knowing from the outset that I would be dissatisfied with them. It may sound nice, but unfortunately it's not the real thing. I hope that one day I'll meet someone who just plays whole brass sections... LOL
Anyway, I was really happy that you came in and listened.
Peace,
Micky
Well Alright Then Micky, looks like you've got yourself a winner here. Gotta give you big props on your vocals man, and the production is great on this on this track. I enjoyed this very much and faved.
Hello Dennel, glad you like the track. There are no samples in there (except for those processed voices at the very beginning), which is why it took me quite a while. However, I'm not entirely happy with the brass section. If you need them you have the choice between real musicians with horns, which are very expensive and time-consuming, or samples or loops, but you have to live with what is played there, or VST horns, which never, never ever sound like real ones. I actually detest artificial wind instruments, but for love's sake I used VST horns here, knowing from the outset that I would be dissatisfied with them. It may sound nice, but unfortunately it's not the real thing. I hope that one day I'll meet someone who just plays whole brass sections... LOL
Anyway, I was really happy that you came in and listened.
Peace,
Micky
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has a nice pop appeal which works well.
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i’m not really dogmatic about song length, but it is particularly gratifying when my long-winded ass manages to bring a sense of brevity to bear in a track. would that that were always the case!
peace, man
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I love Men At Work, so that's a super comparison! thank you so much!
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Dennel
Well, it's always a matter of choosing a genre here... I didn't find anything suitable and then in the end I just chose Trip Hop because I don't care anyway.
Thank you for your valued comments.
Kind regards.
Micky
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Anyway, I was really happy that you came in and listened.
Peace,
Micky
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All the best,
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Anyway, I was really happy that you came in and listened.
Peace,
Micky