Fabulous use of loops, and the vocals ( even with cold) were absolutley haunting and brilliant. Just one spot at around 0.44 where the loop v vocals just needs a bit of smoothing. Cant wait to hear your next. Well done.
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Hello.
what a good to see you have paid attention.
i really appreciate such comment.
just you mean I should soften my voice at around 0.44 ?
or is there something heterogeneous and
disharmonic in music too ?
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Once again a beautiful piece of work my friend, piano, guitar and strings blending so well and from start to finish you had me hooked. Chill out at its very best and thanks for bringing a big smile to my face.
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Mark/Larry!
This is a real nice sound and you have the potential of a great track here. the mix is disjointed at times but with remixing and additions (beats, percussion and maybe vocals)you will have a winner. Would be glad to help in anyway I can. A good effort whatever though, well done.
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Thank you Mark! I know, it's not perfect despite my best efforts. Actually so many people wrote me that this one is really need a vocal, so i think i will try to find a singer, then make some rebalance... i dont know how to start it, but think i will make a post on the forum, and will see.
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SUPERB! love the guitar and the horn, really does fit together nicely, and I liked the whole feel of it, though wish it could have been longer. If I was to change anything, I would just add a little more percussion and maybe an electo piano break to compliment the guitar, now that's just me tinkering there is really nothing wrong with this as it stands, and hope you don't mind me mentioning it. A really good piece of music and going to be a fav.
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Larry!
Thanks for commenting and also positive feedback. Comments are always welcome!
I totally agree. I Also would like to bring back the horn at the end of the song.
Let's see what's happening.
Hey, this is a real nice track, love the retro feel and putting a some Hammond organ in there could add to this..good guitar work too.
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Hi,
some good guitar playing going on here, some distortion which most of the others have covered. I think if you re-did this and cleaned it, there is a lot of potential to develop this into a really good track and I would certainly be interested in working on it. Good work so far.
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Mark/Larry1
Hi, Sounding good through the speakers and I think you are on a winner here, vocals good and the whole track has a great vibe, just a couple of small things, between 0.48 and 1.00 could be built a little more and the addition of extra percussion as the track progresses would further enhance the sound, just my view. Still very much a banging tune and a big like, well done.
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Mark/Larry!
Yes, I agree about the build up - it needs some more impact so I'm going to continue working on the mix.
Thanks for the advice and for listening!
Cool to hear that it's to your liking.
Hi Orlando,
Have listened three times now, and nailed, well and truly are the words that spring to mind, you have not compromised the original track in any way, and the violins and piano sit and blend so well, if any critique, just the change at 2.37 is maybe a bit sharp, but that is fleeting and probably just me and it didn't ruin my enjoyment of the track at all. Great job Orlando and can I have your recipe!! oh and no need to worry about the great Ian Anderson, I believe he is a pussycat these days!!
Very best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
Hi Mark,
I always look forward reading your honest comments, so welcome again mate:) You have very good ear, but you will have to talk to Ed about 2.37 sharpness over left chanel. It didn't disturb me personaly, on the contrary, I pretty much liked it, so I took no steps to possibly lower it in the mix as is the case with entire original.Everything is intact and the basic track is presented within it's original mix. Maybe the only critical point to me is at around 1:42 (that one goes on my account),where the change appears to be a bit clumsy. I was tempting to correct it, quite a few times, but in the end of the day I kinda liked it and I said to myself that every decent artwork has to have it's dubious spot.:)I think even Ian Anderson would agree, about whom you might be right...he must have become more humble in his ageing times.:)
So, thanks alot again for positive thoughts, my friend, and see you around soon..
A real good first trance attempt, good start and builds, just a couple of small points, thought the beat could have done with a few more drops and the end was slightly disappointing after the good start and builds. Still a great job though and a fav.
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Mark/Larry
Thanks Larry for the input and taking the time to listen to the whole track. The end is nothing to write home about :) Maybe in a few days i will go back to it and rewrite the ending.
Hi, from 3.50 the echo effect spoils it for me, but that may be just me. I would see if anyone else picks up on it before you take it out. Its still a good effort and well done.
Thanks,
Mark/Larry!
OK, Sounds good. Thanks for commenting. I love when people comment, weather its good or bad, because no matter which one it is, its always constructive.
Great start and build, this is a really good base for what could be a great track, the drum is a bit too loud but can be easily sorted. As Danke says a vocals would make this an absolute winner.
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Its a really nice track, just a few spoilers, the heavy warp synth was a bit overbearing at times, the beat was a tad to loud in places, and the balance at the end just came adrift slightly, just my opinion and meant as constructive. Nicely put together overall and a good effort.
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Mark/Larry!
Thanks. This is my first try for this style of music. And. Where you said the balance at the end, Did you mean the very end? If so that is an echo effect that i added on. If you like it better without it, I can take it off.
A big like, you have managed to create such a good track by having the different styles in there, but it is seamless and works so well. great work.
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just awesome my friend, start to finish it had me, I love all genres of music, but trance/euphoria styles are a big fav of mine. You had everything in there for a dream trance track. a massive well done and many thanks for sharing.
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Mark/Larry!
Awesome, absolutely loved it, liking the soft break in the middle then back in hard and heavy with a brilliant finish. Well done!
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Mark/Larry!
Hang on a minute while I put the air guitar down!..out of this world mate,7.27 of sheer bliss. So many variations and I think there was a bit of Hendrix in there. Above all you summed up in thise track the mood and message you are trying to get across. A big well done!
With great respect,
Mark/Larry!
Brilliant work, chill out with energy, great sax, builds with some real 70's vibes running through ( and I mean that with respect) I could almost have been back at the turntables!! I LOVED IT.
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Mark/Larry!
A real good track, the sax is awesome, just a couple of small points, vocals were a little drowned at times and the brilliant break at around 1.38 could have been built on again towards the end, but a really enjoyable and well put together track...a big like from me.
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Really good job, loved the lazy beat all the way through, gorgeous acapella, sax maybe a little loud in one or two places but a really really nice track.
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Hello.
what a good to see you have paid attention.
i really appreciate such comment.
just you mean I should soften my voice at around 0.44 ?
or is there something heterogeneous and
disharmonic in music too ?
(ps:this comment belongs to 2 persons?)
thank you very much for feedback.
:)
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Once again a beautiful piece of work my friend, piano, guitar and strings blending so well and from start to finish you had me hooked. Chill out at its very best and thanks for bringing a big smile to my face.
Very best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
Your comments are always most welcome!:)I'm so glad you liked it alot. I'm sure this one would be nice for your loopradio transmissions.:)
Thanks and all the best___Orlando
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SUPERB! love the guitar and the horn, really does fit together nicely, and I liked the whole feel of it, though wish it could have been longer. If I was to change anything, I would just add a little more percussion and maybe an electo piano break to compliment the guitar, now that's just me tinkering there is really nothing wrong with this as it stands, and hope you don't mind me mentioning it. A really good piece of music and going to be a fav.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
Thanks for commenting and also positive feedback. Comments are always welcome!
I totally agree. I Also would like to bring back the horn at the end of the song.
Let's see what's happening.
Cheers, Anders.
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some good guitar playing going on here, some distortion which most of the others have covered. I think if you re-did this and cleaned it, there is a lot of potential to develop this into a really good track and I would certainly be interested in working on it. Good work so far.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry1
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Mark/Larry!
Yes, I agree about the build up - it needs some more impact so I'm going to continue working on the mix.
Thanks for the advice and for listening!
Cool to hear that it's to your liking.
Cheers /SJ =)
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Have listened three times now, and nailed, well and truly are the words that spring to mind, you have not compromised the original track in any way, and the violins and piano sit and blend so well, if any critique, just the change at 2.37 is maybe a bit sharp, but that is fleeting and probably just me and it didn't ruin my enjoyment of the track at all. Great job Orlando and can I have your recipe!! oh and no need to worry about the great Ian Anderson, I believe he is a pussycat these days!!
Very best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
I always look forward reading your honest comments, so welcome again mate:) You have very good ear, but you will have to talk to Ed about 2.37 sharpness over left chanel. It didn't disturb me personaly, on the contrary, I pretty much liked it, so I took no steps to possibly lower it in the mix as is the case with entire original.Everything is intact and the basic track is presented within it's original mix. Maybe the only critical point to me is at around 1:42 (that one goes on my account),where the change appears to be a bit clumsy. I was tempting to correct it, quite a few times, but in the end of the day I kinda liked it and I said to myself that every decent artwork has to have it's dubious spot.:)I think even Ian Anderson would agree, about whom you might be right...he must have become more humble in his ageing times.:)
So, thanks alot again for positive thoughts, my friend, and see you around soon..
Orlando
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