Cool acoustic track
I felt the lack of compression but it doesnt matter, cuz the volume of the vocal line is ok and you didn't shout a lot in music
so GL
peace
J_*
Such a nice music to show your anger, or maybe an story
what I got from this music was something confusing
Is there any ends for making this music?
Kindest Regards
J_*
Thats a great track
Ofcourse one of the best vocal mastering that I heard in this genre.
so congratulation, your track is great
but in my opinion:
1.in 0:46 the incoming arpeggio is out of note range and loud a bit
2. your singing style is so boring,(in my op) specially for a dance track, you should play with rhythms, maybe shout sometimes, and and and...
3.turn the reverb down sometimes, thats a good suggestion for a dance track.
So all was my personal opinions
your track is nice
Kind Regards
J_*
Thanks man. I really appreciate the honestly. I'm still trying to figure out this mixing stuff and try not to over do things. But my vocals, after listening to over and over it can get a little boring. So I understand where you are coming from there, but I think I was thinking to go with the more laid by vocals I suppose. But yeah, Thanks for taking your time out to listen and comment. I needed that.
Greetings
thats a cool music specially that vocal line
and that rhythm change in 0:46, was cool
and in 1:22 you got a cool debut for the drums
Kind regards
J_*
Im glad to write the first comment of your track
your track is nice
but it would be better to use some bridges to change the rhythm
just like in 0:42
Kindest Regards
J_*
Great song man
I really love this type of guitar playing
but why you used reverb that much?
c'mon that reverb kills your voice
its like you are singing in the bath
your voice is beautiful
and just a little reverb can make your voice more beautiful
but not that much
Kindest Regards
J_*
I loved every second of your music too my friend
so
Im gonna give you some of my personal opinions:
1.some reverb could make the vocal line greater than it is
2.that clap in the start could be louder (just a bit)
3.that dropdown in 0:49 makes your vocal's volume louder
(it could be a mistake but in this music it makes your dropdown so great)
5.I loved your pad compression in 1:16
6. and in 1:32 , wow I heard a nice hat and I truely loved it
so everything was good in this music
and I just told my personal opinion
Keep it up
Kindest Regards
J_*
Thank you for the kind words and for the in depth feedback! I appreciate the fact that you took the time to analyse and comment the flaws, thanks again :)
-7venthSense
Dont think like this man
who doesnt hate his voice?
its normal, cuz everyone think their voice are so bad
and they hate their voice
and I truely say
I liked your vocie
and I think your voice is beautiful
Kindest regards
J_*
My personal opinion is to not split your vocal line
you can sidechain if you want to be have 2 vocals with different effects
but man, why you dont use effects on your first vocal line? thats crazy
every vocal line should be have mastering
roll off and compression is necessary for vocals
its ok if you want to split your vocal lines but dont leave your first vocal line unaffected
Oh I must have misspoken. I certainly do not leave the any vocal unaffected. Just on the mono i use less then on the side since i want to hear them more clearly in the middle versus the side. I dont know on the top of my head what effects i used on the mono part. But there is a lot but very delecate
Okay so i will glad to write something to help you:
we have three phases of mastering:
roll off
compresion
2nd equlize for brighting (EQ)
widing
harmonic exciter (tube-tape-retro)
reverb
maximize
overview
first, what you need to be have a great vocal line is certainly "Roll Off"
Roll off means removing some additional frequencies
for example for male singer you should remove frequencies above 15000Hz and lower than 90Hz (its variable for each singer)
you can easily use a parametric equalizer for this
and some of them has a box which can show you which range of frequencies are additional like Fruity loops parametric EQ2
(which i use)
second thing you need for vocal line is compression
for example if singer shouts a lot in the vocal line
you should be have compression
it makes your vocal line's volume fixed
but sometimes for example you have a rock vocal line which has a lot of shouting and up and down
so you have to limit your vocal line with a limiter
but be careful, cuz limiting and compression should be average, not much and not low
if you have a loud vocal line after limiting, i suggest you to turn the volume down
and the last thing you should do, (except effects like delay, reverb, chorus and etc ) is widing
lemme give you an example,
if a guitar player play guitar in front of you in about 1 meters distance, you hear the guitar sounds loud
but if he goes far about 10 meters, you hear sounds lower
so the widing is same distance
its effective on volume, "but its not the volume"
I dont know what is the plugin in your daw for widing
and if you dont have one, I will be glad to send you one
but the only thing you should do for this track
is to "unwide" your vocal line with a widing plugin
Many thanks for the info man.
I deffinitly roll off first followed by a compressor.
As for the widening. This term is kinda new to me. But what i have done is for ,exampletaking one vocal line and splits that into one fully mono and one fully stereo, then over the stereo one use delays ect and side chain so i dont affect the mono part. I will re read the stuff u just gave me when i am at home when i have more time.
Hey, thanks for taking the time to listen to the track. I am the singer, I write, play, and sing everything on my tracks. I wish I was a better singer, but at least I can some what sing in tune 50% of time :). Thanks again.
on When Did I by Cestevens1783
I felt the lack of compression but it doesnt matter, cuz the volume of the vocal line is ok and you didn't shout a lot in music
so GL
peace
J_*
on Standoff by Purge
it can be good, yea it will
so good luck
peace
J_*
on New -Teaser- by Fl4zh
It can be great if you finish it
Im a big fan of using that keys in electronic music
peace
J_*
on Gravity by Fl4zh
what I got from this music was something confusing
Is there any ends for making this music?
Kindest Regards
J_*
on Do I Have To Dave by ImDangerous
Ofcourse one of the best vocal mastering that I heard in this genre.
so congratulation, your track is great
but in my opinion:
1.in 0:46 the incoming arpeggio is out of note range and loud a bit
2. your singing style is so boring,(in my op) specially for a dance track, you should play with rhythms, maybe shout sometimes, and and and...
3.turn the reverb down sometimes, thats a good suggestion for a dance track.
So all was my personal opinions
your track is nice
Kind Regards
J_*
on Karaoke Machine by braindedmusic
I liked your mix
Kindest Regards
J_*
on Cookies For Dinner by SeriouslyJoking
thats a cool music specially that vocal line
and that rhythm change in 0:46, was cool
and in 1:22 you got a cool debut for the drums
Kind regards
J_*
on Ballad With The Devil DEMO by VicaMOOR
and also the beat was so cool
a cool lumpish song
Kindest Regards
J_*
on December DEMOS by AngelDelarosaJr
your track is nice
but it would be better to use some bridges to change the rhythm
just like in 0:42
Kindest Regards
J_*
on Jahjah and Rainso - Feelings feat asidRn by zacvoos
and cool dropdowns
kind regards
J_*
on Bubbleverse by FroggyDJ
Its cool track
actually every part of music had its own rhythm
congratz and
Kindest Regards
J_*
on iAmless - The Cover - Just A Cover by IamLess
I really love this type of guitar playing
but why you used reverb that much?
c'mon that reverb kills your voice
its like you are singing in the bath
your voice is beautiful
and just a little reverb can make your voice more beautiful
but not that much
Kindest Regards
J_*
on Inclination by 7venth12
so
Im gonna give you some of my personal opinions:
1.some reverb could make the vocal line greater than it is
2.that clap in the start could be louder (just a bit)
3.that dropdown in 0:49 makes your vocal's volume louder
(it could be a mistake but in this music it makes your dropdown so great)
5.I loved your pad compression in 1:16
6. and in 1:32 , wow I heard a nice hat and I truely loved it
so everything was good in this music
and I just told my personal opinion
Keep it up
Kindest Regards
J_*
-7venthSense
on hard of hearts instrumental by larrybarrow31
but dont you think its repetetive a bit?
Kind Regards
J_*
on In Too Deep by ImproveWithError
who doesnt hate his voice?
its normal, cuz everyone think their voice are so bad
and they hate their voice
and I truely say
I liked your vocie
and I think your voice is beautiful
Kindest regards
J_*
on 09 Between The Lane by Eighteen
try to unwide your loud part
then turn the volume of your effected part down and wide it
Kind regards
J_*
Thanks a lot for the help man. I appreciate it
~Eighteen
on 09 Between The Lane by Eighteen
you can sidechain if you want to be have 2 vocals with different effects
but man, why you dont use effects on your first vocal line? thats crazy
every vocal line should be have mastering
roll off and compression is necessary for vocals
its ok if you want to split your vocal lines but dont leave your first vocal line unaffected
Kindest regards
J_*
on Insanely Mellow by beerling1970
In my opinion it can be a mystic strange song which makes the listener think! not chill...
so well done
Kind regards
J_*
Steve
on 09 Between The Lane by Eighteen
we have three phases of mastering:
roll off
compresion
2nd equlize for brighting (EQ)
widing
harmonic exciter (tube-tape-retro)
reverb
maximize
overview
first, what you need to be have a great vocal line is certainly "Roll Off"
Roll off means removing some additional frequencies
for example for male singer you should remove frequencies above 15000Hz and lower than 90Hz (its variable for each singer)
you can easily use a parametric equalizer for this
and some of them has a box which can show you which range of frequencies are additional like Fruity loops parametric EQ2
(which i use)
second thing you need for vocal line is compression
for example if singer shouts a lot in the vocal line
you should be have compression
it makes your vocal line's volume fixed
but sometimes for example you have a rock vocal line which has a lot of shouting and up and down
so you have to limit your vocal line with a limiter
but be careful, cuz limiting and compression should be average, not much and not low
if you have a loud vocal line after limiting, i suggest you to turn the volume down
and the last thing you should do, (except effects like delay, reverb, chorus and etc ) is widing
lemme give you an example,
if a guitar player play guitar in front of you in about 1 meters distance, you hear the guitar sounds loud
but if he goes far about 10 meters, you hear sounds lower
so the widing is same distance
its effective on volume, "but its not the volume"
I dont know what is the plugin in your daw for widing
and if you dont have one, I will be glad to send you one
but the only thing you should do for this track
is to "unwide" your vocal line with a widing plugin
Kind regards
J_*
I deffinitly roll off first followed by a compressor.
As for the widening. This term is kinda new to me. But what i have done is for ,exampletaking one vocal line and splits that into one fully mono and one fully stereo, then over the stereo one use delays ect and side chain so i dont affect the mono part. I will re read the stuff u just gave me when i am at home when i have more time.
Many thanks again man
~Eighteen
on 09 Between The Lane by Eighteen
just tell me what DAW you use
then I can give you some advice to solve that
on PRIORITY ALL SCREWD UP X PRO X AESYNC TAYALI by TayaliJeffrey
Hmmm,its a mystic gang track right?
which type of collab you need my friend?
I will be glad to help you
Kind regards
J_*
on In Too Deep by ImproveWithError
the song is great and...
are you the singer of this song?
Kind regards
J_*
Kyle
on All Woman featuring Lisa Worth by RichieWinn
Cool pop track
but I dont think if vocal line is loud a bit or its for my headphone
Kind regards
J_*
Thank you for your comments and glad you thought is was a cool pop track.
Richie
on Winter bites by traz75
great song
and great copyright :D
kind regards
J_*
on Shine Your Light by novaspace
again my favorite trance-drums method
((Kick_ Hat-Hat_ Clap_ Hat_)) :D
nice work my friend
Kind regards
J_*