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Love the sounds in the intro. Gives the whole thing a nice flavor.

Chill yet danceable. Love the whole vibe on this one. Nice. Keep it up.

Wow. I don't really know if I could do anything near as good just using 3 loops, a mic, and some effects. Really reminds me of Rammstein the way the whole track comes together. Well done yet again.

Very nice! I was looking forward to see what you would do with those loops and I was not disappointed!

I really enjoy the way the song is structured with the breaks and builds. It just overall sounds great.

This is some good stuff. Do more like this!

I like your background track but the vocals don't fit very well at all. This would be markedly better if you used some pitch correction software on the vocals to make them fit the track OR just play with the notes in the background track to make them fit the vocals.

I really like the strings in the background. Gives it kind of a cinematic vibe.

Wow. Farisha's vocals are stellar and you did a great job backing them. This sound like it could be on the radio. Nice work!

I'm diggin the heart monitor beeps about halfway through as well as all your other samples that you have in this. I like how it switches gears every so often but still manages to keep the same theme.

I really love the vocal samples in this!

This track is very well put together. All the sounds fit very well with each other. I like the lonely ambiental feel to it. Nice job.

I really enjoyed this track. The melody is beautiful. It has such an epic, cinematic feel to it. There was one little spot that I think could make this track better. Starting around 4:24, that string-ish synth fades and the plucks come back in. The only thing is that the synth stays in one chord while the plucks keep moving with the melody. This makes it sound kind of discordant. I don't know if you intended to have that effect to add tension, but to me it grates on my ears a bit. Other than that, it's flawless. Great track!

I really enjoyed this. I love the sound of that synth playing the melody throughout the song. I don't think I've heard your first song yet but your second one sure sounds great! Keep it up.

I wish I could get a great sounding track done in two hours. Nice job!.

I love this! Chill and kind of ambiental with those vocal chops in the background. Great job!

I've noticed you're good at creating an atmosphere. :D Have you tried adding some sub bass to the drop. For this style of drop I think there needs to be a wall of bass under the talking bass; something to rattle the floorboards during the drop. The bass drone that you have there would be good but it just needs more in the 5Hz-20Hz-ish range Also, the plucks from 1:06 to about 1:23 are ever so slightly behind the beat. I don't know if this is just the instrument or if you intended it to be this way, but that sort of just-slightly-off squirrelyness just bugs the everliving F%#@ out of me when it happens in my own tracks. That's just my $.02. I hope this helps.

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I really liked that part that came in at about the three and half minute mark. Nice job on this one. I wish it could have gone on instead of fading at ten minutes.

Good start.
Your first priority should be getting a good mic that you don't have to worry about overpowering.
I'm excited to see what you'll come up with!

This sounds pretty good. I like the stereo play with that synth. If I were you though I'd scale it back a little so that if someone only has a left or right channel and not both they can still hear all of it. That's just one of my pet peeves when song is completely split between left and right so you can't get the full picture on one side. Other than that, I'd maybe boost the low end but that's just personal preference. I really like the ominous vibe in this track. Nice work!