Wow. I don't really know if I could do anything near as good just using 3 loops, a mic, and some effects. Really reminds me of Rammstein the way the whole track comes together. Well done yet again.
This is a realy realy gentle comment.
Thankyou very much for the friendly words.
And i am sure you would wonder what you can do with 3 samples, a mic, and the only rule is -use it in any way :)
It´s maybe a little to lazy or groovy for rammstein or?
I like your background track but the vocals don't fit very well at all. This would be markedly better if you used some pitch correction software on the vocals to make them fit the track OR just play with the notes in the background track to make them fit the vocals.
Thanks D3RELICT. I'm taking your suggestion seriously and I'm currently working on the pitch and the notes. I will update soon. Thanks for an honest critique.
Thanks..
i think that the strings is the base for most music and sure not all
but i like mixing Guitars Power this something more soft
i feel it give nice music
you know sure i have some mistakes but i wish i could correct and improve my work
I'm diggin the heart monitor beeps about halfway through as well as all your other samples that you have in this. I like how it switches gears every so often but still manages to keep the same theme.
I really enjoyed this track. The melody is beautiful. It has such an epic, cinematic feel to it. There was one little spot that I think could make this track better. Starting around 4:24, that string-ish synth fades and the plucks come back in. The only thing is that the synth stays in one chord while the plucks keep moving with the melody. This makes it sound kind of discordant. I don't know if you intended to have that effect to add tension, but to me it grates on my ears a bit. Other than that, it's flawless. Great track!
I really enjoyed this. I love the sound of that synth playing the melody throughout the song. I don't think I've heard your first song yet but your second one sure sounds great! Keep it up.
my first track "I earned" is in my track list. But don't expect too much. I made a lot of mistakes in both arrangement an mixdown/mastering. It is a good example of what you can screw up in a track... :-)
Listen and cry... ;-)
I've noticed you're good at creating an atmosphere. :D Have you tried adding some sub bass to the drop. For this style of drop I think there needs to be a wall of bass under the talking bass; something to rattle the floorboards during the drop. The bass drone that you have there would be good but it just needs more in the 5Hz-20Hz-ish range Also, the plucks from 1:06 to about 1:23 are ever so slightly behind the beat. I don't know if this is just the instrument or if you intended it to be this way, but that sort of just-slightly-off squirrelyness just bugs the everliving F%#@ out of me when it happens in my own tracks. That's just my $.02. I hope this helps.
I really liked that part that came in at about the three and half minute mark. Nice job on this one. I wish it could have gone on instead of fading at ten minutes.
Thanks. I only just realized this morning that the bass in part one was out of key. That's bloody headphone mixes for you.
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This is a realy realy gentle comment.
Thankyou very much for the friendly words.
And i am sure you would wonder what you can do with 3 samples, a mic, and the only rule is -use it in any way :)
It´s maybe a little to lazy or groovy for rammstein or?
stay tuned
joe
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i think that the strings is the base for most music and sure not all
but i like mixing Guitars Power this something more soft
i feel it give nice music
you know sure i have some mistakes but i wish i could correct and improve my work
With appreciation
Samer
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my first track "I earned" is in my track list. But don't expect too much. I made a lot of mistakes in both arrangement an mixdown/mastering. It is a good example of what you can screw up in a track... :-)
Listen and cry... ;-)
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