Hi. I think the length of this melody is not fine.
I've felt at the end of the melody that that was only the beginning and I won't tell you how many times I've listen to your song before coming now on-line to Looperman...maybe you could say I'm a fan of your music...cause, I guess that's what a fan does..put on repeat what he or she likes (for sure that's what I've done today).
I wait, patient, for the whole song to be upload here..and maybe it will be available for download... :) regards
Thanks for being a fan and for listening so many times.
I think the track being this long is good but I have many parts other parts that I have already composed but not yet finished.
So I will add those to it and you will get your wish for it to be longer.
Thanks for waiting patiently but I won't be making it available for download here. Not until it comes out on my blues album...
I see you have here different melodies in different genres.
I hope I'll listen to them soon cause you seem to be such a protean composer. My admiration. Rap is something I'm not an expert, but again, I'm no expert in general :)) but, this sounds as I recall rap should sound, and this orchestration has a come here feeling.
Hello again. I've read your profile description before listening to your music. The "About me" section it's very amusing while it has this feeling of gravity.
About this melody, I sure did enjoy listening to it.
I liked the rhythm in it.
hello and sorry for the late reply, i just saw that right now. i'm thankful that you share your experience here and of course it is even better to learn that you enjoyed the music as well as my 100% serious and authentic "about me" section. ;)
oups, I'm in a very big state of surprise. My admiration towards your skills is at very high points!
I am surprise to see only one comment bellow this track.
It's superb!!!
your words are very well received here my friend.
a surprise this old composition.
I might try again a re-upload
Thank you for listening this song, and leave your comments.
beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, creative! enjoyable and playful and a tender atmosphere you've created..like a nice walk on the beach around sunset ..
I was wrapped and unwrapped and again wrapped by your song while listening to it. I like the percussion and the flute.
I want more! - like to continue and continue .............
relaxing, creative, intriguing, intense, haunting.
I liked how the piano starts "moving" around 1.08 min.
2.40 min gives another perspective of the melody.
honestly, I think there are many stories one can imagine while listen to this track. Your song is, how to say, artistic - I don't know if I am "politically correct" but I hope you'll understand my idea that your song is a piece of art.
very nice the lingering flutes in the end + the combination with bells.
many thnx for your kind words in review OxygenFree. definitelY reading such an explanation(piece of art)is nice for all of ours & your commenT -especiallY according to U(defenitelY) have heared many traX with afro flutes(according to where your country is located)- makes me think I've succeeded about usage of those flutes which i've never seen & I'm gratefull.appreciations & best wishes.__Behnam
hello. at the beginning of your track the mix of your loops is not so cunning and that is "heardable"(while playing the song with my headphone). in the right ear the sound is too loud, in my opinion. 0.22 second is disturbing. the second bridge is very beautiful.
Hello
you might be right !
generally i don't know and don't care about mix and mastering too much !
currently my focus is on my composing skill and
electric guitar playing , but i should learn mix later ..
i respect and appreciate your comment .
:)
thank you much much for listening and for you dropped
these words in my box .
JJWeekz, ah, now I feel bad. You're attempt is far more impressive than mine! But I took my chance and did something with your great, great vocals! Good that I didn't listen to your track earlier cause it would have been discouraging for me...
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I've felt at the end of the melody that that was only the beginning and I won't tell you how many times I've listen to your song before coming now on-line to Looperman...maybe you could say I'm a fan of your music...cause, I guess that's what a fan does..put on repeat what he or she likes (for sure that's what I've done today).
I wait, patient, for the whole song to be upload here..and maybe it will be available for download... :) regards
I think the track being this long is good but I have many parts other parts that I have already composed but not yet finished.
So I will add those to it and you will get your wish for it to be longer.
Thanks for waiting patiently but I won't be making it available for download here. Not until it comes out on my blues album...
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About this melody, I sure did enjoy listening to it.
I liked the rhythm in it.
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I am surprise to see only one comment bellow this track.
It's superb!!!
a surprise this old composition.
I might try again a re-upload
Thank you for listening this song, and leave your comments.
All the best
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I liked how the piano starts "moving" around 1.08 min.
2.40 min gives another perspective of the melody.
honestly, I think there are many stories one can imagine while listen to this track. Your song is, how to say, artistic - I don't know if I am "politically correct" but I hope you'll understand my idea that your song is a piece of art.
very nice the lingering flutes in the end + the combination with bells.
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you might be right !
generally i don't know and don't care about mix and mastering too much !
currently my focus is on my composing skill and
electric guitar playing , but i should learn mix later ..
i respect and appreciate your comment .
:)
thank you much much for listening and for you dropped
these words in my box .
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