DaMann

Perpetual Deliciousness

Somewhere, United States

Joined : 12th Apr 2008 - 18 years ago

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DaMann has posted 283 comments on other peoples tracks.

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DaMann 1st Feb 2009 19:14 - 17 years ago

on hard drive-synergy competition by Rorshach2021

Great track, I like the little break down to bring in the bass, but the bass does sound a little weird to me, the sound, I would choose a sound that is a little more filtered I guess.

-DaMann

Rorshach2021 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks for the review

DaMann 1st Feb 2009 01:04 - 17 years ago

on simplerealtalk by pappathorpe

Really like it, but the lyrics sound a bit loud at first, then they equal out.

Great track!

-DaMann

DaMann 31st Jan 2009 20:47 - 17 years ago

on Redemption by lofthouse

Jammin, the intro is amazing!

Great track!

-DaMann

lofthouse replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Damn!Thanx Mann!!

DaMann 27th Jan 2009 04:34 - 17 years ago

on 1000 Winds by lazyboy

Sounds great, but definitly a different intro, don't jump right into it. I think a bit of mastering would make it sound better too, I can see this being a top notch track with a little work! Also use a different bass sound, you are using more of a ##### bassline, which is for, well #####, I prefer to use softer basslines, or actual bass samples, but nothing harsh.

Great Track

-DaMann

lazyboy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

cheers damann

DaMann 27th Jan 2009 00:37 - 17 years ago

on Ground Around by COL_GRINDER

The guitar comes in a little expected, cool, but I think you could have the shakers going, then filter in the guitar?

Great track!

-DaMann

COL_GRINDER replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thank you very much for your input. I will take it into consideration when I do the final mix.

Regards,
COL_GRINDER

DaMann 25th Jan 2009 08:02 - 17 years ago

on 300 stranger by Orex

The lead sounds pretty cool, but you need to bring it out with a big saw lead, hypersaws, whatever, stack the saws, detune them, make it #####!

DaMann 24th Jan 2009 19:40 - 17 years ago

on Invasion by Dj_Lex

The intro is awesome, reminds me a lot of Phaze 2 Phaze by.... ummm... Hixxy? I don't know you can look it up, they should remake the game space invaders just for the sake of having this song on it...

Great Track!

-DaMann

DaMann 21st Jan 2009 23:18 - 17 years ago

on Never Thought that i were miss you by Orex

Sounds great, but I would turn the kick down, or use a less distorted one, and it's genre would be dance.

Great track!

-DaMann

Orex replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks. Yeah when i first heard it i tought it was very scratchy. Im gonna turn down the volume of the kick i think

DaMann 20th Jan 2009 01:50 - 17 years ago

on Clarity by ToxicVoltage

Awesome, the first time everything comes in.... I'm just like.... wow random in a crazy/awesome way!

Great track!

-DaMann

DaMann 6th Jan 2009 22:04 - 17 years ago

on Dance Hell_dance mix 2 by spacestationwagon

Crazy, dangerous, that vocal is awesome. Gizzard hit the nail on the head with his review, haha!

-DaMann

spacestationwagon replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

this is a dangerous place! thanks damann!

DaMann 5th Jan 2009 23:47 - 17 years ago

on On The Horizon by toddj

Sounds epic in the beginning, then just sounds like scuba diving, very interesting sounds. Very ambient, didn't see that coming.

Great track!

-DaMann

toddj replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

I enjoyed your enterpretation of this song. I guess I never thought of it sounding that way. Made me laugh. Thanks!

DaMann 5th Jan 2009 00:36 - 17 years ago

on Hold the Line (Tester) by Salkizar

That gated synth or whatever is the sh--! How did you make that... a sequence, sidechain, amp evn gate?

Great tune man!

-DaMann

Salkizar replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks man...its not a gate tho...its all my doing, its a synth from nexus with camelspace filters on it! Cheers for the review tho!! Glad u liked it..

DaMann 3rd Jan 2009 19:55 - 17 years ago

on N.I.L.8 by lazyboy

https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/39054 The second post on the third page, this link should take you to that page, I describe how to sidechain right here =D!

DaMann 3rd Jan 2009 19:40 - 17 years ago

on N.I.L.8 by lazyboy

The bassline in the beginning sounds more dnb, maybe you could sidechain it and it would be a very different but possibly great bassline! Also there is no intro, wait, just read its a sample, yeah keep working!

Great track!

-DaMann

lazyboy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

i'd love to side chain but i dont know how

DaMann 2nd Jan 2009 20:51 - 17 years ago

on Call to arms by ReignStorms

The beginning is a cool beat, but really random, it's glitch then orchestral. Also the loops are a little weird when the snares roll, it kind of stops in a way, sounds like you made it into one loop, I would separate them and layer them to avoid that awkward silence.

Still a great epic track!

-DaMann

ReignStorms replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

I wish I had my own studio so I could make my own loops. I have to work with what I can get. With what little I do have, I have to say that I'm happy with this one.

DaMann 31st Dec 2008 17:16 - 17 years ago

on Waxing Synthetic by Falter

New synths are great aren't they. A little repetitive though and the energy never seems to come. I think you need to use a different kick and at one point in the song add a ##### melody, something using the low high type melody. Where you have say, C2 then C4 right after it in eighth notes, repeat and add variations, if that makes sense.

-DaMann

Falter replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

yeah dude, that totally makes sense. ill give it a go, good effort mate. i've only been workin with some 'okay' headphones so the kicks sound different to me than to you, you know? my stuff should shape up when my new system comes in. cant wait man. i love xmas presents haha.
peace Mann

DaMann 24th Dec 2008 17:54 - 17 years ago

on Bendable Rhubarb? by Rorshach2021

Ok, how did you get that bassline, I hear the sidechain, but the high layer on the bass, it's amazing.

Great track!

-DaMann

DaMann 24th Dec 2008 17:47 - 17 years ago

on synergy competition--there's a robot in my kitchen by Rorshach2021

Really cinematic, how did you get those awesome pluck reverb synthy sounds? House always sounds too repetitive to me though, I think it needs to be more dynamic, but I guess the repetitiveness is part of the genre.

Great track!

-DaMann

DaMann 24th Dec 2008 17:20 - 17 years ago

on Slap Me by sulmona

It's a good song, but we have something to discuss. I am from Texas, and I used to think all electronic music was techno, but I learned. This would fall under more funk, or something like that. Rock maybe. Electronic dance music (EDM) usually has a four on the floor beat, that means a bass kick on every fourth beat, and a bass stab in between the bass kicks along with an open hi hat. There is also Drum n Bass which is an exception, but I'm too lazy to explain that more. If I were you I would look into genres and learn them all, you can be one of the few people in Texas that actually knows their EDM genres.

Great track!

-DaMann

sulmona replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thanks for your suggestions, DaMann. If only I had time to investigate every genre out there! It seems like someone's inventing a new one every day. I'm glad you liked the track, however. You've posted a LOT of tunes out there. I'll check them out when I have a little more time. Happy holidays.

DaMann 24th Dec 2008 17:17 - 17 years ago

on Buzzkill! by Acrylic

It's always great to split someones head in two, but even better to do it with musical style. I love breakcore, and glitch, and dnb, and edm, and whatever this might fall under. Sounds a lot like Aphex Twin!

Great Track!

-DaMann

Acrylic replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Hey thanks! i checked out Aphex twin and it blew my mind, trying to buy some now Thx DaMann!

DaMann 21st Dec 2008 22:35 - 17 years ago

on sweet nightmares by Ashnaia

I love psy/goa trance. I would instead of slowing down that vocal you use, just pitch shift it. Around 5:00 it's great. I would use a synth that is a little more active in some part of the song, like synth in 16th or eighth notes in an eerie key.

Great track!

-DaMann

DaMann 18th Dec 2008 21:13 - 17 years ago

on Midnight Heaven by Avail

Those plucks are really cool, one thing I would recommend is a different key, just a thought. Nice use of the bongos/congas/congos/whatever in it.

-DaMann

Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thanks, what did you think about the key?

DaMann 13th Dec 2008 01:21 - 17 years ago

on Prevalance by Acrylic

Jamming drums and lead synth. the synth sounds like it could use a different key sometimes.

Great track!

-DaMann

DaMann 11th Dec 2008 22:22 - 17 years ago

on Brazil Delirar Salkizar Hunta Collab Project by Salkizar

The intro is pretty cool, but I think it calls for some strings. A whole orchestra! I like the acid synth arp thing a lot.

Great track!

-DaMann

Salkizar replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks for the review man!! Dunno if my pc could handle a whole orchestra...but nice suggestion!!

DaMann 11th Dec 2008 22:19 - 17 years ago

on Unite by Tiltedbeats

That guitar is awesome! Or whatever it is. So chill, I don't think the kick fits in perfectly, I would try a different one or add a filter and some reverb maybe.

Great track!

-DaMann

Tiltedbeats replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

cheers for the review bro!
yer i know what you mean with the kick! i get bored of simple beats, so i like to go beyond it sometimes, and sometimes to far LOL! seeing as this was only a muck-around with some loops i tried some different beats! some peeps liked them, but hey can't please everyone!

i might try what you said, see what it sounds like with another kick ;)

cheers bro
Butcha

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