Hey Bud,,, cool cool cool composition. plenty of work went into this and done well.......... now for the peanut-gallery and my one cent...... from 0 to about 1/2 way in......... I'm feeling some stereo on the mono bass synth, use a Chorus plug in. tuned just right, the bass movement will add POP and enhance overall..... my best, SJ
Woah! If this is what the track is like before the final mix, it's gonna be a real show stopper. That industrial thump is so infectious I just can't stop listening. If I wasn't too lazy to go out running, this would be on my playlist. I'll keep an eye out for the final version when it arrive. Good job man.
Hello mate,
This track has a lot of potential, please don’t be put off by this, but I do believe the intro 1,05 minute is to long you should start the track little sooner then that.
I am looking forward to the update I am sure it will be great.
Well done.
Jamid
okay, so i wont say anything about the track, because i think its perfect. Those synths are godlike.
(y u no let me download T_T)
So ill talk about the mix now that ive listened to it on my studio setup.
The clicks, while a major part of the song i feel are little too far forward in the mix, they stick out just a bit too much.
and the bass has more going on the low end than your average dubstep track.
not a bad thing necessarily, thats just what i noticed
Yeah, I didn't spend too much time mixing this. I plan on coming back to it and as soon as I finish it, it will be up for download. Maybe I'll be able to spend some time mixing this soon.
love the intro , got my head bobbin right away. This is some real catchy stuff. I'm really digging the vibe here. Kind of reminds me of a video I saw of experimental music with visual effects that went with the music in the video. Any ways during the drop around 2:04 i think could have gone great with a small break into transition. To make the transition feel like a bigger impact, but still great as is . Keep up the great work D3RELICT . -EazyBeatz
Truth be told, this is extremely innovative. such a mix of percussion that has not been heard before in such a way. I love what you are doing. You sir are progressing music further with works like this and I salute you for it. I imagine this with vocals and I think you have a new genre.
Cru
This track builds quite nicely, definitely has a raw sound. The percussion is almost a little hypnotic. The part at 3:02 is so cool, almost has a funky and uplifting element to it, really groovy stuff. Good synth's and beats, love it dude! If you ever wanna collab then message me, would love to do a track with you!
This percussions like drums sounds so 80´s (just 4 me) and they fit so good to the "modern" sound around them.
In a way it makes me feel a bit agressive or lets say a bit sad and that means nothing bad at all, cause it sounds like a question about thinkings and feelings on the modern "thinking" (maybe evil) mashines ......
I enjoyed the listen and i will sure listen to it again when you think you had finished it realy and post it here on looperman.
Raw as fuck bro. I love the drum progression. I'm all about unique percussion samples. I used only sampled sounds from an artillery and gun range to make the drum tracks for one of my most popular trax. This track reminds me a bit of my song but ticks/toks vs Clicks/clacks
Love the build at 2:00. This is definatly different AFTER 2:00 it gets almost heavy rock influenced I can totally hear an electric guitar screaming over this track man you should see if you can get someone to to that for you :)
Wow man, this is really cool, I love the "not so heavy" vibe that i'm not used to hearing! One thing that I would change is some extra basses in the drop and a big of sidechain compression to make the drums stand out a bit more. Other than that, awesome remix and good luck on the competition!
Like others have said, it can use a little improvement. It's good, but I have confidence that you can make it better.
I think the main thing for me is bringing the snare levels up just a touch.
The drops are okay, but they kind of fizzle out. Maybe use some crash and impacts, or downrisers to really make them hit.
The basslines are good, but a sub bassline would add that full bottom end to it, making it a bigger, richer overall sound.
The background percussion bits are good. They help fill in the spaces well, and the reverb on them works well.
The emotion of the music fits the vocals well. I think maybe a touch of EQ on the vocals just to brighten them up a little.
The panning is good.
Like I said, this is good. Just a little bit of minor improvements and it could be a lot better. Of course, these are just my opinions, so take them for what they're worth.
Good edit of the fantastic acapella from Charlie Green.
Mixing wise(hats are way too loud) you could make a few things differently but you will get there with time.
I hope you had a good time doing this one.
Regards
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Bleep
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I'll be right here. I'm glad you like it!
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This track has a lot of potential, please don’t be put off by this, but I do believe the intro 1,05 minute is to long you should start the track little sooner then that.
I am looking forward to the update I am sure it will be great.
Well done.
Jamid
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(y u no let me download T_T)
So ill talk about the mix now that ive listened to it on my studio setup.
The clicks, while a major part of the song i feel are little too far forward in the mix, they stick out just a bit too much.
and the bass has more going on the low end than your average dubstep track.
not a bad thing necessarily, thats just what i noticed
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Cru
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I really liked the part from 2:00 to 3:40. Awesome bass line.
With all good wishes
The LieDie
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This percussions like drums sounds so 80´s (just 4 me) and they fit so good to the "modern" sound around them.
In a way it makes me feel a bit agressive or lets say a bit sad and that means nothing bad at all, cause it sounds like a question about thinkings and feelings on the modern "thinking" (maybe evil) mashines ......
I enjoyed the listen and i will sure listen to it again when you think you had finished it realy and post it here on looperman.
stay tuned
joe
Thanks for the feedback! I always love your comments! I kind of had the idea of a machine angry at its creators on this one. Thanks again!
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Good Shite.
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I think the main thing for me is bringing the snare levels up just a touch.
The drops are okay, but they kind of fizzle out. Maybe use some crash and impacts, or downrisers to really make them hit.
The basslines are good, but a sub bassline would add that full bottom end to it, making it a bigger, richer overall sound.
The background percussion bits are good. They help fill in the spaces well, and the reverb on them works well.
The emotion of the music fits the vocals well. I think maybe a touch of EQ on the vocals just to brighten them up a little.
The panning is good.
Like I said, this is good. Just a little bit of minor improvements and it could be a lot better. Of course, these are just my opinions, so take them for what they're worth.
Take care.
V.
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Mixing wise(hats are way too loud) you could make a few things differently but you will get there with time.
I hope you had a good time doing this one.
Regards
Nice one
Nelson